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Dev807v [2017-01-19 18:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Hello from project comment.

Warning

 I'm going to be honest with you about this drawing and I'm not going to sugarcoat it either, because I don't give bullshit. 

 Honestly, I like the concept of having frisk and asriel sitting beside eachother on a cliff while the sun is setting, especially when they finally reach to the surface after being underground for so long. I think that's a heartwarming moment. I also think you got your perspective pretty down pat.

However, the rest of the drawing honestly sucks and I'll explain why it sucks. 

1. Colour theory. 

Some of the colours in this drawing look too saturated, especially with the greens, blue, purple and brown. The yellow on asriels shirt and the sky are way too bright. Also the green on asriels shirt is too bright as well and it's distracting. 

My advice would be to learn colour theory. 
Here's some youtube videos that will help you:

www.youtube.com/watch?v=9kQllL…
www.youtube.com/watch?v=g2fZdG…

2. The Anatomy. 

 Ehh, it's okay. Frisks head looks oddly shaped and both characters look very stiff. Most people don't sit with their legs tightly shut like that, especially with guys. (If you know what I mean) I can see that other people in the comments have already provided you with anatomy references so I don't think that I have to provide you with any more, unless you want me to, then I will. 

3.  The Shading.

I can see that you've shaded with some colour, except for the shadows of frisk and asriel. Whatever you do, don't use black for shading. I've made this mistake with my own drawings and they look like dog shit because of that. So please please please, whatever you do, don't use black for shading. Use darker colours for shading. 


4. Asriels face man.

He looks like he's seen some shit or something. Now I know it's supposed to look like  he's crying for joy, but he looks more traumatized than happy.  The way you drew his mouth, makes him look more traumatized than happy. 

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I-LotsOfLoveAdopts-I [2017-01-17 09:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Hello from Project Comment!
I really love the overall concept for this piece, the way you incorporated the locket was quite clever and the angle that you tried to draw this in was quite ambitious, but I think there are a few things that could use some work. So the previous comment from project works already addressed proportions so I think I want to tackle color choice and your use of shading.

I love the colors you used for the background, the colors used for the trees and the mountainside are warm, and look like how you might see them at sunset, and the colors you used for Frisk and Asriel are quite accurate to their in-game appearance. However, that's where I find the first issue. This landscape is covered by sunset light, which is a sort of an orange color, both Frisk and Asriel should both be under some sort of light, their clothes, however, lack that warm coloration. In addition, you use alot of soft shadows which really complement the setting. However the shadows behind Asriel and Frisk are really extreme as if you they were under an intense light, I recommend lightening them to a softer shade, like how you shaded the rocks.

I also noticed in the foreground you have alot of trees surrounding the base of this mountain, 2/3 are made of a light olive color and 1/3 appears to be a jade green. I recommend that in the future perhaps you diversify the green spread it out, as it is now, it gives the appearance of shading, make every couple of trees a different variation of shades of the jade green, giving it a more natural sporadic appearance.

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PinixTheRaoGuard [2017-01-16 16:52:54 +0000 UTC]

Great job! Maybe put more "strong" shadings because of the sunset.

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RealNation [2017-01-16 07:14:04 +0000 UTC]

Hello from Project Comment!
I think the concept for this drawing is well realized. You chose a great color palate, and I like how you incourperated the locket- that was a neat small detail. However, I feel there are a few things you can work on in order to evolve your art. First off, your proportions are a bit inconsistant and wanky. The legs are too short in comparison to the body and Frisk's head is a bit large in comparison to the rest of their body. Also, Asriel has what looks like tears in his eyes, but they are easily missed. If this is what you intended, I would sugest you excentuate them more. The lineart of the drawing is great, but I feel like you could add more shading and texture. For the rocks and trees, I think you could add more details like crevices and leaves or at least more color variation, and in total there is minimal shading- the inverted cliff should be darker as the sun is above and in frount, and the roots should cast long shadows downwards. 
In whole, I think you show great promise as a growing artist and I wish you luck in the future. I hope I was able to help!
Tutorial on body proportions:
m.youtube.com/watch?v=laWSSkcn…

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OcciGirl24 [2017-01-16 03:44:00 +0000 UTC]

Nice! I like Concept and all, But The actual Image itself Has its problems.
For me, the style doesn't fit the Cartoony Nature of Undertale's Characters, and I see this problem a lot with some artists.
For example, Asriel Doesn't look very...Marshmellow lovable Butterscotch goat?
Idk, It's just Asriel Has A Very Soft Peachy and Fluffy Aesthetic To him, And In this Drawing, He Kinda Looks A Bit off character.
For Frisk, She Just....Doesn't Look normal, She Looks fairly Happy, While Asriel Looks Like He's Been through the 7th Level of hell!

Overall the Image has a Very Unsettling vibe for An Undertale Image that features Two very light-hearted characters.

I recommend Trying to put yourself in the Characters shoes and Try linking what their Expressing, Then Drawing them In the Style they both emote while leaving the Background In your own Style.

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BlizzardBrick [2017-01-04 20:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Ahh this looks awesome! ;o;
I love the color of the sky, even though that might be a smaller detail, it just gives the picture more depth than a blue sky would!
Thank you so much for trading with me! ;w;

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