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“You’re a guy?!”, Chinmay exclaimed loudly jerking his head up in disbelief. The smaller horse cocked an eyebrow in confusion and took a step away from the seemingly weird stallion. “But you’re supposed to be my dream mare how can you be a guy?”, Chinmay rambled on dramatically mostly speaking to himself. He didn’t get it, the feeling he got when he saw her… well him was so out of this world. He was sure this would be her. “Look I’m sorry but as you can see I’m not a mare so maybe you could back off a little”, the stallion said with a voice that was slightly curt. He probably wasn’t too happy with being taken for a mare. “Yes I can see that”, Chinmay snapped back at him not very polite himself and not backing up either. The stallion looked at him with irritation but then turned around, not looking for a fight. “Wait! Do you maybe have a sister or something?”, Chinmay asked immediately blocking his was again. “No I don’t have any siblings. Now can I just-“, the stallion got cut off as he tried to get past this crazy taller stallion. “Any cousins?”, Chinmay tried again with a desperate smile on his face. “No. Now please just let me go”, the stallion looked at Chinmay sternly but still Chinmay didn’t budge. “Well there must be something about you, I wouldn’t be drawn to you for no reason”, he said letting his eyes wander over the stallion’s body. “Now look here! I am not interested in guys and most certainly not in you so just leave me alone”, the stallion raised his voice with a slight blush from the other stallion’s eyes upon him. “Well I’m normally not into guys either but still here you are all stallion like and you can’t change destiny”, Chinmay replied dead serious about the destiny part. “Oh my God you are seriously crazy”, the stallion snorted but was actually kind of freaking out from the other stallion’s intensity. “Well destiny can be crazy”, Chinmay retorted determined now that this smaller stallion was his fated other. The stallion didn’t even have a reply for that and just stood there bewildered of what was happening. “So what’s your name? I think we should know a little more about each other if we’re going to spend eternity together. My name’s Chinmay”, the tall stallion introduced himself already totally fine with the change of events. He couldn’t disagree with his dreams now could he? The smaller stallion on the other hand just looked at him as if he was some kind of sociopath and tried to back away slowly. Chinmay tilted his head to the side with a curious smile waiting for a reply. The stallion sighed deeply and then raised his head slightly. “If I tell you will you leave me alone?”, he suggested without much hope. “Nope but I’d still like to know anyway”, Chinmay replied instantly. “… Chintya”, the stallion replied after a long pause seriously over thinking the opportunity of making a run for it. Chinmay perked up immediately having gotten his way. “See even our names seem to match”, he said happily not realizing the stallion’s discomfort at all. The stallion was about to say something but refrained when he saw Chinmay giving him the strangest of looks. “There something off about you”, Chinmay told him with a frown. “Something off about me?! If anyone here is off it’s you!”, Chintya snapped back in a higher pitched voice. “Well you’re not all horse are you?”, Chinmay replied with a raised eyebrow. “No I’m actually part whale but don’t tell anyone”, the small stallion retorted sarcastically. Though there was a hint of hesitation before he spoke. Chinmay never really understood sarcasm so he looked and Chintya in confusion before he spoke again. “I was talking about something else… I mean I for one am a demon and you give off a vibe being something else as well I just can’t put my hoof on it”, Chinmay told him just very casually dropping the fact that he was a demon. He didn’t quite seem to realize that it wasn’t exactly normal or believable for that matter. “Yes of course and I’m the boogie man”, the sarcastic stallion replied again. Chinmay now kind of understood that he meant disbelief with that sentence so he wasted no time in proving himself. He closed his eyes and when he opened them again they were pitch black and he pulled up his lips in a sharp toothed grin. Chintya’s expression changed from condescending to sheer horror as the stallion changed appearance. He stood there frozen not comprehending the situation he’d found himself in. Meanwhile Chinmay had turned back to normal and looked at Chintya curiously. He didn’t understand why he looked so scared. “Don’t worry it’s not like I’m going to eat you”, he chuckled and lifted his eyebrows. This really wasn’t going the way he had planned. The small stallion still didn’t spoke so Chinmay just continued the conversation on his own. “So well that’s me but you’re something else. You have any ideas yourself?”, he asked him waiting patiently for Chintya to find his voice again. The stallion raised his head slowly and then his expression turned determined and he took a deep breath. “Okay so this has been lovely but I’m really going to go now”, he told Chinmay in a steady voice and started to walk away. Chinmay’s face fell and he quickly followed his newfound companion. He wasn’t going to let him go that easy. He might not be his dream mare and he wasn't sweet nor cute. As a matter of fact he was downright grouchy and had an attitude but there was something undeniably compelling about him.”Hey wait up!”, he called after him with a smile. And so the chase began…

To be continued...

