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pangjunmin — I miss you revised
Published: 2010-04-11 06:47:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 147; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description I miss you (revised)

I never get to see you anymore
Wishing we were together like before
I noticed that when our hands intertwine
Your finger's fit perfectly between mine
I'd wait forever to see your smile
No matter how long it is worthwhile
Wondering the next time I can see you
Seeing you again is long overdue
Anywhere, anytime, can just call
Wherever you want, even to the mall
All I want to do is see you again
Because without you, everything is plain
Sometimes I think I might as well be blind
Because you're the only one on my mind
I have completely fallen for your charms
Now I'm wishing you were here in my arms
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Comments: 2

Irindel [2010-05-08 06:59:15 +0000 UTC]

When i'm reading it I got a feeling, that the lines don't fit good enough each other as I would expect from a love poem. But I still like it

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pangjunmin In reply to Irindel [2010-05-09 18:43:45 +0000 UTC]

okay, still learning how to write XD

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