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Published: 2018-07-18 12:41:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1631; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 3
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Um .....your pretty far from what I have in mind my friend... Like... Really far... Good try thou
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my thoughts exactly to this stupid ass characterΒ
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I wonder why you hate him so much XD
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what do you meanΒ "why"?
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Why did this have to be the result!? D:
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that..is up to my stupidity
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Dawwww!!! I love those expressions that both Judy and Nick have here towards each other. And I love your drawings of Bonnie and Stu. Very nice!!! Though I think GIdeon Grey is going to be sad to see who comes through the door next. XD Great comic!!!
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i added judys ear fold cuz i wanted to show how she went panic to justΒ a bit calm
and bonny and stu was not easy to make since i only referenced her from judy and her big sister..stu..not so much,,
and gideon..well..this is gonna be another waffle comic to say the least
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What is Gideon gonna do?
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Yeah, it is also quite adorable to see her doing that. 
You did a great job on Bonnie and Stu. ^_^
And I'm looking forward to seeing this comic!
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nick knows how to make judy feel alright
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Perhaps Gideon should have tried dating Judy first.
Love the panel with Judy's one ear partly bent.
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oh...this event is gonna be another waffle
she is part shocked and part surprised by the sudden kiss
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I'm sure Gid will marry Judy's sisters or her cousins.Β
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this is more of a waffle story
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ohh yeah...its an old comic in which im sure you have seen
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Sorry don't remember, please remind me ?
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wait that at the end... isn't that Gideon, not Nick?
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yup..that is gideon..and its not gonna end well
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I can imagine that. Like Judy's gonna kick his ass first for having the idea and then Nick's gonna kick his ass for trying at his bunny.
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this is somehow a foreshadow on whats about to happen
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hahahaha maybe I'm a fortune teller? I don't think so but since it's obvious what's gonna happen to Gideon... I can't blame him though. Judy is an appealing bunny
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oh yep... but almost all bunnies have that. Still Judy is exquisite
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Well... time for battle for Judy. Surprised that drew Bonnie and Stu and Gideon in this comic.
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i had some trial and error on how they would be drawn in my style
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How many times did you have to fixed it ?
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3...3 erasures and reworks
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Β So the 3rd time that you had to erase and fox it. Okay, it looks really good to see that you drew Bonnie and Stu(Judy and July parents) and Gideon Grey.
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Adoptive parents, we both know agent 1 is their mom
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Oh yeah, in your universe it is. I do like to see more of them soon.Β
By the way, here is the story:Β
WildeHopps Alternative (Part 3)
Zootopia-WildeHopps AlternativeΒ
Part 3: Rivals
A Saturday afternoon in the Savannah District, where we see two vixens in a supermarket grabbing the groceries for the house. The red vixen wearing silver dress and grey vixen wearing blue t-shirt and dark blue jeans.
Alice: Wow big sis, I canβt believeΒ
Vicki: And I canβt believe as well.
Alice: So are you going to be friends with Loralai?
Vicki: I said βIβll think about itβ.Β
???: Ugh...AHHHH!!!
Alice: What was that?
Vicki: Sounds like someone in trouble!
As they rushed to the scene, they see a dojo, aΒ temple and a formal training place for anyΒ physical training, martial arts, judΕ, aikidΕ, and kendo. The temple has bit of a Japanese traditional feel to it with bamboo trees,Β and ancient, candle lit. Vicki and Alice were completely amazed by it.
Alice: (Surprised) Whoa, a dojo. I never seen a dojo before in Zootopia.
Vicki: WhyΒ . It a work of progress, but I getting to there. Just want to make sure if you think of my story is okay or not.
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hmmm...i felt a bit of anime kind of vibe here...plus some small amount of polishing again in sentencing..
but all in all..still good
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Hmm, anime vibe? What anime did you watch? Kill la Kill, Samurai Jack or something?
Umm, which one do I need to fix?
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well..a lot of it actually..but you can get my point that its too..anime ...
well story wise...like i said before...sentence cleaning
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Okay then.
Well, it kinda hard for me to do because I always doing it. Writing is my weak point because I put ideas on paper. I asked someone to help me with my writing and such.
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Oh noses. This can't possibly go very well
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I feel almost bad for Gideon... he will take a desillusion right in the teeth...
And very well done for Stu, Bonnie and Gideon.
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dont be...cuz its gonna become another waffle comic
and thanks..took me awhile to try and make them in my style
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Waffle comic? In which sense?
They are very well recognizable, especially Stu with his cap.
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ahh..well..im gonna keep that as a surprise
stu was the most diffecult but with the cap,,in which your right made him noticable
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Strange... waffle remind of a snake that Judy own in an AU.
His whole outfit is noticable, Bonnie should have been more difficult to draw wirh you style.
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i just based bonnie out of judy with a more...chunky look..well..she does look like her sister
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You mean the huge bunny that is called her "little" sister?
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Bonnies sister..yes...agent 1
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