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Published: 2018-11-03 00:59:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 994; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Hi, well, long time ago, I wrote the story "The Promise". Well, the picture is a little bit dark, but the scene plays in the middle of the deep night.
On the picture you can see how Rango was tied on a tree after a robber attacked him. You can't see it here but he has a knife in the side. After a while, Jake finds him and well, you can imagine what happened...
Rango was wide-eyed as he saw Jake’s head came out of nowhere in the darkness.
"He had mauled you very badly," Jake said mockingly.
Rango breathed faster.
Then he fell forward as Jake left his hold of Rango’s torso again.
"Well, how do you feel as a fallen hero?" Jake asked and smiled evilly.
Then he circled around the helpless chameleon and looked at the knife, which stuck in Rango’s right side of the body.
"I think it’s a bad feeling to have such a sharp thing in your body, isn’t it?" he laughed coldly.
Rango groaned exhausted and made every effort to keep himself on his feet, but he couldn’t. Repeatedly, his body tensed up and he fell back on his knees. Jake looked at him calmly. It gave him pleasure to see how his rival suffered pain.
"Should I press it deeper inside you?" Jake asked sarcastically and laughed.
Rango raised his head and looked at Jake pleadingly.
Jake shirked his look. "Well, actually I'm just came here to tell you good-bye, brother."
Rango uttered muffled cries with effort. But Jake acted as if he would not listen his cry for mercy.
"Adieu, brother," he said and turned around and crawled away.
Behind him, he heard Rango’s pleading cries. It was a heart-rending wail.
Jake smiled mockingly. "Nice try. But I don’t fall for your pity act."
Without reducing his pace, he walked his way.
As soon as he was out of sight, Rango cried louder.
Jake snorted. "How ridiculous."
He stopped and listened for a while Rango’s muffled cries for help.
Then, there fell a silence and after that a piteous weeping.
A cold smile played on Jake's lips. "So, he asks me to help him? How stupid can you get?"
He grinned again. "All right. As a rival, I will do only a little favor for him. "
With these words, Jake turned around and crawled back to the old tree. Rango hung limply on tree branch, completely hopeless.
"And this was called a hero," Jake muttered arrogantly.
In slow pace, he crawled to the injured chameleon and stopped a few meters in front of him. When his shadow fell on Rango, the chameleon raised his head hastily. Jake stood before him and said nothing. He didn’t move a facial muscle.
With panic, Rango shifted from one foot to the other.
Jake sighed annoyed. "Listen. Just because you’re my favorite rival, I'll just do a little favor for you."
With this, he crawled around the chameleon and bit off the branch, where Rango was tied. Rango yelped as he fell to the ground and the branch landed on his back. Jake took a little tree branch inside his mouth, put it behind Rango’s head and managed to remove the gag. Audible Rango gasped for air.
Disgusted, Jake spat out the piece of wood again and turned around.
"Well, that’s all. From now you have to shift for yourself."
"No, Jake ...," Rango gasped exhausted.
"What?" Jake asked hypocritically. "You wanted to scream. Now you can do it.”
"But here… nobody is here.”
"Oh really? Bad for you."
Rango shivered with fear. "No, please, Jake. Help me!"
Jake smiled mockingly. "Helping you?"
"Jake, please ..." Rango moaned and breathed heavily. The blood loss took his vital force, although the knife still stuck in the wound.
Jake raised his eyebrows. "As you wish."
With these words, he aimed his gun at Rango.
Rango was wide-eyed. "What are you doing?" he asked in panic.
"What do you think? I put you out of your misery,” Jake replied monotonously.
"NO! Please don’t!" Rango moved quickly, but then he squirmed as the branch touched the knife. He yelped with pain, and then he lay on the ground like frozen.
Jake dropped his weapon. "Well, you don’t want a coup de grace? As you wish. It was just a suggestion. "
With this, he turned around and wanted to go again. Rango wailed loudly.
Jake looked behind himself. Rango tried to get up but he did not come up, because the tree-branch still held him on the ground. Whining he lay on the ground, panting heavily.
Jake turned away.
"Jake, please. Please, Jake! Don’t leave me here! I don’t wanna die! Please, Jake, please! You can’t leave me just here! "
"I can’t?" Jake laughed mockingly. "Of course I can."
Rango sank on the ground. Because of the knife he couldn’t move.
"Jake, please! I do everything you want! "
Jake paused. He smiled coldly. "Oh really?"
"Yes!"
Jake grinned. "Forget it."
"No! I'll do everything!"
"Forget it more than before."
Jake acted as if he wanted to leave him.
"Jake, I do everything!"
"Really everything?"
He turned around. Rango nodded hastily. The pain drove him to blind panic. He did not want to die.
Jake chuckled darkly. "Well, you promise to do everything?"
"Yes ..." Rango broke out in tears again.
Jake chuckled. "But the price is high ..."
"Whatever you want, I'll do it."
Jakes grinned broadly. He turned his body and leaned it relaxed against the tree.
"So, you are going to do everything?"
Rango wept desperately. Tears ran down his cheeks. How long wanted Jake torment him?
"Yes! I do everything! "
"But I tell you, the price is high ..."
"I'll do everything you want."
"You promise?"
"I promise!"
...
(The Promise, Chapter 2)
The whole story, you can read on fanfiction.net www.fanfiction.net/s/12080525/…
or on deviantart.com. Look at my account.
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Comments: 7
RomaKim [2018-11-05 07:38:17 +0000 UTC]
I like the style, the setting, and now I can see how it went in your story
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ReScripta In reply to RomaKim [2018-11-10 14:38:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
Well, maybe it's too dark, but I will upload the same picture for the cover and I will make it brighter for the title.
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DianavQgdk [2018-11-03 11:43:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow!
I like the color. It's so beautiful, thank you!
I read your stories sometimes. I like them very much!
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ReScripta In reply to DianavQgdk [2018-11-03 12:30:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
That's so great of you. ^^
I also read your story about Bill from time to time.
Today I will upload the picture with Beans.
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DianavQgdk In reply to ReScripta [2018-11-03 12:39:53 +0000 UTC]
Hurray!
I'll be waiting. Thank you too!
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ReScripta In reply to DianavQgdk [2018-11-03 12:54:05 +0000 UTC]
XD Thank you very much!
At the latest in the evening. See you then.
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