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I don't waste time. Here the last chapter.34. Just one last hug
Rango couldn't stay any longer in the saloon and went outside. He looked around.
Where did they gone? When he met Priscilla, he knew they stood in front of the town. Rango didn't waste time and walked to the edge of the town. He didn't need search long. Beans and Jake began to move again. He saw how they came back. He stayed in the town's entrance and waited for them with expectant posture.
Beans stopped. Jake did the same and looked at her with asking eyes. Beans glance lifted up to his face.
The rattlesnake narrowed his eyes when he realized a pleading request.
Beans lips trembled a little when she spoke: "Let me give him a last hug."
Jake hissed upset. Beans pressed her hands together and looked at him with pleading eyes.
"Just one last hug. Please."
Jake narrowed his eyes more, but then he sighed darkly and nodded.
"Just one last one."
Beans sighed thankfully with relief. Then she avoided his glance and walked forward. Still with lowered face.
Rango watched her thoughtfully and fear rose inside him. He felt, she didn't have good news for him and not for them together. There was no together anymore.
When Beans stood in front of him, she lifted her face and looked into his eyes. She didn't have to say a word. The chameleon could read the answer in her eyes, which looked at him sadly.
Slowly Beans thawed. She embraced him softly and laid her head on his shoulder gently.
"I'm sorry," she whispered. "I gave my word to him."
Rango was like paralyzed. Hesitantly he hugged his arms around her and held her tightly.
Beans gave a sudden sob and Rango began to pet her back.
"It's okay, it's okay," Rango said calmly. "I understand."
Beans closed her eyes and pressed herself closer to Rango.
"You have to be strong," he continued, despite the words hurt him terribly.
Doc watched the scene sadly in distance.
"What is he doing?"
Doc looked to the side with surprise. "Oh, Bill. What are you doing here?"
"Just to see the end of that damn story. I was just curious what that little dummy sheriff…"
He stopped when he saw Rango and Beans standing very tight together.
"Uh, what's going on with them?"
Chorizo scratched his head. "Making half-love standing up?"
Kinski gave him a hard slap on his head.
The two lizards realized nothing around them. Beans had loosed herself a little. She pressed her forehead on Rango's head and snuggled him fondly.
"Take good care for yourself," she said. "Do you promise that?"
Rango swallowed and his lips trembled. "I will do."
"You promise?"
"I promise. For you. Only for you."
She touched his face. She pressed her lips on his. That's the way she used to kiss him, like the day before the robber had attacked him. But this time the kiss became more intensive.
He opened his eyes. He saw tears on her cheeks.
He didn't interrupt the kiss. The tears touched his lips and he tasted the salty taste.
"Do they want to stay there for the next few years?" Stump asked.
He had never seen a kiss which was longer than one minute or less.
Suddenly, after more than one minute, Rango took her head and pushed it away from him.
"You have to go now. Don't make it more badly. I will never leave you."
She pressed her chest on his. He could feel her heartbeat, which pumped very fast.
"I don't want to leave you."
"I know. Be a brave girl. Do it for me. Don't make me cry."
He looked to the sky, where the moon became visible in the dusk.
"Look at the moon every night. I will look at it, too."
Beans got tears in her eyes again. She pressed her eyes and the wet drops rolled down her cheek and touched Rango's clothes.
He bent forward and kissed her cheek. He wished he could save the tears. He licked his lips. Dear, he never had taste her tears. He never saw tears in her eyes before. Not even when he had forced to leave the town long time ago. Only sadness he had found. But no tears. Now there were only tears.
There was a rattling sound in the air. Jake became impatient.
Beans pressed himself closer to Rango. Her hands trembled. Rango pressed the girl tighter.
"You have to go, please go."
He gave her a last squeezing hug. Then he took her arms away from his body.
"Go, and don't look back."
She pressed her lips together.
Rango forced a sad smile. "Do it for me. It will make it easier for me."
Beans shook her head. "I hate it to say goodbye."
"Me too, but be sure, I will never say goodbye. Even not a farewell."
She embraced him again and whispered softly: "This goodbye is not forever. I promise."
"Don't break your promise to him," Rango said, although he wished she would do.
A new rattling sound let them froze and Beans managed to walk one step back. Rango had much bother not to hold her back.
Beans hesitated, but the rattling became more vigorous and she took two steps more back.
"I have to…"
Rango nodded, but before she turned around, he spoke the words, which burned on his tongue a long time.
"I love you."
Her eyes flickered when her eyes became wet again.
Rango smiled warmly. "No promise in the world can change that. I hope you know."
Beans pressed her lips together. "I know," she replied hoarsely.
