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Why should I tell you?:thumb397142360:
Why should I tell you how I feel?
There's a chance you won't feel the same.
Could it make this wound heal?
Or will it just give us both shame?
Why should I tell you what I think?
My thoughts don't matter to you.
And even if they were to spill out
What good are they to you?
Why should I tell you what I see?
The image won't look the same in your eyes.
Though it is as beautiful as the sea
It could bring darkness to our sky.
Why am I questioning everything?
Could it be that I am frightened and scared?
I know one day I will find the true meaning of love
But until then, please hold me like you care.
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Comments: 14
LovelyMochi [2013-12-10 17:48:11 +0000 UTC]
Good job putting into words such complex emotions! I remember feeling this way a few times... ok more than a few!! Even with people we know love us these sorts of things can still happen.
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PWheartgal In reply to LovelyMochi [2013-12-10 22:48:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
Yea they are pretty complex feelings :/ so yes I did try my best thank you!
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LovelyMochi In reply to PWheartgal [2013-12-11 02:37:08 +0000 UTC]
Welcome! Now you'll post that other one right?????
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PWheartgal In reply to LovelyMochi [2013-12-11 03:31:11 +0000 UTC]
Well actually I have a change of plans in general I think I want the poem I'm working on to be based off of a new drawing I'm working on so yes ill have a new poem up but based off of a different picture not "Love:Yours vs Mine"
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LovelyMochi In reply to PWheartgal [2013-12-11 14:18:40 +0000 UTC]
Cool beans! I'm looking forward to seeing it!
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CremePuffMarshmallow [2013-11-22 05:17:39 +0000 UTC]
This...hit home. I had so many feels reading this that I almost punched myself in the chest because this is exactly how I feel.
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PWheartgal In reply to CremePuffMarshmallow [2013-11-22 13:49:04 +0000 UTC]
Ah! Don't punch urself in the chest! But I'm glad that this is relatable cuz I didn't really think this was even that good.
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CremePuffMarshmallow In reply to PWheartgal [2013-11-24 07:49:41 +0000 UTC]
It was good to me. And don't worry, even if I did, I probably would have started laughing like a moron XD
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PWheartgal In reply to CremePuffMarshmallow [2013-11-24 15:18:29 +0000 UTC]
And that means a lot to me that u thought so cuz I don't really consider myself a poet. And xD lol
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CremePuffMarshmallow In reply to PWheartgal [2013-11-24 19:17:42 +0000 UTC]
I didn't think I was either through, all of my poems are crazy or sad -v-'
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PWheartgal In reply to CremePuffMarshmallow [2013-11-24 19:25:49 +0000 UTC]
You write poems as well? Any up on d.a.? And well ppl always critique theirs harsher so I don't believes they r as sad or "crazy" as u say, a poem is a poem.
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CremePuffMarshmallow In reply to PWheartgal [2013-11-24 20:32:51 +0000 UTC]
I don't remember if I have any. I could start posting some, though :3
That's the thing, though, I purposefully make them that way XD
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PWheartgal In reply to CremePuffMarshmallow [2013-11-24 21:34:09 +0000 UTC]
I hope you do put some up and well mine are sad too so xD
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CremePuffMarshmallow In reply to PWheartgal [2013-11-26 10:08:51 +0000 UTC]
I might at some point this week^^
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