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Published: 2010-06-24 19:24:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 20
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For my good friend *bigtgentry ! Her character Emily.I am so pleased with this! I did a good job with the legs I think..
The skin might look a little weird because I used my white pen, since I still can't find my skin colored pencil.
Sorry about the bad picture. >_< No full view please!
Anatomy critique is appreciated.
I just realized I forgot to color her belt. Fail.
Probably my last deviation for a while. D:
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For the anatomy, the arm with the hand on the pocket seems a bit too long - the hand arrives at the same level than the other hand but the elbow is supposed to bent; so it's not right. If this arm was tight, it would arrive at the knee (if that makes any sense).
The chest seems to go under the arms and I think you have this problem because there isn't really any shoulder.
On the left arm, we can't really see the difference between the fingers and the thumb. The arm and the hand aren't separated by a finer wrist.
I really have nothing to say for the legs, they are pretty nice! The left foot is especially good.
Hope it's understandable and I'm not too rude D: It's the first time I write a critique. (Okay, I put 3 stars to each thing on the rating because I'm really bad to evaluate drawings..)
Your last deviation for a while?
WHY? D:
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Thank you very much!
I definitely understand with the arms.. I fail at arms. >_< And hands.
Ahh, yeah.. I don't like shoulders.. And I like drawing flat chests, but they look very unrealistic. This was probably my first time drawing a real chest. (If you know what I mean.)
I am very happy with the legs!! Thank you, I used a SlimQuick ad for a reference for the feet.
Pretty good for your first critique! (:
Meh, long story.
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You're welcome ^^' I fail at hands and arms too! We just need more practise.
In fact the chest is okay, it's just that its position is strange.
Long story?
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Yes, exactly.
Mm, yeah, it should be in more.
Even my parents thought the chest looked weird. >_<
Yes, very long. And complicated. And probably not a good story.
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I might tell you in the chatroom... >_<
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It's not bad but you should define the shoulders more and the breasts are little too far apart (if that makes any sense 
Overall, it's a nice picture and shows potential. I would give you a formal crtique but I'm not a premium member
What medium did you use? Colored Pencils?
I hope I didn't sound mean because I'm not rying to be 
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Yes, that makes sense. I know that arm is too long, I've been told that quite a bit.
It's very hard for me to make things even!!
Yes, colored pencils, pencil, and watercolor pencils.
You don't sound mean at all! (:
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Yeah, I know you were told that by a couple people, I didn't mean to sound repetitive
Oh it's ok 
I love colored pencils There are some great colored pencil artists here on dA
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No, it's totally fine! The more people say it, the more I realize I need to fix it. (:
Yes, practice...
Me too, colored pencils are fun! There are a ton of great ones.
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Ah, ok 
They are lods of fun 
Do you know any good ones? Some of my faves are ~L-artmaker , ~dexteritza and ~ZombieLady
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I like =3lda , =Tajii-chan and =ricko-chett
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its good but the arm onthe right is a little two long. other than that i love the legs and feet i love her eyes and her clothes are cute.
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Yes I know it is. >_<
Thank you very much.
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