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peterdawes — 10. Breathe Again
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Published: 2008-07-08 17:10:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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oxygenburning at
my lungs, inextinguishable
fire that rages from
the rise and fall of
my chest. mortality stings painful in
my soul's foundations, yet truth challenges deception.
one such as i shall never breathe again.
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Comments: 16
Eternal life can be a burden, non, mon ami?
::soft smile::
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One never does read the fine print on the contract.
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Hmm. . . interesting, you say. 
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Experiments are more fun than knowing exactly what you're doing though, don't you agree?
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*chuckles* Quite so, fellow poet.
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Thank you, my dear.
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You are most certainly very welcome.
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Mortality stings painfully indeed.
Sometimes I think I'll never breathe again either.
Good job Peter.
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Thank you, dear Falcon. 
Inhale and exhale. That is all one can do, right?
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Ah, Peter, one does not have to be a vampire to appreciate this line: "mortality stings painful in my soul's foundations". How perceptive of you. Bravo.
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A unique conception of the vampiric condition, my friend.
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Thank you very kindly. And many thanks for the favorite as well.
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