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Description A wrought iron balcony,
overgrown with jasmine  
frames the summer evening,
pulls magic from doorways  
and sends it spinning into the wanton dark
with a clatter of glass beads
and raw red saxophone.

Voodoo heat bleeds out low and blue,
bubbles under door sills
and over window ledges
to set the city humming.
The jazz blast of feet on cobblestones -
a parade of tourists,
washed in summer and silk
shake graveyard dust from their shoes
and disappear into the long, languid dark
among the palm readers and card tricksters
crouched in the curl of a summer dream.

The warm slit of night beckons me,
welcomes me with open arms
and leads me to where you ponder enchantment -
your moon slashed eyes half closed on the world,
taking in its secrets between sips
of rum laced coffee and heavy cream.
Your cheeks spangled like carnival glass
in every hue of my desire,
sweat beaded up like tiny pearls on toffee skin.

Leaning in, I taste taboos from your tongue
that sear my mouth with the pent up heat
of your body unfolding over mine.
and the night, startled by my impudent touch,
runs down the sky in satin ribbons.
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Comments: 103

Poetrymann In reply to ??? [2015-01-10 22:02:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I am very glad you like it.

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caddman [2014-11-10 21:43:35 +0000 UTC]

...nice...

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xeena-dragonkizz [2014-11-01 16:44:03 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic!!! Loved it...

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Poetrymann In reply to xeena-dragonkizz [2014-11-01 23:58:49 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad. Good to see you back here again!

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xeena-dragonkizz In reply to Poetrymann [2014-11-02 12:23:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...good to see you here, as well!!

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copper9lives [2014-10-31 07:16:08 +0000 UTC]

I love this, darling. Won't you please submit it here ? Please?

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nightshade-keyblade [2014-10-26 02:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Everything about this poem brings to mind three things: hot, relaxed, sensual

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Poetrymann In reply to nightshade-keyblade [2014-10-30 20:41:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! New Orleans has that effect!

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Michaeldavitt [2014-10-26 01:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I can see it now
The distant red neon shivered in the heat
I was feeling like a stranger in a strange land
You know where people play games with the night
God, it was too hot to sleep

I followed the sound of a jukebox coming from a levee
All of a sudden I could hear somebody whistling from right behind me
I turned around and she said
"Why do you always end up down at Nick's Cafe?"
I said, "I don't know, the wind just kind of pushed me this way"
She said, "Hang the rich"

Take a picture of this
The fields are empty, abandoned '59 Chevy
Laying in the back seat listening to Little Willie John
Yeah, that's when time stood still
You know, I think I'm gonna go down to Madam X
And let her read my mind
She said, "That voodoo stuff don't do nothing for me"

Wait, did you hear that
Oh, this is sure stirring up some ghosts for me
She said, "There's one thing you've got to learn
Is not to be afraid of it"
I said, "No, I like it, I like it, it's good"
She said, "You like it now
But you'll learn to love is later"


I been spellbound somewhere down the crazy river



Robbie Robertson

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Poetrymann In reply to Michaeldavitt [2014-10-28 23:55:22 +0000 UTC]

God, I love that song!

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Michaeldavitt In reply to Poetrymann [2014-10-29 00:51:10 +0000 UTC]

hey an early happy birthday anything you need?

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Poetrymann In reply to Michaeldavitt [2014-10-29 01:26:22 +0000 UTC]

*Grins* A trip to the Caribbean. And many thanks!

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Michaeldavitt In reply to Poetrymann [2014-10-29 03:05:47 +0000 UTC]

wishing you all the BEST ~ www.youtube.com/watch?v=f9eW4r…

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autumn-spirit [2014-10-25 23:54:57 +0000 UTC]

omg this is so stunning! I'm definitely writing something inspired by this because the whole tone and wording is so intoxicating.

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Poetrymann In reply to autumn-spirit [2014-11-11 18:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! New Orleans pops up in my writing from time to time.

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autumn-spirit In reply to Poetrymann [2014-11-11 19:27:30 +0000 UTC]

it's such a great inspiration, isn't it? mysterious and spooky and full of culture

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SylvanSmith [2014-10-25 23:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Another great one.

