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peterdawes — What You Are
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Published: 2008-06-26 16:28:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 326; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 1
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you arebeauty from madness
strength from weakness
peace from chaos
calm from disorder
you are
warmth from chill
delight from sadness
sense from confusion
love from hate
all that i am
all that i have
within a ray of sunlight
descends upon me
you are my greatest asset
all that i do
sleepless days
and spellbound nights
brought from your hand
you are my greatest weakness
you are
my best friend and lover
my wicked temptation
my trusted companion
my blessed redeemer
you are
both fire and ice
both heat and relief
both passion and contentment
both insanity and sense
and life
and reason
and truth
and wisdom
you are
you are
all that i have
and all that i need
and all that i love
dearest one
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Thank you very kindly.
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Lovely contradictions. But that, perhaps, is what love is best at. Well done.
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*wipes tears*
This is by far the most beautiful thing that you have ever wrote, that I have had the pleasure to read - hands down.
If there was a standing ovation button, you sir, would have 70 of them lined up.
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You are far too kind, Kelly. Thank you very much. This was one of my favorites to compose.
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You are most certainly very welcome. This was a delight to read.
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Using contrasting images to create a whole is an excellent device, and you do it here to perfection.
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::smiles::As always..."she" is a lucky woman!
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I thought I recognised it as I was reading, it gave me the weirdest sensation of Deja Vu. I still love it.
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Yes, I apologize for that. I should have added it before. As I was cataloging my work, I discovered it missing from the gallery, so I was remedying that here.
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I do that occasionally; I'll go 'Oh, where's that?' and realise it's just been sat in a folder somewhere unseen from the day I'd written it.
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Whoever she is, is a lucky woman.. beautiful words
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Thank you very kindly.
Tis I who am the lucky one, though, I must say.
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only word i can think of is cuuuuute!
loved the ending.
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Thank you, Kellsie-Reanne.
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I like the pacing and line segmentation in this one, Peter. Very rhythmic. And of course, the wording is exquisite. Very good pairings, chosen well. Bravo!
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