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My little plot baby has arrived! c:
*= later on
*I was a mistake between my mother and my father. I know that now. My mother regrets me, and she shall pay.
|| General Info ||
Name: Fawnkit
Prefix-Meaning: Fawn- Her colours reminded her mother of a fawn
Suffix-Meaning: Kit- Traditional prefix for a cat under 6 moons
Gender: Female
Age: Kitten
Birth-season: Greenleaf
Birthday: July ???
Birth-clan: Willowclan
|| Clan Info ||
Clan: Willowclan
Loyalty: 3/5
Rank: Kit
Past Ranks: Kit,
Belief in Starclan: 2/5 Thoughts: I have no real proof that they exist. Only from what my mother and siblings tell me, who I don't really trust.
|| Clan Info (Continued)/Education ||
Mentor(s): None
Apprentice(s): None
Education Level: 1/5
|| Appearance ||Physical Description: A beautiful biege tabby with a fluffy coat and blue eyes.
Build: Still a kitten
Colouration:
Fur: Biege
Eyes: Blue
Pawpads: Pink
Scars: None
Disabilites: None
Extra: sOOO FLUFFY
|| Family ||Mother: Petalpond
Father: ??? (Puddlefoot)
Siblings: Goldenkit, Rainkit, Streamkit, Leafkit
Maternal Side:
Grandmother: Bloomingsoul
Grandfather: Shreddedheart
Aunts: Rosekit
Uncles: None
Paternal Side:
Grandmother: Applebranch
Grandfather: Mottlefang
Aunts: None
Uncles: Rainpaw
Mate: No
Past Mates: No
Offspring: nO
|| Sexual Info ||Orientation/Sexuality: Heterosexual
Preferences: No
Current Attractions: None
Past Attractions: Nope
Status: Single bby
|| Personality || Positive
{Calm}{Polite/Formal}{Headstrong}
Neutral
{*Intelligent}{Stubborn}{*Persuasive/Manipulating}
Negative
{Grudge-Holder}{Tempermental}{Untrusting/forgiving}
Detailed Description:
A calm and formal cat when you meet her, Fawnkit can seem innocent and not at all unnerving. But Fawnkit is intelligent and knows how to get under your skin if she "studies" you long enough, by getting to know you. Fawnkit is headstrong and knows what she wants, and is stubborn like her mother if she doesn't get it. But she is persuasive and manipulating and smart and can usually work you over. But if you don't, she is tempermental, grudge-holding and unforgiving, so you might have to work out the odds.
Trivia:
- Be scared of her
- Will probably never forgive her mother
- Like Hollyleaf in alot of ways
- Her themesong is "I'm not the one" by 3OH!3
- If she went to Hogwarts she would be in Slytherin
- If she was in a Faction she would be in Erudite
Likes: A
Dislikes: A
Fears:
Huge Fear
Neutral Fear
Minor Fear
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|| History ||
Kit-hood:
Born to Petalpond and Puddlefoot in an accidental litter, Fawnkit never trusted her mother, and never knew her father. But she plans to find out...
Apprentice-hood:
No
Adult-hood:
No
|| Relationships ||
- Just Met/Unsure
- Fear
Terrified/Petrified
Small Crush
Average Crush
Huge Crush
- Love,Minor,Romantic
- Love,Fully,Romantic
- Love,Obsession,Romantic
- Love,Platonic/Family Love
-Mate
-Respect
-Idol
-Deepest of Depths Respect
- Aquantice
- Friend
- Close Friend
- Best friend
- Family
- Close Family
- Adoptive Family
- Dislike/Bad Impression
- Hate
- Loathe
- Want Dead
- Dead
| LindenClan |
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| Birchclan |
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| Pineclan |
:bullet :
| Willowclan |
|| Roleplay Info ||
Yes
No
Comments: Yes! Most preferable to me :>
Notes: Okay.
Other: ;D
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Comments: 46
Looks like you're my apprentice! Care to have a roleplay with me?
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Would you like to start, or me?
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Drizzlegem made her way out of the den and stretched. It was her very first day as a mentor, and she wanted to get started. It was so early however, the sun hadn't risen yet, but some cats where starting to wake up and get ready for the dawn patrol. The she cat trotted over to the apprentice den and poked her head in. Her bright eyes looked about until she spotted the small shape of her little apprentice. "Pst. Pst, Fawnpaw, time for your first day of training." She called out silently, not wanting to wake the other young apprentices.