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Poetrymann In reply to SylvanSmith [2014-10-28 23:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I made some changes to this older piece. My style has totally changed...

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SylvanSmith In reply to Poetrymann [2014-10-30 00:26:01 +0000 UTC]

It is good. Happy Birthday.

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oviedomedina [2014-10-25 21:43:26 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic.

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Poetrymann In reply to oviedomedina [2014-10-30 20:46:13 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks!

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oviedomedina In reply to Poetrymann [2014-10-30 23:18:33 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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Cinnamoncandy [2014-10-25 14:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Gorgeous.

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Poetrymann In reply to Cinnamoncandy [2014-11-01 23:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, gorgeous.

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Heather-Chrysalis [2010-06-05 13:30:28 +0000 UTC]

Another beautifully erotic piece. You are such a wonderful poet, I love your style.

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Poetrymann In reply to Heather-Chrysalis [2010-06-12 23:04:17 +0000 UTC]

I truly appreciate that. Thank-you very much.

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Heather-Chrysalis In reply to Poetrymann [2010-06-14 13:29:57 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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licoricefactory [2009-09-20 16:48:06 +0000 UTC]

that is truly magical.

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Poetrymann In reply to licoricefactory [2009-09-24 22:11:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I have a thing for New Orleans....

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OceanEyedWolf [2009-08-17 20:05:10 +0000 UTC]

Every time I read something of yours, I always think you can't possibly get any better. And each time I'm proven terribly wrong

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Poetrymann In reply to OceanEyedWolf [2009-08-22 02:27:41 +0000 UTC]

That is very nice of you - thanks very much!

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OceanEyedWolf In reply to Poetrymann [2009-08-22 19:26:59 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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LACYDRAWERS [2009-08-01 00:52:33 +0000 UTC]

Take me down this road I
travel, fill it with your
WORDS and promises in colours so
bright they will illuminate
my every day. Tell me a
story from your heart to
mine and in return I will
give to you, my favour and
respect and eternal friendship.
Let your mind explore the
recesses of challenge and the
newness in every tale you tell.
I am but your servant, to spill
my praises to inspire you to
even greater heights..

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Poetrymann In reply to LACYDRAWERS [2009-08-05 14:02:02 +0000 UTC]

That is quite a lovely poem you have written there...

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LACYDRAWERS In reply to Poetrymann [2009-08-07 03:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the kind words..

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Malandante [2009-07-22 12:23:24 +0000 UTC]

This is a stunning masterpiece

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Poetrymann In reply to Malandante [2009-07-27 13:58:49 +0000 UTC]

I am very glad you like it!

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Malandante In reply to Poetrymann [2009-07-30 06:12:52 +0000 UTC]

Your always most welcome

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losingmyfaith [2009-07-19 06:36:36 +0000 UTC]

this is basically one of the best pieces i've seen by you and definitely one of my favorites. wonderfully written, i love the imagery. just really good (:

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Poetrymann In reply to losingmyfaith [2009-07-22 13:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Thanks so much. It is one of my favorites...I am glad you like it.

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losingmyfaith In reply to Poetrymann [2009-07-22 18:04:51 +0000 UTC]

it's no problem (:

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Ravenclaw1 [2009-07-18 18:41:23 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poetry

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Poetrymann In reply to Ravenclaw1 [2009-07-24 21:48:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I appreciate it!

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Ravenclaw1 In reply to Poetrymann [2009-07-26 00:01:48 +0000 UTC]

You are most welcome

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00alisa00 [2009-07-18 10:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow!
this is fantastic!

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Poetrymann In reply to 00alisa00 [2009-07-24 21:44:30 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks. I appreciate it!

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lunalibera [2009-07-18 08:47:44 +0000 UTC]

How is it that your writing is always so unbearably perfect?

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Poetrymann In reply to lunalibera [2009-07-22 13:31:23 +0000 UTC]

That is very nice of you. But I do not post the absolute crap that I also write...

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PondDreamer [2009-07-18 08:39:36 +0000 UTC]

Wow...brilliant. I love this. So rich in imagery, and sensations. Fantastic work, Brendan. Dare I say, perfection.

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Poetrymann In reply to PondDreamer [2009-07-22 13:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! My style has changed quite a bit..I would like to return to this one, actually.

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