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raining-pandas — Tell Me I'm Wrong, Darling 4
Published: 2008-07-13 21:14:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 3827; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 7
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Description Manga/Anime used: Shugo Chara
Pairing: Amuto
Rating: T
Note: This is the last chapter~!


~~~~~~Amu's POV~~~~~~

"Ikuto!!!!" I yelled. He stopped and turned when he heard my voice. His face looked frightened, like he wanted to run away but his body wouldn't move. 'Oh, Ikuto, I'm so sorry for doing this to you.' I thought as I ran towards him.

Finally reaching him, I flung my arms around him in a tight hug.

"Ikuto, I have to tell you something!" My eyes sparkled as they looked into his mesmorizing blue ones. Some of the fear had left them, but it had only been replaced with a worried curiosity. I took a deep breath. After all, I wasn't sure if his reaction was going to be the one I wanted. "Ikuto, I-"

I was cut off by a harsh tug on my arm and a pair of lips crashing against mine. But they didn't belong to Ikuto.

Once they'd stopped kissing me, I glared angrily at who it was. Just as I'd expected, it was Tadase-kun. He wrapped his arms around me, stopping me from getting away.

"Tadase-kun, let-" Again I was cut off by a hand covering my mouth.

"She wanted to tell you that she's my girlfriend now, you thieving cat! So leave her alone and don't you dare ever talk to her again!!!" He said and turned my head to forcfully kiss me again.

".........Alright......." Ikuto whispered, and slowly walked away.

I wanted to scream, but I couldn't. I wanted to escape Tadase's grasp, but I couldn't. I wanted to fight back, but that last word had drained everything from me, and I couldn't.

"Never go near that cat again." Tadase whispered darkly into my ear before letting go of me and walking towards the rest of the stunned guardian's. "Don't worry about her, she'll be fine. Let's go." They all walked away, and my legs collapsed.

I layed there on the ground letting myself cry. 'What had happened?' I thought. 'Why? Why had Tadase done that?' I thought back to his normal angel like expression and then his bitter kiss and his harsh voice in my ear. It just didn't fit. 'And now because of him...I'll never be able to tell Ikuto that I'm sorry and how much I love him.' I continued to let myself cry on the abandoned street for a few more minutes and then picked myself up and walked vacantly back home.

~~~~~~~Tadase's POV~~~~~~~~

Even I had surprised myself by how harsh I'd acted, but I didn't regret it. Now that I finally had her, I wasn't about to let Ikuto steal my Amu. I'd seen her walking up to Ikuto that day in the park and decided to do some spying. I followed her as she arrived at his apartment and hid around the corner listening.

I was about to leave after she had walked away until I heard Ikuto whisper something. I inched closer to the door and heard him say, 'I love you, Amu.' Inside, I burned with rage.

'How dare he think that way about my Amu?!' But since she was sure to be angry at him and she had me, I hadn't been too worried. I decided to let it go for then and left.

But then today, she'd looked upset so I decided, just to be safe, I'd tell her not to get involved with that cat. When she started defending him, I knew it definitly wasn't looking good.

Then I saw something click in her eyes and then he showed up, making the situation even worse.

