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forbidden lovers!that's all i can say...
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Wickedmonkey77 [2010-12-28 11:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Ahhh... The classic forbidden match
Darkness & light.
Good & evil.
Tainted & pure.
It's an angel an demon love that has been discussed for centuries. Two beings that wish to be together but are forbidden by those they side with. Examples; Romeo & Juliet, Paris & Helen, Tom cruise & nicole Kidman , ect.
It's a good picture and I really like how you used the wings to create a circle effect around the image - similar to ying & yang. Shading is pretty good too. The only thing I see right off the bat is a mistake I made on a manga girl awhile back. Watch the light shimmer on their hair. When doing hair shimmers, it should be uniform to ALL the light sources in your art. Also, her earring is staying in place. Her head is leaning slightly forward but her earring is still in the same place as if her head were looking straight forward with no leaning or tilting. I know you probably already saw a bunch of other issues in your art, all artists see the flaws in their work when others tell them that "it's perfect!".
Keep it up, you've got some good developing skills going.
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papernyok In reply to Wickedmonkey77 [2010-12-29 05:09:48 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much for the critique. (I didnt know that Tom Cruise & Nicole Kidman are a forbidden match. LOL) you're right about the flaws in this sketch... i'll practice more to improve my skills. thanks.
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Wickedmonkey77 In reply to papernyok [2010-12-29 10:53:09 +0000 UTC]
I'll try to get the picture I was talking about posted so you can see I'm not just talking shit. . Keep it trying at it. I was pretty decent at freehand sketch in my teens, then I stopped doing any kind of art for about 10-years. When I tried to do even the simplest sketches after that, I found that I had lost ALOT of ability. Hence, why I say that you have good skills and to keep practicing. If you don't use it...it fades.
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papernyok In reply to Wickedmonkey77 [2011-01-05 05:19:09 +0000 UTC]
yup... like what they always say... practice makes perfect. thanks again for the critique...
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