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Published: 2010-09-27 15:17:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1760; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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Shongskie! This is for you! Hope you like it! Happy Birthday! :3Related content
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Nothing's perfect but we all try to get to a certain level xD
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This one has great motion! I like it the best from the two I think ^^
Some wrinkles coul still be a little more accurate or expressive, but still you did a great job and I'm sure you'll improve it next time.
My only issue here would be that, again, hair doesn't feel like moving as much as the clothes, and I even think the hair should be more sensitive to that jump than the clothing, that has more weight. I know that the haircut is definitory for a character and it's always dangerous to place it differently but you have to get over it or you won't exploit the full potential of motion
Also, a veeery silly and small detail but that I think it's worth commenting: some teachers of mine always told me to never, ever let two lines from objects or things that are one behind another, be touching at 100% exactitude, since it creates a little bit of confusion visually speaking. Here it happens with the legs, the lines coincide at almost 100% accuracy at the knee and ankle, and that should be avoided: if you look at it too quickly, it may even look like he's pushing his leg with the other leg, if you know what I mean
Yeah, I know it's a very stupid thing to comment, in this drawing it's very difficult for the viewer to see what I just told you, but maybe if I tell you now I might avoid some possible future occasion where this same detail leads to something "uglier"
Great job anyway!
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Thanks for the awesome critique ^_^ I'll be sure to improve on the points you mentioned.
And about the two lines meeting that creates confusion... yeah that happened to me before ^_^U I do try to avoid things that look weird and I'll improve on it in future pics xD
Thanks again ^^
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Not at all! You know I love to mess with you and criticise you, MWAHAHAHAHA
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Sweet Screaming Sirens!!! This is STUPENDOUS, SPECTACULAR, SALACIOUS.
Smooth Subtle Lines, with Soft Gentle Curves, Yet Dynamism and Movement.
Outstanding!
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Thanks Kacri xD I try my best to make them somehow "alive"
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I don't know if there is a word for it in english, but your drawing trasmits a great "movement sensation".
Great work!
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Thanks Dan :3 I'm glad that it has the feeling of movement.
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Your skills are reaaaaaaaaaaaally improving
COngrats
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Thanks a lot, Junpei. ^_____^
I love it!!! Thanks for such a wonderful gift.
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