I was surprised when she suddenly hugged him in front of me. All of a sudden, I knew what that click had meant and I rushed in to prevent her from choosing him over me. It was completely out of my character but I wasn't going to lose her like that. I'd succeeded and now she was mine.

~~~~~~~~~~~One week later. Amu's POV~~~~~~~~~~~~

Another guardian's meeting, but I'd rather be anywhere but here right now. In the week that had passed by, I'd stayed out late every night searching for Ikuto. I'd never been able to find him and I was starting to lose hope, not only in the search, but in everything. My parents had scolded me for being out so late every night, but even when they prevented me from searching, there was no way I could fall asleep and I just stayed up all night looking out at the balcony praying that he would come...He never did.

While I was stuck at school or at home, I wandered around with empty eyes, not really paying attention to anything around me. The only thing that mattered now was that I loved Ikuto and I was never going to see him again. I hadn't talked to Tadase, or any of the other guardian's since then and I barely talked to my parents or Ami.

Suddenly, I remembered who was to blame for all this and for the first time in a while, I spoke.

"Tadase-kun..."

"Hn? Hinamori-san? Did you say something?"

"Tadase-kun........TADASE-KUN!!!! THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!!!! IF YOU HADN'T BEEN SO SELFISH!!!!! If....if....." My voice quieted to a whisper as I felt the knot in my throat tightening. "I'm sorry, Tadase-kun, I can't date you anymore. I.....I LOVE IKUTO!!!!" I shouted and ran out of the Royal Garden, tears streaming down my cheeks. I didn't pay attention to where I was running, I just ran.

I lifted up my arm to my eyes to try and wipe away the tears. Somehow this felt somewhat familiar, but I ignored the feeling and kept running. 'If I had a hole to crawl into...' I thought. Right as I finished thinking that, I felt the ground disappear beneath me and I fell into a deep hole.

"IT WAS A FIGURE OF SPEECH!!!!" I yelled. But something was wrong. Hitting the ground didn't hurt as much as it was supposed to. What the? What kind of ground is this?

"If you don't mind, I'd appreciate it if I could breathe, Amu."

Oh great, now the ground's talking to me! I must have hit my head or something.

"Did you hear me, Amu, I said get off!"

Heh, that's funny. The ground sort of sounds like-.......oh. Oh! "Ikuto! W-what are you doing here?"

"Um, more like, why did you randomly fall on top of me yelling really loudly in my ear? And, plus, I thought you didn't want to see me anymore."

"Um, well I was just, um..."

"And your eyes are all red. Where you crying or something?" His face turned from saddness to concern. Well at least that's a start. Oh yeah! I almost forgot!

I wrapped my arms around him in a big hug and I wasn't about to let go. "Ikuto, I'm so sorry!" I whispered in his ear.

"...Hey...Amu...what're you..."

I kept whispering that I was sorry. I was so relieved to have finally found him that my tears started all over again. His arms hesitently wrapped around me, trying to comfort me.

"Ikuto, I have to tell you something." I said once I'd calmed down a little.

"What? You're dating Tadase and some other guy now?" He asked jokingly.

I pulled away to look at him. "NO! The last time, with Tadase-kun...that wasn't what I'd wanted to say! I'm not dating Tadase-kun anymore. I broke up with him because........because I wanted to say that I love you!!"

His eyes widened and he just layed there stunned. "A-Amu......you......you really love me?" he whispered.

I nodded. "I mean, that is, if you're ok with it. Not that I'm asking you to be. I mean, I know I don't really deserve it after what I did to you! I made you so upset. I-"

I was cut off again by a pair of lips. But this time it was much better because they were the lips of the one I love. I kissed him back and he made it deeper, more passionate. So this is what it felt like to be kissed...properly kissed I should say. It felt good.

We eventually hesitantly broke the kiss. "I love you too, Amu," he said. Hearing those words made face explode into the biggest, happiest smile I've ever had. "And, Amu?"

"Yeah?"

"You really are suffocating me..."

"Ah! I'm sorry! I'm sorry!" I leaped off of him only to be pulled back.

"I didn't say stop!" he said smirking.

I blushed. "B-baka~!"


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Tell Me I'm Wrong, Darling END
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Comments: 120

hazellifer [2012-06-11 08:18:23 +0000 UTC]

PANDA-CHAN PLEASE

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TeamShikaIno [2011-10-25 06:34:20 +0000 UTC]

AWW I LOVED IT!! Amuto forever!!

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inuyashalover288 [2010-09-25 20:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Please make more cuz this is really good

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Twilightchan13 [2010-07-11 08:24:45 +0000 UTC]

I Love your work Panda!! Amuto....Ive waited for this for too damn Long!! Panda is god ^_^

