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Description An image form of this pasta proved difficult to locate. All I have is a text file of it. So I'm going to copy and paste... but first.
I did not write the following. I merely found it floating around the net and felt a need to share. I have never written a Creepypasta, and on any submission I have made to Devianart conataining one, I have made it abundantly clear that I did not and will not.
Thank you. Maybe people will stop asking me if this REALLY HAPPENED TO YOU OMG!
Not my story.

Ever noticed those inconsistencies between the original first two games of the second gen and the third gen? Yes, I mean "Crystal".

Why did they call it Crystal? They should have called it "Platinum" instead, it's a metal like Gold and Silver after all. Also Suicune is the cover Pokemon. Suicune? What the hell, why not a Pokemon that actually fits here?

Well, that's what they originally planned. The third game was to be called "Platinum", it wouldn't have focused on Suicune but instead would have created a link to the third gen where you would have continued your journey from the second gen. Remember how that Team Rocket guy in Cerulean City told you he would reform Team Rocket in another country, how the original two games never solved the whole Giovanni and Silver plotlines and especially how you get no reward for beating Red? It's all because they planned to release a sequel. Pokemon Platinum. They only got as far as a quite glitchy beta though. A friend of mine happened to own one of those games, but sadly died recently. Since both of us loved to play Pokemon in our childhood, I wanted to honor the good old times one last time and started the game.

The edition layout of this game is completely different than usual. Remember "Pokemon Pinball", that game with a rumble pack on top? It's quite like that, just that you additionally can stack up a game on the game. Yes, that's right: you were supposed to stack your Gold/Silver game on Platinum and then it would have created your character with all his Pokemon and shit. If you did not own Gold or Silver though you still could play the game as if it were one of those two games, but with some drawbacks like less Pokemon to catch and such.
So I stacked my year-old Silver game onto it and booted the gameboy. It started quite usual with a nice opening screen, showed me some Pokemon, the three starters and even their last evolutions. The graphics also looked quite good. Then Ho-Oh and Lugia showed up and the three dogs. It was quite obvious that Lugia symbolized the ocean while Ho-Oh symbolized the air. The threee dogs were actually symbolizing the ground itself. But then somethign weird happened.
The "camera", if you can call it, went down, it went "underground". For some time my screen went black, then suddenly two eyes opened. Those were not the eyes of a Pokemon I knew. They were huge and black but the pupils which had some kind of purple-white design. Also it looked damn good for a gameboy color game, almost like a photograph. You also could hear a pokemon scream. It was a scream I've never heard before. That did not scare me though, oh no: it thrilled me to play this game. After all, there would be an unseen Pokemon in it!

So after the opening sequence I got a new screen asking me if I want to import my game and continue and that's what I did. Next up was a short explanation of the story: you are the new pokemon master and defeated red and basically everyone opposing you. But in a new country, Team Rocket rebuilt their organisation and now it's up to you to free that country from them. It's unknown who is their new leader at this point.
After you got told all that stuff, you get to pick one of the original starters as an addition for your team. After you're done with that and about to leave, Oak tells you to be careful snce you "have no idea what you're up against". Yeah, a typical video game warning, you would think. But this time one should take it quite seriously.

Since I could reuse all my old Pokemon and revisit all of Johto and Kanto, I created a fucking awesome team full of level 100 Pokemon, consisting of Feraligatr, my original starter in Silver, Charizard, Venusaur, Mewtwo, Gengar and Pidgeot. Next I was supposed to use the MS Anne that would bring me to that new country.

That place looked completely different from Kanto and Johto. Instead of green fields, colorful towns and happy music, there was grey everywhere and no music at all. The town was full of fuck. It was like one of those huge metropoles, but without streets and people, everything was just emptry and grey and huge houses everywhere, but none of them had doors. At first I thought the game glitched up or something, but upon checking the Pokemon Center of that town, the only building you could enter, an event triggered.

