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PyroTeamkill — Roadwarrior Gnoll
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Published: 2008-09-28 13:51:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 562; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 17
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I think I started this before I went off to Belgium but didn't really finish until my return. I have a few other pics of this character kicking around that I doodled there but none are really in any kind of finished state.Related content
Comments: 10
this scetch is great although the right arm (her left arm) looks odd, it looks to hard and stiff, and the hand on same arm looks. . . like my hands and that means the fingers look quite squeezed together in a too small paw.
something about her balance feels wrong, the pose is quite unnatural, try standing like that and you'll feel alot of weight come on the fot you stand with your toe on, together with a huge %#@ gun you would most likely prefer to not bend forward even a little bit since it becomes so damn heavy.
but as i said i like it, just trying to find constructive things too say.
keep it up
/Banarok
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Hay man, thanks allot for the crit.
It is this kind of message that I hope to get by posting my stuff on DA, pointing out where I went wrong helps.
I will have to look out for weight distribution in my future works. As for paws, I am really, really bad at hands. Even observing them doesn't help. I'll have to find a few days to just sit down and work that stuff out.
Cheers man.
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yea hands seriusy suck to draw, they become horrible whatever you do! they must be cursed . . .
but anyway I'm glad to help
Cya around (P.S. Hyenas own)
/Banarok
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Now THAT is a gun. Cool outfit though. Are those football knee guards?
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Crap, thumbnail didn't work.
It is the top gun here
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*Cackles* DUUDE!!! That awesome thing! Glad to see you doing something with the Assault rifle design. I still quite like that one.
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Yeah, I like it too. I have used that rifle in a number of other pics if you ahve seen them.
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Heh, thanks. It is the top one here :thumb49784374:
As for the knee guards, I don't know. I just drew them like that. Although they look kind of like them now.
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