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Fawnpaw had already been awake, but she had pretended to be asleep. She had watched through almost closed eyes as her siblings had got up and left the den for training. How pathetic was it that her mentor had came later than her siblings. Other apprentices sleep, but she didn't really care. She poked open an eye and pretended to yawn. "Oh, hello, Drizzlegem." she commented as she approached her new mentor.
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The molly smiled and ducked out of the den and waiting for her apprentice. Once she was out of the den, her grin only grew. "Bet you're exited to start! Wanna guess what we're going to do today?" Drizzlegem smiled, standing up and stretching a bit, her back arching and her fur standing on end.
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Fawnpaw considered her calmly. Energetic, she seemed like. Playful and happy. Just greaaat for when she was in a bad mood. Greaat. She twitched her whiskers slightly. "Hmm.. Hunting? Patroling? Learning to fight?" a dangerous light crept into her eyes at the last sentance, and her teeth flashed maliciously.
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"Nope nope and nope again!" She smiled and made her way towards the camp entrance. The molly looked down at her apprentice with a great big grin. "Today, we are going to bond! I know most mentors go right into the training, but I think bonding is important as well! I don't just want to be your mentor Fawnpaw, I also want to be your friend. And as a friend, I want you to feel comfortable with me." She chuckled, trotting along with her short stubbed tail raised high. "And if we have a good time, we may practice some swimming as well!"
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Anger lit up in Fawnpaw, and she tried really hard to hide it. Bonding? Bonding?! Bonding was so STUPID! Why not just learn to fight- to kill? It was so much better than stupid BONDING! She growled under her breath, and a taut line came onto her mouth. Then she tried to smile. "Fine," she tried to sound happy, but anger cracked through her voice.
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Drizzlegem stopped, her body still for a moment. The molly turned her eyes back to her apprentice, looking a little worried now. "Fawnpaw, is something wrong? If you would like to do something else, you can just ask. It is your first day of training, so I just want it to be as fun and memorable as it can be." She tried to smile, but she could tell the young apprentice was upset at something.
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Fawnpaw shrugged, and in that moment however much she didn't want it to, anger sparked like fire in her eyes. Then she looked back up at her mentor, slight annoyance on her face. "Well... I was reallly hoping to learn how to fight..." she said, then added on impulsively, "And to kill." she licked her lips with her tounge.
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The molly watched her apprentice before licking her ear. "Alright. I'll tech you how to fight. But killing wont be often... You should never kill any cat unless they are trying to kill you and will not stop... Killing moves are only ever used on fox and badger... Come on." Drizzlegem turned away and made her way towards the trailing hollow, her stub of a tail twitching.
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Fawnpaw shrugged, but was excited. She was going to learn how to kill! It would be so fun.. Her mentor had seemed very doubtful about this, but she didn't care. She followed her mentor excitedly, a mean glint in her eye.
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Once in the training hollow, Drizzlegem stood up straight, her head held high. She looked down at her apprentice for a moment, before taking a deep breath and closing her eyes. "You want to learn how to kill? Fine. But first you need to learn how to fight. Attack me, with NO claws. If I feel claws on my pelt, you will be cleaning everyone's nest, picking fleas and ticks out of the elders coat, and going on pray sorting duty for a half moon."
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Fawnpaw nodded eagerly. Those chores sounded disgusting and revolting, so no matter how much she wanted to use her claws and see blood pouring... She couldn't. She and her mentor circled eachother for a couple of seconds, before with a scream she slid under Drizzlegem's belly, being smaller than her and able to fit, forcing herself to use no claws, pawed her belly all the way until she reached the tail, then she jumped out from under her. "There, your insides just poured out. Do I win?" she asked smugly.
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Drizzlegem just stood there, her tail twitching before she sat down and sighed. "One, you are smaller, but slow. Two, one strike at the belly will not have your guts pour out. It will however, get past your fur and scrape the skin. Lastly, when going under an attacker, it is best that you swipe at the legs to knock them over." The molly licked her belly fur, feeling only a little sore from the young cats strikes. "Oh, and seeing as you are so young, your attacks are weak at best. Now, this time, try and confuse me first, face me head on, alright?"
( Also, give me a chance to strike back, say something like, "Aimed to hit her in the snout..." To give me room to block, or decide to let you hit me. )
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(oooh okay!)
Fawnpaw pouted as she learned that the guts wouldn't pour out. That was slightly dissapointing, but oh well. But she made a mental reminder to go for the legs next time. Then she nodded. She stood up, and pretended to go for the left, and taking a swipe and nearly missing, then as she landed on the right, jumped towards her mentor with a yowl.