She lowered her glance. " I love you, too. I wanted to say that long time ago, but… I don't know why I never did…"
"At least we did it now," Rango anticipated.
Beans chuckled nervously. "Yes, we did. I hope, it is not too late for you."
"Better too late than never…"
They winced when a threateningly rattling rattlesnake broke the silence again.
Beans threw herself forward, hugged Rango very tightly. Then she let him go and ran away. After few meters, she became slower. Rango watched her, but she didn't looked back.
His stomach clenched more and more together when she walked away step by step. Until she reached the rattlesnake. They changed a few words, then they disappeared into the dessert. She became smaller and smaller and he got a lump in his throat. He didn't realized anything. Nothing. Everything seemed to be like empty space around him.
He just realized footsteps when a person went next to him but he didn't look to the side.
"You let her go?" Bill asked in disbelief. "With him?"
Rango sighed deeply without to look at Bill. "I gave my promise. She gave her promise. I can't break it. She can't break it."
"But, I thought… I thought you would fight for her like last time."
Rango shook his head slowly. "I can't. I gave my word. I never break a promise which I give."
Bill scratched his head under his hat. He didn't understand the world anymore.
"Uh… Bill? What are we supposed to do now, Bill?" Chorizo asked.
"What? Oh… I think we ride… Or no… first a drink."
"In saloon?" Stump asked.
Bill snorted. "Where else?"
Kinski lifted his hand. "Who will pay the bill?"
"The one who is asking."
They left the place but Rango. He stayed there and looked in the distance where Beans and the rattlesnake had gone, until the night enveloped the sky.
- End of part one -
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Comments: 28
Romantic39 [2017-07-28 15:53:42 +0000 UTC]
I read the whole story!
It's just amazing and unusual. Of course, I love Jake and Beans. They are both strong characters.
And I never thought they would be together.
But I think the Beans must be with Rango. Hit me if I'm wrong!
I'm curious , what will life Beans and Jake.
And what about Rango.
But I zmetil what is already the second part and I started to read it. The comments soon.
In General , this is my favorite Chapter. No , of course there's more. But she touched the soul.
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ReScripta In reply to Romantic39 [2017-07-29 10:54:26 +0000 UTC]
Hi, thank you, thank you for your review. I'm glad you like it.
Yes, I liked to write this chapter. It is sad, but I liked it. I cried some tears while writing.
For sure, Rango and Beans should be together. And it wasn't easy for both. And it will happen more and more. Well, let's see what will happen more.
Thank you!
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Bat13SJx [2017-07-04 13:40:34 +0000 UTC]
My gods!! my heart! please Rango! fight for Beans! Oh gods i was emotional while reading this.
Seriously, yes!! there needs to be a sequel with Rango and Bill and his gang getting beans back!!!
I seriously thought while they hugged, Beans grabbed Rangos gun and when she hugged him one last time and ran off, Rango would realize his gun was missing and Beans would be seen with it aimed at Jakes face and she shoots him, but I'm sure i would have been hated by Jake fans for the very idea.
but still, i love reading your rango fanfics. They bring me back to when i first watched the movie.
I laughed when Bills gang had no idea what or why Rango and Beans were doing as they hugged. Such dorks XD
Lols. Kinski gets the hard end of the stick X3 There needs to be more Kinski moments XD heheheh... *goes to the corner*
But seriously, keep writing. these are great :3
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-04 13:51:24 +0000 UTC]
Hi, thank you, thank you, thank you. That's so great of you.
Uh, yes, I've got tears in my eyes too while I wrote the chapter.
Yes, I'm planning to write a sequel. There is just one problem, I miss the main line for the story. I know how it should go on, but I need a good antagonist.
Uh, uh. Eh, yes, a gun shot could be also a solution, but I hate such kind of tragedies. I totally hate it. And because I love Jake. I cried like crazy when I read a fanfiction where he died. No, no, no. I don't want to read that again.
Indeed, I also love to read Rango fanfictions. It keeps alive the feeling of the movie.
Yes, yes, Bill and his gang. Maybe have no much for emotional things, but.... who knows. XD Kinski will pay the saloon bill tonight.
Thank you for your great comment.
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Bat13SJx In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-04 15:50:19 +0000 UTC]
welcomes :3
cools :3
you arent having roscoe in it?
heheh yeah i figured. Jake is a popular character.
X3 heheh most likely Kimski wont pay. hes an outlaw. lols
Of course :3 Thank you for the amazing fanfic
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-05 12:13:55 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your comment.
Well, I didn't plan to involve Roscoe, cause he died while explosion.