An "old man" entered the place. He did not look like an old man though, it was not that usual "old bald man" sprite but instead a really weird sprite that you could barely make out as a human being, it was more like a stickman. Still I thought he was supposed to be an old man because all of his dialouge had "OJISAN:", which basically means "Old man" in Japanese, in front of it. So once again I just thought "well, this probably is just due to the game being beta". Then he started to talk, but he just had glitchy dialouge (you know, that kind of glitchy you get after seeing Missingno). After like 15 text boxes full of glitches, he finally brought out a readable sentence:

"please stop I HAVE TO DO THIS please stop"

Then suddenly a battle started. The old guy had a Team Rocket battle sprite and once again was named "OJISAN". He had 6 Pokemon, just like I did. Fuck yeah, full battles all the time! His first Pokemon was Blastoise, mine was Pidgeot. His Blastoise was level 80, but my Pigeot was level 100, so what should go wrong? So I attacked using Wing Attack. His Blastoise barely survived and used Explosion next. Yes, a Blastoise used explosion, it was weird but there was nothing I could to about it now. My Pidgeot did not make it and fainted, but so did his Blastoise. But something was different now. Instead of "Pidgeot fainted!", I got "Pidgeot died!". Also Pidgeot was gone from my team. This game was actually the goddamn grandfather of the Nuzlocke Run, holy shit.

Slightly panicking, I sent out Mewtwo. His next five Pokemon all were different types and seemed like a usual Pokemon team one would use to beat Red in Silver. Well, Psychic still fucked them for good. After defeating him, his sprite turned into some glitchy thing and just disappeared. I got some more backstory and the nurse told me that the Rocket headquarters are north of this "town" in some underground area and that's where I have to fight them. I checked again if my Pidgeot was back, but it wasn't so I had to replace it with my Skarmory for now. I headed north.

There was only one route between me and the entrance to that underground area and it was full of glitches, but it actually did have "music", if you can call high-pitched glitchy random tones anything like that. When entering the grass to fight some pokemon it either was a Raticate named "INNOCENCE" or some glitchy fuckfest similar to Missingno. but just stupid with other sprite parts in them (sometimes even those old ghost pokemon things you originally met in Lavender Town in Red&Blue). Also they always were level 0, however this can be possible. Sometimes you heard a weird pokemon scream, similar to the one in the beginning of the game.

So I finally found the underground base and it was just a cave. A really tiny cave, you could do nothing but go forward. Initially there was no music at all. So I progressed and suddenly there was a wild pokemon, just like the ones on that route before but this time it was level 1. Still managed to flee from them. I kept encountering those things and the more I went inside the cave the stronger they got, basically one level at a time. Also everytime I met a pokemon the cave seemed to chsnge a bit, after like 50 ones it looked like there was some liquid around me but it still was all dark.

Finally after like half an hour of glitchy shit I arrived in a new room and there he was: Giovanni himself. The room was not unlike the ones in Heartgold and Soulsilver when you use that event, but a lot more creepy. His only dialouge was:

"BE MINE"

Then a battle started. Giovanni had a typical Giovanni team from the previous games, but a LOT stronger in terms of levels, they all were at 100. I still managed to defeat him (again, all of his Pokemon "died"). After the battle he said nothing but simply disappeared and I could enter a new entrance behind him, and of course I entered.

No map loaded, nothing happened but a new battle. It was the Pokemon from the beginning, I could distingush it from its scream. The whole battle screen stayed black though and the only thing you could see was the eyes of that thing. Its name also was glitched, it was called "X - EO" with lots of glitchy shit everywhere. My first Pokemon was Mewtwo, once again. Of course I wanted to catch that thing, so I used Psychic. It did have no effect, so obviously that thing has Dark as its typing. His attack was something like the stuff Giygas does in the Earthbound games, but without text, the screen just flashed for a second and Mewtwo lost like half of his hit points. So next I tried to use Swift, but it didn't work either: its typing was Dark/Ghost. Its attack killed my Mewtwo.

