HOME | DD

Published: 2014-08-25 20:50:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
This is my first drawing of an eye and my first ever post on Deviant ART! Please tell me what you think and give me some c/c for next timeRelated content
Comments: 9
lostdesertfan [2014-08-27 21:23:54 +0000 UTC]
This is really good, especially for a first drawing!! The overall shape and upper eyelashes especially are really great, and there's some nice lighting and shadows in the iris.
For crit, I'd say the iris (and pupil, to a lesser extent) is slightly misshapen - not round enough - but then again getting circles to work is hard. If there's shading in the iris, there should be in the white too, but aside from that it's fine, I think. A very impressive first post, you're startng well
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
quirkyorangetiger In reply to lostdesertfan [2014-08-28 07:55:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I've always had trouble drawing circles but I'll make sure I try harder next time
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
lostdesertfan In reply to quirkyorangetiger [2014-08-31 20:04:14 +0000 UTC]
No problem Circles are the devil, but just practice and you'll get them perfect eventually!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
misty007xx [2014-08-25 21:04:56 +0000 UTC]
It looks great! some crit would be that the lower lashes cling together if you get what I mean, look at a ref, and the inside bit of the bottom line is a bit too thick. But apart from that this looks awesome
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
quirkyorangetiger In reply to misty007xx [2014-08-25 21:14:53 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I realised about the inside bit being too thick and the rest is all noted
👍: 0 ⏩: 1