Yes his dream mare turned out to be a stallion I don't know if I mentioned it before but this story is supposed to be funny not very serious. Well it does have a decent storyline altogether but I do know Chinmay can be a little silly. But that's exactly why I love him, he's just such an oddball And there were actually two of you who guessed right so cookies for *EternalStarTrail and ~NaporieRizia

I do hope this could at least make you giggle a bit. I'll get working on the next part soon! I don't know for some reason I'm very motivated to draw this whole story in one go so you will see this story a LOT. I hope you won't mind and maybe even appreciate when I actually finish one of my stories for a change xD

Also a bit of explanation of things that might seem a bit weird with the story. First Chinmay is just odd, he very much believes so in faith and destiny so that's why he's pretty quickly okay with Chintya being a guy. He's also not been on earth for years so he's kind off rusty on his social skills. Chintya well he's just freaked out but that's actually very understandable seeing what he's dealing with Chinmay doesn't give up though. He'll be trying to win Chintya's heart in the next parts and continue his investigations on what kind of supernatural being Chintya could be. Oh and yeah Chinmay's able to sense supernatural creatures, not sure if I mentioned that

Hope you like it!

Chinmay, Chintya & Art: Me *Paardjee
Pose References: Mark J. Barrett.
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Comments: 21

Blockbeap [2013-04-19 20:11:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh this part is hilarious!! Chinmay is so determined haha. xD

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Paardjee In reply to Blockbeap [2013-04-21 16:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Haha glad you think it's fun Hoping to keep it an entertaining story c:
And thank you of course!

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Skerppla [2013-04-12 21:19:21 +0000 UTC]

THIS, is an amazing story! I really really want moar!!
I always crave more don't I?...
sorry... you'r just so amazing at.. everything! keep being amazing!
and those two are an amazing parring! ;D

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Paardjee In reply to Skerppla [2013-04-14 21:47:14 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad to hear that!
Thank you so much! I'm going to get started on the new part soon!

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Crystal-Cinders [2013-04-12 21:05:00 +0000 UTC]

Haha! What a surprise! It looks so much like a mare though
I think Chinmay is one lucky guy though And your story is absolutely brilliant! <3 I love reading them

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Paardjee In reply to Crystal-Cinders [2013-04-14 21:46:24 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah not many people would have thought this
I'm glad you like the twist though And thank you very much for the lovely comment hunnie!
I'm working on another piece now but after that it's gonna be a new part for this story

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Ember-24 [2013-04-11 23:20:21 +0000 UTC]

Awwww so cute! I just looked at the picture

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Paardjee In reply to Ember-24 [2013-04-12 17:20:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Ember-24 In reply to Paardjee [2013-04-12 22:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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EternalStarTrail [2013-04-10 03:43:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh Chinmay....You are just adorable and awsome all rolled into one XD Feel kidna bad for Chintya now though.. he's really freaked out by the meeting.. He'll get use to Chinmay eventually I hope lol.
Gorgeous job once again sweetie, I love the expressions!

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Paardjee In reply to EternalStarTrail [2013-04-10 22:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Isn't he? I just love him cause he's so different and odd
And yeah Chintya isn't all too happy about xD But he's gonna have to get used to Chinmay cause he ain't letting him out of his sight
And thank you very much hunnie!

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EternalStarTrail In reply to Paardjee [2013-04-11 04:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Yeah its definately the kind of different that makes him so endearing and lovable ^^
XD Poor boy... Hopefully the adjustment will be smooth and quick... dont wanna see them get into any kid of fight or anything...
You are very welcome ^^

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NaporieRizia [2013-04-09 22:37:25 +0000 UTC]

I KNEW IT!!!!!!
Dang and to think I almost didn't give ya the answer too. It came to my mind right away, and I'm always the one to discard my first thoughts thinking they are just too obvious.
I'm so glad I was right though because now I get cookies!
NOMNOMNOMNOMNOM!

Dang this is so darn cute too! I love it! The picture and the story are both just awesome! Also, I love how Chinmay's eyes are kinda two-toned here. Is it because he's going back to normal eyes or something? Whatever reason, they look awesome.
And he is just far too cute! I have to agree with imke, I was gone the moment he made the comment on the whale. LOVE

I can't wait to see more. I have to see what Chintya is!

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Paardjee In reply to NaporieRizia [2013-04-10 22:03:18 +0000 UTC]

YES YOU DID!
Haha first thoughts aren't always wrong it seems xD

But thank you very much hunnie! I'm really glad you like it And Chinmay's eyes are actually just two toned And yeah Chintya is one sarcastic stally xD

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NaporieRizia In reply to Paardjee [2013-04-10 23:09:42 +0000 UTC]

I guess they aren't.

Oh really? They're always like that? Well, they are just as awesome as they can get!
You're welcome.

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BloodBriar [2013-04-09 21:00:57 +0000 UTC]

such gorgeous boys,shading and landscaping X),Amazing job!story is cool too

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Paardjee In reply to BloodBriar [2013-04-10 22:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it

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jannaphia [2013-04-09 18:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, okay I didn't expect that
But damn, he IS pretty. And he's got such a pretty name But seriously “No I’m actually part whale but don’t tell anyone” xD I love him already
And poor Chinmay looks so confused

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Paardjee In reply to jannaphia [2013-04-10 22:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Glad it took you by surprise
Isn't he? I could never call him handsome he's just pretty xD
But thank you so much Chrys!

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imke14 [2013-04-09 13:05:02 +0000 UTC]

Lost it when Chintya said “No I’m actually part whale but don’t tell anyone”. XD
I love that guy XD

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Paardjee In reply to imke14 [2013-04-10 21:58:58 +0000 UTC]

Haha ja hij lekker sarcastisch, daar hou ik altijd wel van xD

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