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teeth chattering;throbbing within the cranium.
hiding my face from
the dawning of day;
the auditory assault upon my nerves.
seeking refuge underneath my pillow,
i grumble and ask myself. . .
when will the bloody construction
outside my window
cease?
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Comments: 31
katarthis [2008-09-23 22:32:54 +0000 UTC]
Got a friend living this right now. They're pumping out the ground water in her location and draining her sand well dry. The price of progress sucks.
k
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peterdawes In reply to katarthis [2008-09-24 03:50:25 +0000 UTC]
road construction around here is still in full force. and still in my neighborhood. takes far too long for them to complete something around here.
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HoldingBackTears [2008-06-13 21:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Migraines are a real pain in the head at times. ::laughs at own joke::
Well written, Peter.
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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-06-15 03:25:17 +0000 UTC]
*chuckles* A pain in the head, indeed, which makes me wish to give those who caused it a pain in their ass.
Thank you, dear Kelly.
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HoldingBackTears In reply to peterdawes [2008-06-15 19:08:06 +0000 UTC]
You're quite the funny one, Peter.
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orphicfiddler [2008-06-13 19:51:46 +0000 UTC]
OK, this made me laugh. I simply wasn't expecting construction; I was thinking migraines or the bane of sunlight upon vampirekind. Delightful.
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peterdawes In reply to orphicfiddler [2008-06-15 03:46:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kindly, my dear.
On occasion even the melancholy immortal knows how to smirk and wink a bit.
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orphicfiddler In reply to peterdawes [2008-06-15 18:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes, one must maintain that smidge of humor in the face of eternal despair.
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peterdawes In reply to orphicfiddler [2008-06-25 14:48:55 +0000 UTC]
What good is a dance with the dark side without a wink at the devil's expense?
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reanna-banana [2008-06-13 19:09:27 +0000 UTC]
oh. my. god.
here in my little old province of nova scotia, we have four seasons.
no, they are not 'autumn', 'winter', 'spring', and 'summer'.
they are 'almost winter', 'winter', 'still winter', and 'construction'.
clearly, this particular poem hit home.
'nuff said.
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LeonieSainteVire [2008-06-13 14:56:27 +0000 UTC]
when will the bloody construction
outside my window
cease?
::laughs::That is exactly how a migraine feels to me!
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denlm [2008-06-13 14:36:19 +0000 UTC]
You fooled me this time. I expected more of emo Peter and got the comic instead. At least that is how the last line struck me... right in the funny bone.
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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-06-15 04:00:43 +0000 UTC]
See? Even I can laugh on occasion. I am glad it's amused you all, too.
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DarcKnyt [2008-06-13 06:23:55 +0000 UTC]
This is incredible, accurate and I can so relate! As always, a nice bit of work, Peter! Great description. I feel and act this way most EVERY morning.
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peterdawes In reply to DarcKnyt [2008-06-13 12:32:35 +0000 UTC]
If only I were immune to sunlight. I would stick my head outside and at least tell them to shut the bloody hell up.
Thank you, kind sir.
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purecountry [2008-06-13 03:01:59 +0000 UTC]
I think you nailed it.. The migranes I get are horrible but still not as bad as the ones my husband gets.. As for the noise of construction in the city. I to can relate to that living in one of the biggest cities. It wouldn't be the same without it..
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peterdawes In reply to purecountry [2008-06-13 12:34:44 +0000 UTC]
It does add to the ambiance of city life. However, when one sleeps during the day - and barely sleeps, at that. . . well, it is not quite so well-received.
I do not envy those who receive migraines. They sound less-than-appealing.
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Amriah [2008-06-13 02:53:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh I know how that feels. I live in a big city and there is always construction somewhere. I get some pretty bad migraines from time to time... really bad. I wish I could just magically get rid of them somehow, lol.
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peterdawes In reply to Amriah [2008-06-13 12:36:43 +0000 UTC]
I have come to expect construction within the city, but they have decided to fix a portion of the street directly in front of our house. Others can sleep through this better, but I am not fairing so well.
I am sorry to hear you suffer through migraines. Does a dark room help at all?
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Amriah In reply to peterdawes [2008-06-13 17:46:11 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it does fortunately. This is probably why I am so nocturnal. I swear I am a vampire .
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peterdawes In reply to Amriah [2008-06-25 23:20:23 +0000 UTC]
Ironic that I am one and have been up all day.
That was a bit unnatural even for me, though.
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RUNNrabbitRUNN [2008-06-13 02:40:03 +0000 UTC]
yeah that seems about right. all migraines i've had have been paralyzing.
reminds me of captain sensible's 'wot' the last bit there.
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peterdawes In reply to RUNNrabbitRUNN [2008-06-13 12:40:44 +0000 UTC]
*chuckles* I had to google for Captain Sensible, but thanks to the magic of "YouTube" I found the video. Yes, exactly like that! And, might I add, that was a fun video; thank you for the amusement.
I am sorry to hear you've suffered through migraines. I never have in life or undeath, but I had to help treat those with them. Never sounded like a fun experience, to say the least.
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RUNNrabbitRUNN In reply to peterdawes [2008-06-13 16:41:56 +0000 UTC]
my pleasure. always happy to spread more goofiness.
interesting. i'm curious, you had to help those with migraines???
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peterdawes In reply to RUNNrabbitRUNN [2008-06-25 15:41:02 +0000 UTC]
I worked primarily within the emergency room (and a small clinic), but we treated patients complaining of migraine symptoms. Enough for me to know the common complaints.
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RUNNrabbitRUNN In reply to peterdawes [2008-06-29 01:31:23 +0000 UTC]
ah that's interesting. i may needle you at some point for some info on the er if that's ok
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peterdawes In reply to RUNNrabbitRUNN [2008-07-10 13:43:13 +0000 UTC]
If there's ever any way I can assist you, do not hesitate to ask.
By the way. . . I am envious of your new tattoos. Almost tempted toward another one myself.
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