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DaRk-BlOsSoM-AnGeLs [2010-04-28 07:01:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah thats it amuto rocks !! ( start killing tadase) jajajajaj jajajaj im evil jaja die tadase die !!! jajj

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wolfgurl831 [2009-12-10 04:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Tadase,
because one of them had to look like a freking flower
XD lol from some youtube video, Him in his gay cahra change and that sa a caption under it

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EdwardCullensluver [2009-09-14 10:51:45 +0000 UTC]

"Ikuto: What's that, Amu? You say you finally want to make babies with me? Well why didn't you say so earlier?! *picks up Amu and takes her off toward the bedroom*

Amu: WHAT???!!!! NO! I didn't say that!!!! Put me down!!!! PANDA-CHAN!!!!!!!! PANDA-CHAN, SAVE MEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!

Panda-chan: I'm sorry, Amu-chan, I can't hear you!

Amu: I THOUGHT YOU WERE BLIND!!!!!!!!!!" luffed tht bit to death! luv the story more!

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emobunny1234 [2009-08-21 06:49:51 +0000 UTC]

dude so great i love it ^^ i wanna know more

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Ikutoikutoikutoyaaay [2009-07-02 16:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Im gonna kill Tadase

Anyway I loooove this story

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HextechZydrate [2009-06-04 01:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Its too bad you wont be making a sequal(or at least thats what it seemed like)! I really enjoyed this story, A LOT!! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time, and after the last sentance, i was wishing for more, CRAVING it, in fact! I kinda wish you'd make another chapter, but im glad your not, because it opens up the possibilities of whats happening afterwards! I really loved it, fave fave fave!!! =^.^=
oh,one more thing.....
TADASE-KUN YOU JEEEEERK!!!!!*beats the crap out of Tadase*

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lookolook [2009-05-02 11:11:22 +0000 UTC]

awesome fanfic but if this was manga *drools* you must draw it Can you?? D:
then its the best amuto manga ever!! Now its the best FANFIC EVER im gonna put it in my faves

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raining-pandas In reply to lookolook [2009-05-02 16:14:58 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you <3 I actually thought of that while I was writing, but I really can't draw guys at all OTL That would be awesome if someone else would like to draw it for me! Unfortunately I don't know anyone who can...

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lookolook In reply to raining-pandas [2009-05-08 13:04:02 +0000 UTC]

haha i dont know but i love to draw but i shall send you something im busy with it now

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raining-pandas In reply to lookolook [2009-05-09 02:56:09 +0000 UTC]

alright cool

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hainexmiss [2009-02-11 20:43:13 +0000 UTC]

how can Panda-chan make a story when see can't see?

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raining-pandas In reply to hainexmiss [2009-02-11 23:44:53 +0000 UTC]

You don't need eyes to make a story, you just need your fingers ;]

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animewannabees123 [2009-01-02 04:38:41 +0000 UTC]

this fanfic is so sweet!!!!

kukuku

amuto babies....(imagining dirty things...)

hehehe

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mysticpro [2008-12-29 04:28:27 +0000 UTC]

ikuto is in amus bed!!!! *drowls with exitment* anyway love the fanfic pan-chiii-desu

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Chocolatepens [2008-11-28 07:00:51 +0000 UTC]

I LOVED IIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTT!
it was so funny....
PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE!

make more...

-RMK (BIG random fan; XD)

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tigerlilytessa [2008-11-11 19:15:37 +0000 UTC]

*points gun at you* no finish... next chapter... or else..... *evil stare, nibbles on cookie* XD

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raining-pandas In reply to tigerlilytessa [2008-11-11 21:07:08 +0000 UTC]

*steals gun and points it at you, takes your cookie and nibbles* Make me C:

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tigerlilytessa In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-12 05:44:40 +0000 UTC]

m *glues u on desk chair and snatches cookie away* if u dont make a new one u wont ever get a cookie AGAIN

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raining-pandas In reply to tigerlilytessa [2008-11-12 21:29:51 +0000 UTC]

mmmmmmmmmmmm maybe I don't WANT another cookie C:

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tigerlilytessa In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-12 21:34:10 +0000 UTC]

*goes on ma knees* PLEAASE????

