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peterdawes — 13. Misfortune by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-07-12 14:25:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 483; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 10
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Description what is a woman
like you doing alone
this late at night?
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LunaticStar [2008-07-13 20:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Don't change the end to a period. >_> It's perfect.

I've said it a bajillion times but here's one more: its what's not said in the words on the page that makes a good poem imo. I like to have them make me think.

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peterdawes In reply to LunaticStar [2008-07-13 23:23:39 +0000 UTC]

I'll leave it as is, then. Did not figure I would edit it, but the verification helps.
Thank you kindly for the favorite.

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LunaticStar In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-13 23:29:02 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

By the way I started that OC meme today. It's HUGE. You're in it! >.> It said I could throw in random cool people so I did...

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katarthis [2008-07-13 17:23:19 +0000 UTC]

Simple. Immediately understandable. It ought to have a red period at the end of it. Maybe be written in flowing red script.

k

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peterdawes In reply to katarthis [2008-07-13 18:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Ha ha. . . yes, that would certainly be apropos.
I am glad the. . . message. . . came across clearly.

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Literary--Device [2008-07-13 03:30:56 +0000 UTC]

It wouldn't be you if it weren't cheeky

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peterdawes In reply to Literary--Device [2008-07-13 03:33:18 +0000 UTC]

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reanna-banana [2008-07-13 03:11:16 +0000 UTC]

we love cheeky, peter
it's what makes you so charming!

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peterdawes In reply to reanna-banana [2008-07-13 03:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you, Kellsie-Reanne. I am glad I still qualify as being charming.

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reanna-banana In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-13 04:24:49 +0000 UTC]

quite charming indeed, Mr. Dawes. you are quite the flirt. i'm sure every girl in our little circle agrees

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peterdawes In reply to reanna-banana [2008-07-13 22:15:27 +0000 UTC]

I cannot help myself. You all are far too alluring.

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reanna-banana In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-14 04:49:19 +0000 UTC]

teehee.

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HoldingBackTears [2008-07-13 02:14:13 +0000 UTC]

I hope to god that this was a rhetorical question...

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-13 03:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Rhetorical. . . perhaps.

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-13 03:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Did no-one ever teach you that it is not nice to confuse the slow kid?

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-13 22:18:03 +0000 UTC]

I do not mean to, but at times the devil gets the best of me.
Now, where is this 'slow kid' of which you speak?

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-14 00:06:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, I certainly do not mind your devlish side. He's quite interesting.

And you are staring that slow kid straight in the face.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-15 13:11:38 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* Interesting is certainly one way of putting it.
You? A slow kid? Perish the thought. You are a brilliant girl, Kelly.

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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-16 18:09:05 +0000 UTC]

... Oh, trust me, Peter. I wouldn't call someone who manages to stab theirself in the face with a fork [[the handle, mind you, not the tines]] a genius.

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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-19 11:02:31 +0000 UTC]

i would call her fallible, like the rest of us.
i have done some very boneheaded things in my own right.

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Zer0Hawke [2008-07-12 15:41:48 +0000 UTC]

How does this count as misfortune, again?

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peterdawes In reply to Zer0Hawke [2008-07-12 15:56:50 +0000 UTC]

I suppose it is a matter of perspective.

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Zer0Hawke In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-12 16:04:33 +0000 UTC]

Very true... but who can dislike the idea of dying in the arms of a gorgeous vampire? I mean - what a way to go.

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peterdawes In reply to Zer0Hawke [2008-07-12 16:09:13 +0000 UTC]

You flatter me, dear. And I have met many none-too-thrilled at the prospect of death regardless of whose teeth brought it about.
They did always seem to enjoy the events which preceded it, though.

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Zer0Hawke In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-12 16:10:12 +0000 UTC]

To use the words of Louis - You perfect devil.

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peterdawes In reply to Zer0Hawke [2008-07-13 22:19:18 +0000 UTC]

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BeccaJS [2008-07-12 15:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Do we answer that?

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peterdawes In reply to BeccaJS [2008-07-12 15:57:08 +0000 UTC]

*chuckles* Only if you feel you should.

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Losttothepast [2008-07-12 15:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Brings me memories of your other self. Good times.

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peterdawes In reply to Losttothepast [2008-07-12 15:58:29 +0000 UTC]

Yes, quite so. Well, better for some than for others.

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denlm [2008-07-12 14:57:22 +0000 UTC]

And I'm loving that "cheeky" as always.

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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-07-12 15:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kindly, dear Denise.

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MrsDarcKnyt [2008-07-12 14:44:28 +0000 UTC]

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peterdawes In reply to MrsDarcKnyt [2008-07-12 15:59:08 +0000 UTC]

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