That's the last thing I remember from that battle. Next thing I remember is that my Gameboy turned off because it ran out of batteries. When trying to turn it back on, even after I switched out batteries, it failed. Trying to start Silver or Platinium only failed either. Both games seemed to be broken for some reason and of course I wanted to know why which is why I tried to find out where my friend got that game from and what the fuck is up with it. After some research I finally learned the truth about it. The new Pokemon is actually supposed to be the lord of the realm of death (Lugia controls water, Ho-Oh air, the dogs control the earth, the birds control the weather and the new thing controls the realm of the dead). They never continued developing the game because no one was able to defeat him and everyone who failed disappeared mysteriously or died shortly afterwards. Also they were unable to stop the game or make someone who plays it stop it, kinda like those guys are bond to the game or as if their defeat actually takes more from them but their ingame money. I was lucky the pokemon "ran out of power" so I still made it.

Kinda disappointed and mourning about my friend who seemingly also played the game and died afterwards only due to it, I wanted to see if his other games still worked. So I took his Gold edition, put it in my gameboy and upon the selection screen I broke down, started to cry for hours and realized what I've just done.

His character was named "OJISAN".
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Comments: 69

PokeSpeBanette [2013-09-29 18:44:28 +0000 UTC]

giratina.

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DragonTruLoverManiak [2013-03-12 05:21:36 +0000 UTC]

bravo!

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mechadarkmewtwo In reply to DragonTruLoverManiak [2013-05-03 23:19:12 +0000 UTC]

OMG DUDE FLIPNOTE HATENA IS SHUTTING DOWN SO ALL YOUR DRAGON SNIVY EPISODES WILL BE DELETED NO JOKE

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DragonTruLoverManiak In reply to mechadarkmewtwo [2013-05-05 02:54:19 +0000 UTC]

well I've been seeing on flipnote hatena 'save hatena' so many times I'm not surprised. but I don't know how to help save it.

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Migatte-no-Gokui [2013-03-06 18:18:53 +0000 UTC]

I remember reading this like 2 years ago before you even made fanart of it and it was amazing and now it's kinda meh, though I like how it's ambiguous as to what happened to Ojisan. Also, X-EO for Ubers.

Also, did this really happen to you!?!?

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Polyhexian In reply to Migatte-no-Gokui [2013-03-07 03:41:32 +0000 UTC]

it was always kinda meh
I just wanted to popularity boost that came with posting aother one fothese fucking things
it's nice to be noticed

also STFU U WHORE

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Tsuki222 [2012-09-25 18:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Also the 'Lord of the Dead' seems quite a lot like a mix of Giratina and Spiritomb...It would awesome if someone remade into a cutstom game, like they did with Lost Silver.

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Tsuki222 [2012-09-25 18:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Very disturbing and sad...

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i-stoled-ur-boxerz [2011-02-22 22:40:53 +0000 UTC]

wait i dont get it y did u cry when u found out the name of his character...wow im stupid but really y

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Polyhexian In reply to i-stoled-ur-boxerz [2011-02-22 22:52:21 +0000 UTC]

First, I didn't write it, so it isn't me.
Second, he fought a character called 'ojisan' earlier and killed all his pokemon and then the trainer.
And then he found out his dead friend who's game he was playing used the name 'ojisan' for his character.

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i-stoled-ur-boxerz In reply to Polyhexian [2011-02-23 20:44:26 +0000 UTC]

oh i get it srry for having u explain

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MettagiriSuru [2011-02-03 22:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Interesting sory :3

I REALLY like your preview image, though. The way the Raticate looks.. the way he's crouched down with his head up make it look like he's in pain, or feeling dispaire or something..

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abchihuahua98 [2011-01-22 20:45:44 +0000 UTC]

Wait... couldn't this guy have chosen a better thing to call the game? He mentions the celibi event in HG/SS, so he's obviously knew that platinum was the name of an existing game. Bronze would make more sense.