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raining-pandas In reply to tigerlilytessa [2008-11-12 21:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Sorry, but I doubt it'll happen any time soon D: That's all I got xD;; maybe I'll try writing a bit more over Christmas break...

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tigerlilytessa In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-13 05:37:43 +0000 UTC]

YAY

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Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-10-30 07:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Please write chp 5

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-02 03:54:55 +0000 UTC]

Um, ch.4 was the last one, actually.

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-02 09:50:17 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW!!! Why?!? It was so intersting and I wanted to know about how Tadase feels about it and what the guradians might say about it...Life sucks...

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-02 14:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Tadase obviously hates it :'D I was thinking of possibly writing a sequel for it but I haven't been in the writing mood lately so it may be awhile

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-06 09:55:58 +0000 UTC]

WHY!

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-06 21:52:12 +0000 UTC]

School started a while ago so I actually have something to do during the day so...idk, I just kind of stopped writing I've been feeling a little bit more like writing recently though so maybe I'll get started on it soon...

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-06 22:16:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh...I know how you feel. Writer's Block.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-11 21:12:43 +0000 UTC]

Writer's Block is a destroyer of worlds D': If you go here ->[link] I started The Epic Fanfic (another of my amuto fanfics) thread in the RPG forum so people can add to it instead of me having to worry about it I think it had a great start and it's probably even better than Tell Me I'm Wrong, Darling O:

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-14 07:50:42 +0000 UTC]

I dont know where to go to read it

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-15 00:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Well, first you have to register and then once you do that, go to the Role Play forum and The Epic Fanfic is one of the threads :] (my username is PandaDAIsuki)

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-15 03:04:50 +0000 UTC]

OMG! where did you get that L Icon.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-15 03:25:58 +0000 UTC]

*grin* From the future C:

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-15 14:15:47 +0000 UTC]

What did you think of the movie then

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-15 16:22:54 +0000 UTC]

O: Well...I FACKING LOVED ALL 3 *v* They were extremely epic.

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-15 23:33:08 +0000 UTC]

There are three death note movies I thought three was only 2

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-15 23:40:25 +0000 UTC]

There's 3. The 3rd isn't out in the U.S. theaters yet, though, and it's just about L and has almost nothing to do with the Kira case C: but I still loved it because.....it was about L xD

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-16 07:06:00 +0000 UTC]

it talks about L's past.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-17 23:14:13 +0000 UTC]

Actually, it talks about his future xD Sort of...It's about his last 23 days alive after writing his name in the Death Note in the 2nd movie

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-18 06:29:14 +0000 UTC]

I didn't finsh watching the death nte moive but did you say that L killed himself

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-18 20:47:58 +0000 UTC]

......Yeah, basically xD It's completely different from the manga/anime so no spoilers. He figured out that Light was going to use Rem to kill him with the Death Note so he wrote his own name in there first.

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-19 13:00:20 +0000 UTC]

OMG OMG OMG... He killed himself...doesn't he go to hell if he did suidce

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-19 21:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Well, since he used the Death Note......I'm pretty sure that means he goes to "nothing". But, as I said, the movie's ending is completely different from the manga/anime ending so...

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Neko-Mage-Lycra In reply to raining-pandas [2008-11-20 06:31:58 +0000 UTC]

...So he is a ghost.

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raining-pandas In reply to Neko-Mage-Lycra [2008-11-20 21:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Not exactly, I don't think :\ Ryuk said that for people who use the Death Note, there is no going to heaven or hell, there is simply nothing. So, I think he just died basically and his soul just completely disappeared for good.

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