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Dark-Zant [2009-12-06 01:50:05 +0000 UTC]

Critique time (even though i don't have a subscription)

Concept *****
Composition **
lighting ***
Focus ****
Balancing *****
Pose ***
Clothes ***

I like the concept. It is, indeed, a creative photography however, it was poorly developed. A whiter background and a veil in front of everthing would have worked, or oxford gray/white plain background.

Poorly focused, everything looks blurred, mainly the face. An intense light is missing. Intense lighting reinforces conrasts, which normally make better compositions when in white backgrounds. Perfect Symmetry

I don't criticize models, since i don't know if the uploader is the model or the photographer and i'm not a beauty judge, however I criticize posing and clothing. Pose is fine, however, hair and face made are quite awful, maybe the torso should have been more angled.

Clothing is fine, however wilder clohing or a completely formal dress would have made a better composition

Overall ***

It's fine, however, I'd recommend you focusing oncomposition before creating a photo.

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