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Published: 2004-02-17 08:41:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 108
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my first tryout of a portrait.Related content
Comments: 11
Good work, well done pose, but two points to critizise (spelling?): First, the shadow of her nose seems wrong to me, maybe if she had turned her head slightly. Second, I miss some sharpness here, but that could just be me and my tired eyes
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thank you very much for the comment! The point with the shadow of the nose is good. the shadow isn't wrong, but it's disturbing the picture. I'll try to edit in PS and cut this shadow out. yeah and well I also try to make it sharp enough for your tired eyes 
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Looking at the sharpness now, it's good. So it was me.
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the women is very beautiful... and I like the angle but it might be a little to sharp.
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hmmm, thanks for the input. you mean I should unsharpen it maybe a little?
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no, I meant the camera is turned a little to much..
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