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Published: 2012-06-27 12:48:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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a picture i drew during art classes at school ^^we were meant to draw a surreal picture, so well, lots of weird stuff here xD
sorry for the photo being not too good, but i hope, you like this anyway
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Comments: 5
excellent things: inclusion of nyan cat, possible references to [i]Le Petit Prince[/i], the expression on the fish's face, chosen colors are both soft and vivid, piece is imaginative, composition is good, bunnies, very nice use of crosshatching, it really does remind me of childhood daydreams
needs improvement: coloring of the sky is a little uneven overall, but could be fixed without altering the piece in any significant way, also it's pretty easy to not notice, slight perspective problem with the lowest tree on the lowest planet as well as the boy on the lower planet (but I still screw those things up myself so ehhhhhyeah, grain of salt much)
were I your teacher, I would have given you 98/100 and the recommendation that you keep striving to make your art better because it's already [i]good[/i].
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wow, thank you so much for this detailed review! yes, now that you mention it, i also see the perspective errors, i have to admit, that iยดm not too good at perspectives ^^,
anyway, thank you a lot for taking your time, and helping me to improve!
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it's not a problem. you are a good artist, and you've still got promise on top of that.
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thanks >///<
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(also i forget that dA uses actual html instead of bbcode, apologies)
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