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Published: 2005-01-27 12:19:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 96; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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You seemed so cold-hearted to me,Have you not noticed?
Each time I try to talk,
You tend to change the subject,
And walk off.
Have you never known,
Of what's going on inside?
You never intended to ask,
Do you, my dearest?
And start caring for me?
You don't seem to be fond of me,
I'm annoying you aren't I?
Just admit it if I do,
Tell the truth,
And save the lies.
You seem not to be a believer,
And are unable to see through your acquaintances.
Why haven't you been there for me,
Why haven't you try to be good to me?
Is it because I'm a worthless imbecile?
What's good for you,
When I've done enough?
What is it you expect from me,
When I expect nothing surprising from you?
What have I done to deserve such feeling?
My sweet fate will end,
And it shall end now.
I draw my sword,
And plunge into my flesh.
I fell into a deep pool of sorrow..
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Comments: 2
texanguitarguy [2005-01-31 18:20:27 +0000 UTC]
Emotional, yes, but it seems more like a prose bit rather than a poem. It's good though
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pyraLyte In reply to texanguitarguy [2005-01-31 22:40:44 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.. well, I guess I'll have to show it to you first to see if it's a prose or a poem. Hehehe >.> I try to handle out the differences but darn!
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