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pangjunmin — We can never be
Published: 2010-10-31 21:07:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 250; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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Wiping away that single tearBefore it falls from her face
Embracing her, holding her near
Losing track of both time and space
But I can't take advantage of
The pain of losing her first love
I can only stay close to her
And hope that nothing will occur
I cannot let her fall for me
Because i can already see
That I'd just hurt her in the end
I can't be more than just a friend
A shoulder you can lean on
To be there when everyone's gone
But that's all I can ever be
There can never be "you & me"
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seems to happen alot to people :/ you're on the sending end or the receiving end
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ouch ><
yea, it really really sucks to be on the receiving end. i'm usually the one helping people who get hurt by being on that side, but this time i ended up on the sending one BECAUSE i was helping her get over her initial hurt
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Yeah, it really isn't fun on either end really..
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d'aaww. =< that's sad dude
I loved the rhythm it was very good and steady, and I love the 1st person. it's really good for this particular poem. I think if it was in third person people would probably read it differently yanno? I don't really know how to explain it to be honest, but I think that it is best written like it is.
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aw, that's sad. 
everything looks good, it could be interesting to see how this poem looks in 3rd person.
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