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Published: 2005-08-29 02:32:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 53; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Most adults think we need it,Us teenagers that is.
All we do is smoke stuff that is illegal to us
Or drink and have sex.
We get knocked up before we're even out of high school.
Well I just wanted to let you know,
You're wrong.
We are good kids that try to make you happy.
That is all we try to do.
If we fail it's because you let us become like this.
You didn't give us enough attention or appreciation to stop it.
So how do we reach you?
How do we teach you what we want?
All I want from you is,
Help?
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Comments: 6
I really would suggest using a spellcheck whether you're feeling lazy or not. It's a good strategy because there are a lot of crazy spelling-freaks on the internet that will jump down your throat. They become very irritated by reading stuff that the writer don't care about enough to run a simple spell check.
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thanks for the comment i'll look into it
as i was typing it up i noticed those to but i did it at like 12 at night so i was to lazy to change it
but thanks again
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You should use the reply button, that way whoever you reply to gets notified. 
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yeah sorry about that the computer was screwy and once i relized what i had done it was to late. sorry again i'll try and get better
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Well I think you should run this through spell check, I spot a few typos.
I have a suggestion. What do you think of
We are good kids that try to make you happy.
That is all we try to do.
being changed to
We are good kids trying to make you happy
That is all we are trying to do. ?
I just think it sounds a little better when you read it out loud that way.
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