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Juudisu [2011-11-14 14:29:09 +0000 UTC]

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The movements on the legs are correct, though you may inbetween them some more. It's good that the head is in motion, but the body and tail are far too stagnant. During a walk or a run, everything should be moving.

Remember that a run is essentially a controlled leap, so the spine should be curving and tilting as the body lifts itself off the ground and lands again. Also, the tail should probably show a bit more fluidity. Even if he is a dominant wolf who's keeping it held up, it would be impossible to hold it that stiff while running.

Overall, this is a good start. Runs and walks are not easy. Make sure that you watch a lot of real life examples of animals running, and keep on animating. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Bijutsu-san [2011-11-17 04:51:23 +0000 UTC]

I notice two things about the animation:
The front legs seem a bit off. The left leg in front never goes behind the right leg. It stays perpetually in front.
The second thing is that the head changes size.

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R0Z3H [2011-11-13 22:34:01 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME. The legs and head look great! tail looks all stiff though D: IT SHOULD BE FLOWING DRAMATICALLY IN THE WINNDD

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ShadowWolfee [2011-11-13 21:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Run into my favourites, wolf :U

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