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physcobabble — do you see me?
Published: 2004-12-18 03:18:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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she walked into school.head held high,
confidence soaring.
she walks up to him,
he is with his friends.
as she walks they notice her.
they see the pink dress,
and the lace up shoes.
they notice the red hair,
they think she is not his type.
they tell him without words
to not get involved.
she starts talking to him,
they have a lot in common.
she asks him out,
but he says no.
she walks away held still held high,
confidence still soaring,
but she no longer likes this person.
he regrets not being with her,
and all because his friends
didn't see her.
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Comments: 4
Interesting. Different viewpoint from most poems on this site.
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viewpoint??? i'm not good with that kind of thing how did i do it?
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Well, I see a whole lot of poetry in first person. This wasn't, and it gave it a nice change.
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ok kewl i didn't even relize that i was doing it, i think it's a habit lol but thank u 4 the compliment
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