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Polyhexian In reply to abchihuahua98 [2011-01-22 21:05:44 +0000 UTC]

What? Of course he knew Platinum was an existing game, he was making a point that there was supposed to have been a game called Platinum earlier in the series. It's completely irrelevant that there's a Platinum version now.

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Lazyhog [2011-01-04 00:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Lots of clichΓ©...too bad :/ I just read the whole thing (which is weird from me, I'm spanish so...um )

But I like that draw you love drawing crying people, huh? xD

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Polyhexian In reply to Lazyhog [2011-01-04 00:20:44 +0000 UTC]

YEP
I'm just odd like that lol

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Lazyhog In reply to Polyhexian [2011-01-04 01:01:41 +0000 UTC]

lol

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TehNerdQueenCaroline [2010-12-31 03:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Scary. It's gonna be a rough night for me, but that story wa so interesting!

They eventually did release a "PokΓ©mon Platnium", with a PokΓ©mon that sort of represents death (Giratina). And on the site for anime movie featuring such a PokΓ©mon, while it was loading you saw Giratina's eyes open...

Oh my God.

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kemeno [2010-12-28 05:30:17 +0000 UTC]

Thats really creepy o-o...I wonder if that game is truly real or made up...? I wouldent wanna find out though! D:

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Polyhexian In reply to kemeno [2010-12-28 05:53:56 +0000 UTC]

I highly doubt it is real. :U It's just creepypasta. The only one confirmed for real is Lost Silver.

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kemeno In reply to Polyhexian [2010-12-28 22:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Good point...oh and black or creepy black what ever its called. lol I gotta stop reading these. they scare me to much xD

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XxxOceanXSapphirexxX [2010-12-17 01:29:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, THAT one... I've knowed (?) it before.
Funny thing: In the 'real' Platinum Version (the one for the DS), Giratina is on the cover and the 'main' PokΓ©mon. Now look what the PokΓ©Dex Data says:

Diamond/Pearl: A PokΓ©mon that is said to live in a world on the reverse side of ours. >It appears in an ancient >cemetery<. <

Platinum: >It was banished for its violence<. It silently gazed upon the old world from the Distortion World.

...Erm, sry if I talk too much, but if something's in my mind, I HAVE to let it out
Anyway, see what I mean?

Btw I just LOVE the Giygas&EarthBound reference in there XD

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Migatte-no-Gokui [2010-11-26 13:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit! About time somebody made art of this. I read this months ago and I thought I was the only one who even knew about it in this group. I always thought this X-EO thing was a fucked up Giratina.

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Polyhexian In reply to Migatte-no-Gokui [2010-11-26 17:30:32 +0000 UTC]

Heh, nope! Whether I've drawn it or not, I've probably read it. ^_^

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Tsukichu [2010-11-26 01:21:33 +0000 UTC]

(please don't think I'm stupid...) I don't really understand the ending. Was it implied that he killed his friend?

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Polyhexian In reply to Tsukichu [2010-11-26 01:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Oh I don't. D:
At least, part of him.

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Tsukichu In reply to Polyhexian [2010-11-26 02:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Ah, okay. It was difficult to understand. And boy, did they say "fuck" and "shit" a lot. XD

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Polyhexian In reply to Tsukichu [2010-11-26 02:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes they did. ._.

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narutowoman1 [2010-11-25 17:21:29 +0000 UTC]

I read this one before! <3

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Sharmanix [2010-11-24 18:00:10 +0000 UTC]

damn..... never hear that one b4.... love it though!!!

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SilverStarlite [2010-11-24 00:06:16 +0000 UTC]

its interesting.

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Polyhexian In reply to SilverStarlite [2010-11-24 00:07:43 +0000 UTC]

I just like the ending.

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SilverStarlite In reply to Polyhexian [2010-11-24 00:18:09 +0000 UTC]

yeah, agreed. at least it isnt like most creepy pasta, where its a complete ripoff of every other one out there.

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WingedWarrior13 [2010-11-23 22:39:18 +0000 UTC]

i've read this before, but it's still awesome.

