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peterdawes — Please, Forgive Me
Published: 2008-04-29 03:33:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 270; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 5
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my apologieslove
but
i did not know
the fire in
your eyes
could melt a cold
winter's
evening
for
if i had
i would have
forsaken
the wood
and the stove
in favor of
seeking warmth
inside
your arms
my apologies
love
but
i did not know
that destiny
in all its strange
beautiful
chaos
could bring me
closer
to knowing
myself
than knowing
myself
could
my apologies
love
but
i looked into
your eyes
and saw
forever
staring back
at me
i saw the future
in your hands
i saw the life
that only
more deserving
beings
receive
presented
to me
through
you
i cannot help
myself
if i take you
by storm
and whisk
you away
into another place
into another time
i cannot help
myself
for it was there
in your eyes
when i dreamed of
tomorrow
and saw you
standing there
my apologies
love
but
you will have
to accept
the fact
that i will be
beside you
always
until the end
of time
for i have bound
myself
to you
and you have bound
yourself
to me.
interconnected
hearts
intertwined.
forgive me
for such
brash
bold
impetuous
behavior.
but i saw
tomorrow
in you
and wish
to pull you
from tomorrow
into
today.
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Comments: 18
... because I like the form, I like the content, I liked the way my heart melted like butter in a warm pan by the time I finished reading the last word of the last stanza...
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thank you very kindly.
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you are very welcome, Peter.
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very nice. i love the format. (is that the word? words are escaping me today. >.<
i'm probably not intelligent or clued in enough to figure out who it is you comissioned it for, but i think i may have an idea...
but i saw
tomorrow
in you
and wish
to pull you
from tomorrow
into
today.
i loved that. i dont knwo why. those few lines just hit me harder then the rest of them
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You could say that the commissioner was another friend of my co-conspirator's.
Thank you, Kellsie-Reanne.
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Wow, if this is who I think it is... just wow. Though I saw Monica throughout it too. Can you ever really separate her from anything you write?
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Never. "The muse" is a very nebulous entity, but takes its cues from her memory.
It is quite possibly who you are thinking of. *grins*
I am playing nice. See?
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Yep, that you are. What a nice change! :skips off grinning:
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so, someone who thinks in music. i'll have to ponder some more.
interconnected hearts intertwined. awwwww, so pretty. *wiping away a tear*
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Yes, he is quite musically inclined and I was obliged to assist him. Perhaps he might compose a bit of piano music for me and my beloved in return.
Thank you, Lindsay.
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