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peterdawes — 11. Memory by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-07-08 18:22:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 384; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 4
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Description something vaguely familiar,
hinted at with tones of
déjà vu.
like the lingering remnants
of perfume in the air;
wine in the bloodstream.
the lingering impression of
your presence by my side.

something stirring the recollection
of smooth skin
underneath fingertips;
of your lips parted
to speak my name.
no other person could utter
letters and syllables
the same manner that you could.

i still feel the warm caresses;
the slim and sensual body
pressed against mine.
the intoxicating spell of you
as two lovers' lips embrace
and two souls are forged as one.
take me to that place again,
my dear.

and i promise
i shall speak your name
in the same manner
that you whisper mine
with that gentle plea hidden
within the essence of your identity
that you linger
as something more
than a taunting memory.
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Comments: 28

Kathryn-777 [2008-08-04 02:51:49 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! This piece is like a caress!

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peterdawes In reply to Kathryn-777 [2008-08-04 17:31:44 +0000 UTC]

thank you kindly.

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katarthis [2008-07-11 15:27:21 +0000 UTC]

Things to chew on, gently.

k

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peterdawes In reply to katarthis [2008-07-13 23:36:40 +0000 UTC]

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LeonieSainteVire [2008-07-09 15:04:22 +0000 UTC]

::velvet pansy eyes sparkle::

Those mists envelope one in the Quarter, and lend to enchantment...and much more.

Beautiful, mon ami.

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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-07-10 13:20:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear Leonie. You are a charming woman with comments that always entice with visuals and introspection. I always look forward to hearing from you.

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Zer0Hawke [2008-07-09 11:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful as usual ^_^ So romantic.

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peterdawes In reply to Zer0Hawke [2008-07-09 12:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very kindly, dear.

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Zer0Hawke In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-10 10:14:25 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome ^_^

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HoldingBackTears [2008-07-08 22:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Very intimate in a very subtle way. This was beautiful. A for sure.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-09 12:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear Kelly. I am glad the intimacy carried over in subtle tones. That was what I was hoping for.
How are you faring?

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-09 19:21:41 +0000 UTC]

One can only fair so well in times such as this.

How are you doing, dear Peter?

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-10 13:16:36 +0000 UTC]

I am fair. Cannot say I am doing poorly, yet cannot say I am doing exceptionally either. Thank you for asking.

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-10 22:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Of course, Peter. Here's to hoping that you get to feeling excellent soon.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-11 07:12:27 +0000 UTC]

From your lips to heaven's ears. I can think of several ways I would feel a trifle bit better at the moment.

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-11 15:21:16 +0000 UTC]

I am extremely curious now.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-13 22:38:01 +0000 UTC]

Well, for one, I would like the sun to set a bit sooner.

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-14 00:04:58 +0000 UTC]

That tames my curiosity somewhat.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-15 13:12:08 +0000 UTC]

There is also the matter of "her" being closer to me, but I did not wish to tempt fate by assembling a list.

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-16 18:07:40 +0000 UTC]

:]] This is a very good point you have, Peter.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-19 11:02:55 +0000 UTC]

i have those on occasion. rarely, mind you, but they surface just the same.

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YouInventedMe [2008-07-08 21:40:29 +0000 UTC]

wonderful close

xo!

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peterdawes In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-07-09 12:44:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly.

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MrsDarcKnyt [2008-07-08 19:31:05 +0000 UTC]

This is much like dreams I used to have.

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peterdawes In reply to MrsDarcKnyt [2008-07-09 12:48:37 +0000 UTC]

Taunting though they are, they remain pleasant dreams just the same.
Thank you for the favorite.

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twilight-apple [2008-07-08 18:55:00 +0000 UTC]

you romantic vampire, you.

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peterdawes In reply to twilight-apple [2008-07-08 19:01:29 +0000 UTC]

You flattering mortal, you.
Thank you for the favorite, dear.

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twilight-apple In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-08 19:04:22 +0000 UTC]

yup yup, that's me.

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