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Published: 2010-07-04 14:25:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Though this is just a letterI'm hoping you'll get better
You know we're all here for you
No matter what; through and through
Even if we're far away
We think of you every day
With us is where you belong
So get better and be strong
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Comments: 7
310508 [2010-07-05 19:05:01 +0000 UTC]
It's very sweet--and very considerate.
You might, however, consider mentioning your love and the love of others.
In troubled times, it's always helped to hear there are those who care,--but moreover, it really does the heart and soul good to hear that someone loves you.
It's human nature. I don't really understand it (I do to an extent, but it's more of a life mystery, really), but it's such a strong word. It could really make quite the difference.
Thank you for writing this for her.
It's quite the piece.
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pangjunmin In reply to 310508 [2010-07-11 13:08:32 +0000 UTC]
very good point thanks for the advice,
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L-E-M [2010-07-05 12:56:21 +0000 UTC]
I really like this, and how sweet of you to write it
I think the wording and everything is fine
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pangjunmin In reply to L-E-M [2010-07-11 13:07:37 +0000 UTC]
thanks ^^ feedback is always appreciated
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IcarryYour-Heart [2010-07-04 18:48:03 +0000 UTC]
I really like it.And I think the words fit just fine
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pangjunmin In reply to IcarryYour-Heart [2010-07-11 13:07:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you ^^
she's breathing on her own now
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