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The molly dodged the swipe, but was taken down by her apprentice when she charged her. Now on her back, the she cat used her back legs to grab the she kits back paws and dug her claws into her feet, but without hurting her and curled her paws towards her face, her forearms protecting her face from any swipes. She also lowered her chin until her nose was against her chest fur, making it harder for her apprentice to get a face blow with her front paws, and made it impossible for her to use her back paws. In this defensive position, she spoke out. "Aim for my shoulders and chest when I am like this! Not the face!"
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Fawnpaw growled when the older cat's back claws dug into her, and was tempted to bring out her claws and hurt the she-cat, even though she wasn't even hurting her. It was instinctive- and that was supposed to be good- right? She nodded and looked down at Drizzlegem's chest, and was tempted to take out her claws and tear it open. But she would be exiled from the clan for doing that. Too bad. She decided to go for the safer route and lightly dragged her paw across the molly's right shoulder.
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She noted the she cats movements before she tensed her back legs before kicking off the apprentice and standing up right. Drizzlegem shook out her fur before stepping to her apprentice's side. "Now, I want you to tell me that I did to protect myself. This is a quiz."
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Fawnpaw gasped as the bigger warrior kicked her off. She flew through the air but managed, barely, to land on her feet. She growled under her breath, so Drizzlegem couldn't hear. She stood up fully, and stared at Drizzlegem. "You used your front paws to protect your face, which was good, but that also exposed your chest. But as I went for the swipe, you kicked me off."
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She smiled and licked her now slightly sore arm. "Very good. Now, if I had a tail, I could have curled it over my chest to protect that. I would have also used my tail to protect my stomach instead of gripping at your back legs like I did." She smiled and watched her apprentice closely. "Now, I want you to mimic what I did, so I can see how your defensive curl is."
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Fawnpaw nodded. Good. She had said the correct thing, and she was happy. She then went onto her back, and mimicked what her mentor, Drizzlegem, had done. She looked up at her expenctedly. "Like this?" she asked.
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Drizzlegem stepped over and curled the she cats tail between her legs and in a coil around her chest and stomach. She than pushed the she cats paws slightly away from her face and spread her back legs a little. "Make sure you are stiff, but you keep your neck lax."
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Fawnpaw felt uncomfortable as Drizzlegem moved her, but she remained still and let the other warrior move her. She felt awkward after Drizzlegem had moved her, but she had to learn to be comfortable. Then as she tried stiffening, she felt alot better. She grinned. "Thanks."
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With a smile, the molly stepped away before sitting down. "Now, can you kick yourself to your paws, only using your back paws?"
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((Uh, is it just me or are you a little bit bored with this rp?? I left LUTT so... don't know if we should continue or not)
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Y... You left? Seriously? Why? I... ;; you where my first apprentice.... Up until now Drizzle has been doing NOTHING.....
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Not bc of you, I swear ;u;
I was feeling really unmotivated with this group and i have other groups id like to focus my attention on
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I was having fun training you... The group is kind of lacking... I agree, but it's not that bad... If you want to join a group, try this one. Amazonian-Claws
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Oh I'm very sorry :c
I'll def check it out!
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Fawnpaw gasped as the bigger warrior kicked her off, but barely managed to land on her feet. She growled under her breath to make sure Drizzlegem wouldn't hear. But she did love fighting. It ran a certain energy through her. "You used your paws to cover your face, but that left your chest open. Then once I went for the swipe, you kicked me off." she almost spat that last part.
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I've noticed a few flaws in Fawnkit's characterization.
Her concept of grudge-holding is way too mature.
Petalpond: We were a mistake! Not supposed to happen. She will pay for that, if it's the last thing I do. A kit can't have thoughts like that about their mother, they're children, the age that I imagine this sort of thing being possible of being thought by her is in the late apprentice years, and while they can not trust their mom and be annoyed by her, they can't exactly hate her. And kits can't really be manipulative in such a way that Fawnkit is; while they can make kits fetch stuff for them with nothing in return, and guilttrip others, they can't exactly 'get under someone's skin' in such an intelligent sort of way, remember, they're just children. While they can be smart, they can't exactly use chessboard-like-maneuvering when dealing with others.
You may want to mark these traits for when she grows, which is fine, but you can just sort of figure out a marking system of when to add this trait, like, italicize the traits she earns later on.
I hope you improve her personality, and I'll be awaiting your response c:
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OO Okay I'll do that!!
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Not so much actually huehue .u.
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Oh well I like her app ^u^ I actually just finished drawing the optional app for Streamkit
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Thank you soo much ;u;
and please edit your comment with the link ;w;
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No prob~ I hope she looks okay ;u;
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