Yes, Jake is still one of the most famous movie characters. But maybe also because I love snakes. :3 Rango is my next cute character. And Bill my favorite.
Okay, I don't want to expand on the pay of the bill. XD Even if he would not pay, Rango isn't in mood to take care for such things at the moment.
Well, I started the first ideas for the sequel. I have an imagine of it, but I don't know whether I can finish it before I write the next fanfiction which I planned to write. I have to see what I finish first. I hope I don't confuse you with so many stories.
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Bat13SJx In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-05 16:12:26 +0000 UTC]
oh yes right.
Unless he survived! 03o
X3
haha awww. X3 I cant wait! Either way, Im excited to see both
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-05 22:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Yes, unless... but I have another enemy in my mind. Today, I think, I found the solution.
^^ Yes, it will be a relief to see them together again, because the enemy will have bad plans... I don't want to give spoilers. I will try to write it.
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Bat13SJx In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-05 22:54:56 +0000 UTC]
aww cools :3 I'm so excited!!! ^w^
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-06 09:42:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Don't know when, but I try to write the first chapters this month. I just try. I can't promise. XD
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Bat13SJx In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-06 19:10:22 +0000 UTC]
yay ^w^
take your time. dont feel rushed :3
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-07 10:08:14 +0000 UTC]
By the way, I have to think about the melodie "Once upon a time in the west" with that scene. But a beautiful melodie.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=i3Q8h-…
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Bat13SJx In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-07 20:06:49 +0000 UTC]
oh I love that movie. and For a Few Dollars More <3 such beautiful movies and soundtracks <3
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-07 22:35:52 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. I also like some old western movies with John Wayne. Or the funny western movie "Support Your Local Sheriff". XD
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Bat13SJx In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-08 00:50:50 +0000 UTC]
nice x3
i should check those out :3 I am mostly a fan of the spaghetti westerns myself
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-08 10:31:21 +0000 UTC]
Same here. Some Bud Spencer and Terence Hill movies in western aren't bad, too. At least some of them. From one movie, I could imagine the theme song for Rango. XD Rango has also a 45 gun, hasn't he?
www.youtube.com/watch?v=15V-bx…
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Bat13SJx In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-08 22:35:26 +0000 UTC]
ah cools :3
i think so. sounds right
.45 revolvor yeah
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ReScripta In reply to Bat13SJx [2017-07-10 09:07:30 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. Thanks.
With a bit of luck, I will upload the first chapter of the sequel this week.
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DianavQgdk [2017-07-04 13:26:50 +0000 UTC]
No!No! No! No! NO!
I don't believe it! Rango didn't do anything! Oh my God!
I don't believe it!
You managed to bring me to tears! It's impossible! How? Why?!
God... it really breaks my heart!
My hands are shaking!
I was scared when I learned that this last Chapter!
But there will be a sequel!
Hope this year?!
I now have a little hands are shaking... I...I...
It's just...
You were right scarf I need. I never cry at fanfic! Never!
....
I hope... I hope that Rango and Beans all still be together! Beans will not be able to be with Jake!
Yes, it's a deal! But...
I have a lot of emotions , man...
I hope....
Continued... it will be soon , I have...
I won't be able to live with it! Can't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ReScripta In reply to DianavQgdk [2017-07-04 13:39:13 +0000 UTC]
So sorry, so sorry. I've got tears in my eyes, too.
Oh dear. I'm feeling bad for them. Even Bill don't understand that, but Rango don't want to break his promise.
But yes, I'm planning a sequel. First chapters are ready, but how I wrote, I still miss the big story line. If you want to know what I'm planning, I could tell you some ideas for the sequel.
Thanks a million for your emotional comment.
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DianavQgdk In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-04 13:42:34 +0000 UTC]
I...I...
You are not to blame! It is a masterpiece...
It's beautiful. And I'll wait for part 2!
Very!
If there's a problem with ideas...I can help!
You...you're good.
Thank you for this story , it will definitely remain in my memory.
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ReScripta In reply to DianavQgdk [2017-07-07 10:10:54 +0000 UTC]
Also a melody in my mind while writing. A sad but beautiful melodie.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=i3Q8h-…
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DianavQgdk In reply to ReScripta [2017-07-07 10:16:27 +0000 UTC]
It's right up to the ants! Now this tune will play when I will re-read this Chapter!
My God... tears are welling again...
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ReScripta In reply to DianavQgdk [2017-07-07 10:43:30 +0000 UTC]
Okay, I will do the same.
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ReScripta In reply to DianavQgdk [2017-07-04 13:53:41 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I liked it to write the story. If you want to help you can do.
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