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physcobabble — Heaven Sent
Published: 2005-08-29 02:25:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 51; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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They buried you.That brings reality crashing down,
It hits me like a wave.
At first I am wracked with pain,
Like I'm tumbleing,
Lost in the ocean.
When I arise and surface,
I see your face.
I immediately am comforted,
I realize you're happy.
It makes me happy.
So at that moment,
Above your grave.
Looking at the sky,
Instead of you grave.
I relize,
That you and I have moved on,
And found peace.
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Interesting. But it's realize. And Loose the "like" in the tumbling line - it rings a bit like dialogue, even if that's not the intent.
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yeah the spell check I'm not the greatest speller, but I think I'm going to leave the Like in there. Thanks for taking the time to read it though.
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