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Blank byAshley wasn't surprised when she felt a cool band slip on her finger. He had bought her jewelry before. Usually it was cute hair clips or earrings, but it wasn't out of place for Tom to bring a ring to his girlfriend either.
The night had been perfect; dinner in the Crystal palace, followed by dancing in the ballroom (avoiding Her Majesty Serenity, who *still* couldn’t dance). Then, they had wandered the royal gardens until the distant chime of a church bell told them it was midnight. Tom laid a hand on Ashley's arm and gently led her to a bench nearby. The soft, cool breeze ruffled the golden hair of both as moonlight filtered through the roses and other flowers.
"I want to give you something. Close your eyes."
Ashley complied with childlike delight, closing her baby blues in anticipation. When she felt the ring slide onto a slim finger, her eyes opened . . . and then popped. There, on her finger, was a gold band with a diamond in pale blue; the exact color of her crescent moon birthmark, which flared to life as tears filled her eyes. As she turned to Tom, now on his knees, he began to speak.
"I could say a million things about why I love you. I could say I admire your strength. I could say I love your sweet nature. I could even say it's destiny. Nothing would be enough. I love you more than life itself. Will you marry me?"
I’ve been working on this for the last couple of hours. I wanted to get ’s edit done, because it was one of the more fun ones to do. I’m not sure about the little ficlet; I know this isn’t how the character really proposes (it’s been a while since I read the stories, so I’m a bit rusty). However, maybe in another universe he proposes this way.
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Comments: 24
justawhile12 [2008-08-29 12:10:02 +0000 UTC]
TT_TT So sweet..made me almost cry .... it made me remember when my friends Ashley and Tom were going out .... ^^ I wonder if...oh..Im goping off topic maybe I'll tell you later?
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puff222001 In reply to justawhile12 [2008-08-29 15:26:22 +0000 UTC]
I know, I read where Yuni said things were pretty much over for them and I felt so bad for her! But I figured it had been long enough to have the characters in such a situation without hurting her.
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justawhile12 In reply to puff222001 [2008-08-29 21:29:02 +0000 UTC]
no. not that ashley and tom. i was talking about theese two friends i had from my school..although tom moved ;
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puff222001 In reply to justawhile12 [2008-08-30 15:29:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh, all right. My mistake. But still, I'm glad you like it.
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justawhile12 In reply to puff222001 [2008-09-01 01:21:19 +0000 UTC]
^^ no problem. people always make mistakes.
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DavisJes [2008-08-16 16:44:35 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. I know where you got the dress design from. ^_^
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MasterOfRa [2008-08-16 16:13:02 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I like the way this turned out.
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"Kill me or release me, but do not waste my time with talk."
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Yuni-Naoki [2008-08-03 15:30:34 +0000 UTC]
Aw!!! I love it sooooo much!!! Thank you so much for doing this!!
It's so beautiful!
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puff222001 In reply to Yuni-Naoki [2008-08-03 23:41:53 +0000 UTC]
I'm very happy you like it.
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puff222001 In reply to elila [2008-08-02 22:04:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm most proud of her dress.
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elila In reply to puff222001 [2008-08-02 22:46:41 +0000 UTC]
You should be, it looks very good!
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Winter-Colorful In reply to puff222001 [2008-08-08 05:27:21 +0000 UTC]
No problem, keep it up
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Iris-Angel [2008-08-02 00:01:45 +0000 UTC]
I love the story that goes along with the picture! Great job, she'll love it!^_^
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puff222001 In reply to Iris-Angel [2008-08-02 00:02:59 +0000 UTC]
I hope she does. It was fun to make, anyway!
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