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Published: 2006-03-09 01:58:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 7
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Just decided to put up a work-in-progress of my newest project, which I randomly entitled HEALER. ... There's some form of backstory that I bs-ed on the spot once I decided I needed one, so... yeah. Either way, I'm probably going to do this a bit, because it's a new way of doing things for me (I don't usually go so realistic), so comments, critiques and pointers are uberly encouraged. If you think a tutorial might help me out, don't hesitate to put up ze linky!Anyway, it's definitely not done. Love to know what you think of it so far, and what you think could be improved or done with this. n__n
No redistributing of this image. Can't see why you would- it's not even done yet, but just in case.
-Photoshop CS2 (which I'm considering asking mummy and daddy for. n__n Begging, more like. >.>;; )
Here I'm going to stress the fact that I want to know what flaws other people see in it, or things that could be improved upon. Here, I'll start:
1. The forehead is too far back, and should be enlargened just a tad.
2. The lips look rather pale- something should definitely be done about those.
3. The Healer has, as of yet, no ear. Teh foo. .___o She be an earless wonder.
And those're just what I see so far. Cummon, peeps, I know you kin do better'n just a measley three. :gonk:
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Comments: 20
FryFox [2006-03-13 17:48:14 +0000 UTC]
Woo! Beautiful. I wanna see it finished so......chop chop! Im just kiddin, take yer time.
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to FryFox [2006-03-13 22:34:35 +0000 UTC]
XDD I really should get working, tho'. My trial version expires in about three weeks're less.
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FryFox In reply to quikCHANGEsilver [2006-03-14 20:54:59 +0000 UTC]
ooh, you better get a movin'
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to FryFox [2006-03-14 22:40:00 +0000 UTC]
Heeeh. Mebbeh if me teachers gimmeh less work. >.>;;
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FryFox In reply to quikCHANGEsilver [2006-03-15 01:58:00 +0000 UTC]
blasted teachers and their homework.
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DigiTails [2006-03-12 02:37:35 +0000 UTC]
looks fun. I can't really crit 'till I see the full pic...but right now it kinds looks like the horse is in front of the women, I'd suggest putting it in back of her...
>_< I hope this hasn't sent many times...
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to DigiTails [2006-03-12 04:06:58 +0000 UTC]
*snerk* Nope, just once. And horses' heads are uber-big in comparison to people's, so that might be the thing that makes it look like it's in front. Actually, the head's a bit smaller than it should be for a full-grown horse. ._O I'm going with the story that it's a young'un. >.>;; Yeaaah. Although making the neck look more arched might make it seem that le horseh is leaning forward. Sanksies! n_n
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DigiTails In reply to quikCHANGEsilver [2006-03-12 04:12:12 +0000 UTC]
yeah, WIP are confusing to critque that well...ugh...I'm sure the full version will be spiffeh...
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to DigiTails [2006-03-12 04:15:13 +0000 UTC]
True. =__=; Mea culpa.
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dracotk [2006-03-09 03:06:15 +0000 UTC]
Horse! It's a horse! *huggles the horse* It's a horse!
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to dracotk [2006-03-09 03:11:49 +0000 UTC]
Yup. n_n *proud, because it's her first attempt at a realistic horse* Referenced a horse encyclopedia I have.
... o_. I dun' think you're not gonna like what's going to happen to the horseh, 'nii-san.
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dracotk In reply to quikCHANGEsilver [2006-03-10 21:52:00 +0000 UTC]
Mew? What you going to do?
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to dracotk [2006-03-10 22:17:19 +0000 UTC]
Soon's I color in the blade, y'll know.
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dracotk In reply to quikCHANGEsilver [2006-03-11 04:30:32 +0000 UTC]
*blinks* Nooooooo! *tackles* Noooooooooooooooooo! *huggle*
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to dracotk [2006-03-13 22:32:29 +0000 UTC]
Murf. *squoosheh-squoosh*
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quikCHANGEsilver In reply to TheDailyVicious [2006-03-09 03:10:14 +0000 UTC]
'Sanks yuush! *pokes at it* If I manage to get the skin looking more skin-like and figure out how to do hair and backgrounds, mebbeh. ._o Hopefully I'll finish it before my trial run of CS2 expires.
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