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ManaxRyouxBakura [2010-11-23 20:11:42 +0000 UTC]

I think they should have named it bronze. But anyways, crystal. This was like the first pasta I read~!! love the pic!!

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Gummie-Alien [2010-11-23 18:16:43 +0000 UTC]

Like the first commenter said. Personally, this story did not impact me very much. The ending was a very weird twist, though. My complaint was that, if the game was a beta of a Japanese game, why was it entirely in English? I guess I can't say this anymore, thanks to the story I wrote, considering the characters spoke in Japanese and English, though I pointed out more English than Japanese.

AND SCHOOL WHY DO YOU HAVE TO EXIST.

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Polyhexian In reply to Gummie-Alien [2010-11-23 21:46:35 +0000 UTC]

Welllll, it was pretty obvious the story was bull. XD I assume they wanted you to imagine that it had a basic, rough translation done for a few testers.

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Gummie-Alien In reply to Polyhexian [2010-11-24 00:41:06 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. |D

There was this one that sucked worse, IMO, since I think (couldn't raze through the story since, SCHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL), he said that the PokΓ©mon sounded like Dialga? The story I mean was the one that started with "I found this cart of PokΓ©mon Yellow in the bathroom, then I played it on my DS and it asked me 'Transport team from Explorers of Darkness?' and I was all 'YES' cuz I had a Dialga, then it showed me all the regions except Kanto in ruins, and I wish that Nintendo would stop making new games, blah blah blah. Oh yeah. PRIMAL PALKIA."

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Hybrid-Trainer [2010-11-23 14:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Dude, you really couldn't find that story?
I can name 2 places right now where i can find that story:
pokecommunity Creepypasta Thread
6thfloor.cz.cc
Its been up there for so long!

Nice pic by the way, did you use something different to draw it because the rocket looks different that your usual style "/ Love the eyes though, even though they look symmetrical they look freakin creppy!

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Polyhexian In reply to Hybrid-Trainer [2010-11-23 21:47:43 +0000 UTC]

D': Well... I'm not good at googling! I was mostly trying to /r/ it...

:'D Thanks! I'm still tweaking my style, though. >:T Not happy with it.

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Hybrid-Trainer In reply to Polyhexian [2010-11-23 23:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Well just to let you know, even though my site is rarely updated, if your searching for a PokePasta chances are i've read it and i'll be able to find it

Yea, i get what you mean. it looks too bright for a creepy picture "/

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Polyhexian In reply to Hybrid-Trainer [2010-11-24 00:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh? What site?

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Hybrid-Trainer In reply to Polyhexian [2010-11-24 00:24:35 +0000 UTC]

6thfloor.cz.cc were trying tp get the place upgraded because most people get scared off by the domain XD

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MewMewPokemon15 [2010-11-23 13:31:06 +0000 UTC]

That was awesome! I'm glad you found it and shared it with us! :3

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AeroRaptorz [2010-11-23 12:47:53 +0000 UTC]

WHAT A TWIST.

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SSodDragonClan [2010-11-23 09:00:15 +0000 UTC]

Hey, just saying, but this is on the blog.

[link]

Sorry if I'm bugging you and all that.

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beckels89 [2010-11-23 06:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Oh woah. O_O One word; unexpected.
This was fun to read though. Very nice picture, I want to point out yet again how epic your textures are
And god, I'd do anything to watch a Blastoise explode XD

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Polyhexian In reply to beckels89 [2010-11-23 21:57:49 +0000 UTC]

BLASTOISE KABOOMBOOM~
Heheh, thank you! I love textures.

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beckels89 In reply to Polyhexian [2010-11-23 22:45:33 +0000 UTC]

XDD No problem!

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CrystalKnuckles16 [2010-11-23 04:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it is annoyin' when you say somethin' in the artist's comments and no one reads it XC oh well, hopefully people will actually notice it this time -.-

o.o boy the endin' was just... wow =o

I like the colorin' you did for Blastoise's shell! It looks awesome!

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