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the crimson color around your neckfabric blowing in the breeze
became as much a part of your identity as
the smile upon your face
and the wit upon your lips.
i watch it drift atop the wind and smile
at the recollection in my mind's eye.
our colors matched once, dearest one
here's to hoping they match again someday.
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Comments: 15
katarthis [2008-10-21 04:24:31 +0000 UTC]
Has anyone ever told you that you are so incredibly richly complex?
k
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denlm [2008-07-22 17:01:22 +0000 UTC]
I too thought of her immediately upon reading the title. Very touching, Peter.
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peterdawes In reply to denlm [2008-07-24 12:49:02 +0000 UTC]
seeing scarf upon that screen had an instantaneous effect. so much a part of her.
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reanna-banana [2008-07-19 20:32:55 +0000 UTC]
wow... talk about coincidence, hmm?
i love it! it was sweet, with kind of a sad tint... very very subtle.
good job for only a minute
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peterdawes In reply to reanna-banana [2008-07-20 01:30:29 +0000 UTC]
a welcomed coincidence despite the melancholy tenor of the piece. that was the wistfulness bleeding through. i appreciated the recollection, though.
thank you kindly, kellsie-reanne.
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reanna-banana In reply to peterdawes [2008-07-20 16:24:51 +0000 UTC]
dawwwh, don't be so sad, peter. it all turns out in the end
no problem
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peterdawes In reply to reanna-banana [2008-07-21 23:59:30 +0000 UTC]
i sincerely hope you are right.
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peterdawes In reply to LeonieSainteVire [2008-07-19 10:59:16 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the favorite, dear.
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HoldingBackTears [2008-07-19 02:41:57 +0000 UTC]
This is so sweet, so loving. I quite like it.
I will never be able to understand how you can come up with such amazing peices in a mere minute.
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peterdawes In reply to HoldingBackTears [2008-07-19 02:43:33 +0000 UTC]
ha ha. . . i am not certain they are amazing. this prompt, however, was a bit easier to latch onto. she wears scarves, so the imagery was instantaneous.
thank you, dear kelly.
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