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Published: 2018-01-09 04:36:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 10560; Favourites: 259; Downloads: 179
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Someone really likes Futaba... I had a lot of fun with this one, practiced with new shading techniques and I think I'm getting better overall but I'd like to be critiqued so I can fix whatever I'm doing wrong, I would appreciate some words of wisdom to improve even more. (I know my backgrounds suck)Related content
Comments: 13
I think Futaba's expression is my favorite part of this one.
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I like how the green background contrasts with futabas black outfit and hair, plus there nothing better than some midriff
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I hope the green doesn't hurt your eyes.
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There's always something that could be done better, but thank you.
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If you had to push me to nitpick..
The navel should look less like a circular mini-abyss and more like an oval, with less depth?
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The chest is not properly aligned with the abdomen... Shading on her right breast makes look higher on her body the other one. I guess I rushed it a bit.
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Eh, even that was pushing it as far as I possibly could, but it did catch my attention on the second viewing.
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You're welcome!
How much are your commissions going for?
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