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ReverseTheEclipse — Evie and Torch

Published: 2010-03-17 23:44:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 423; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description You have just been slapped so hard with a spoiler it couldn't have left a darker bruise XP

Umm yeah, remember this?



I mentioned that Autumn's mother was a Lynx named Evie Bloom, and that all Shadow knows is that her father is a brown furred hedgehog named Torch.

Well...this is Torch, and no, he's not UnLight's long lost identical twin; this is UnLight himself.

LONG STORY! You'll hear it later.

Just know this is towards the very end of WoLaD. I'm hoping to draw you in...curious of what brings UnLight from being Mukot's beloved son, to being kissed by a lynx girl.

Anyway, Evie is my first female lynx character...Mackenzie was my first lynx character, period. Evie's older brother, the one who gives Autumn to Shadow, is named Jasper, and he'll be done eventually.

Her full name is Evelyn, but she is known simply by Evie. She first meets UnLight, who goes by the name Torch around her, when she is thirteen. He tells them he is 20, which is the accurate age of his body, when in reality he, like Shadow, is already over 2000 years old. By the time he leaves to go home, she makes him promise not to get a girlfriend, which he goes along with just to appease her.

Now, why he goes back, and how we get to this...I can't tell you. Well, this is all I can say.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT.

It happens with Shadow, and it'll happen with UnLight. Seriously if you want to know more, keep up with the story and ask me about it XP

Anyway, he eventually does go back, and she's grown up after three years. Needless to say UnLight discovers another side of himself, and his heart. Also needless to say Evie is still infatuated with him, and here she's giving them both their first kiss, catching him by surprise in the middle of a sentence.

Part of his expression bugs me, but what can you do XD He's just about to close his eyes at this point, but hasn't already.

You can see his arm thrown back in surprise as well X3

It's not all coming up roses though. Infact this is a very confusing time in his life, not exactly a happy one.

I ain't saying why. Maybe the description in Autumn's picture will tell you why I dunno...depends on how good you are at deciphering information.

Anyway, yeah, Evie came out alright. I struggled with her face, the position of her eye and nose most of all. You can see what features Autumn gets from both of her parents now.

Autumn looks more like a Lynx than anything else, but you can see UnLight in her...especially those orange eyes.

...her eyes are one of those features you'll see in only two people...leave it to Shadow and everyone not to pin down UnLight hmm? LOL you'll see why.

But yeah...I'll leave you to ponder all of this. Seriously I don't think I could spoil you much more X_X

Mind you this won't be until the second to the last story in WoLaD, and that's a long way off. Yeah...

Evie Bloom and UnLight "Torch" belong to me.

~ Camillia
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Comments: 71

ReverseTheEclipse In reply to ??? [2010-05-12 22:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much!! ^^

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chibipunk7231 [2010-04-03 00:47:38 +0000 UTC]

I think your hard word really pulled off with the slightly sideways view of Evie, I think the black tips of her ears are so cute. I also like how Torch is blushing too.

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to chibipunk7231 [2010-04-03 03:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you Jojo! That pose Evie is in was difficult XD I kept struggling with the position of her nose X3 Glad you like and thanks so much! ^^

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chibipunk7231 In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-04-12 08:17:41 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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QueenLeaShanneen [2010-03-25 09:22:35 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet! Great picture!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to QueenLeaShanneen [2010-03-25 22:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and thanks for the fave ^^

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QueenLeaShanneen In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-26 08:30:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Sayuri-Amaya [2010-03-21 04:00:59 +0000 UTC]

his hair is awesome! 8D i really like th pose, it's so cute *>w<* lovely work *^_^*

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Sayuri-Amaya [2010-03-21 04:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you! ^^

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KTWizard [2010-03-20 02:47:37 +0000 UTC]

It's so gentle and sweet, and yet colored amazingly. Awesome job!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to KTWizard [2010-03-21 04:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^ If only everyone could hear about what I've got going for UnLight. It breaks my heart <3

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KTWizard In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-22 03:27:43 +0000 UTC]

Don't spoil it!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to KTWizard [2010-03-22 03:41:23 +0000 UTC]

Nobody would care XP My other big fan is dying to know what happens XD

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KTWizard In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-22 04:44:34 +0000 UTC]

SEE! FANS!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to KTWizard [2010-03-22 05:45:33 +0000 UTC]

Umm yeah, notice how I said "other" big fan, not "one other" big fan? Yeah, she's like the only one who is actually into the story XD

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KTWizard In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-23 05:48:24 +0000 UTC]

i know more than two people read that thing! Don't sell yourself short girl!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to KTWizard [2010-03-23 18:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Sure, maybe three or four...I usually have to beg my closest friends to read it.

TSoTL was way more popular and WoLaD is a much better story.

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KTWizard In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-25 05:43:54 +0000 UTC]

Give it time! There are a lot of people out there who wait for a story to be finished before they read it, just for the sake of reading it straight through.

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to KTWizard [2010-03-25 17:13:49 +0000 UTC]

LAWL it'll take them longer to read it all of the way through than it'll take me to write it. I have a friend reading through the TSoTL series, and she's only up to "Wandering to Love" She still has "For the Love of Eternity" and "Until the End of Forever" left...and the last story is the longest.

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KTWizard In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-27 18:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Well your stories are long and amazing! Best not to miss any of the details!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to KTWizard [2010-03-28 03:36:05 +0000 UTC]

I guess so. I just gave you a long explanation of why UnDark is so evil in that other comment lol.

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Gemzybabee [2010-03-18 14:31:06 +0000 UTC]

OMG I WAS RIGHT IT WAS 8D

mate mate mate you have made me so hyper!!!


awesome....i must see more

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-18 19:53:24 +0000 UTC]

lol well, I thought it was kinda obvious, but yep, you were right!

XD I just came up with something more for these two in the story. Lots of stuff to come

Thank you!

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-18 21:33:56 +0000 UTC]

i must see!! DX dont kill me T^T

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-18 21:38:29 +0000 UTC]

Ah well...it's more about how the story ends...

I really need to finish the next chapter of WoLaD ^.^;

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-19 00:30:08 +0000 UTC]

u love taunting me DX

lolz ya cruel

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-19 04:24:25 +0000 UTC]

lol sorry ^.^; It's just, I'm always planning so far ahead and I get inspired to draw XD I swear I used to spoil everything to my friends on MSN back when I was writing TSoTL because that's all I wanted to talk about XD I couldn't spoil all of WoLaD even if I had an entire month xD There's so much to cover.

The last book of WoLaD will cover EVERYONE who is still alive and their individual hand in the final battle. UnLight's ending comes at the very end, and I mean after he's lost Evie. I just...wow, I think people will love it.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-19 15:46:51 +0000 UTC]

oh plllzzzzzz dont make me suffer DX

hey if i could write stuff like that i would i just suck at detail

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-19 20:23:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry <3

It takes time Gemzy...seriously. If you were to read my first story and not know that I had written it I doubt you'd believe that I had XD I've been writing for over ten years now. You can read "Love, Duty, and Friendship" and see how I've improved since then. Practice really does make perfect. You'll get better and better with the details. ^^

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-19 20:25:06 +0000 UTC]

i know

youres is just awesome

beileve me u turned me into a pshyco fan lolz

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-19 20:30:11 +0000 UTC]

XD Well, that wasn't my intention. I'm having to tell myself to keep quiet about stuff since I don't want to taunt you...I'm having so much fun with Torch and Evie's story though <3

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-19 21:16:38 +0000 UTC]

i need to seee

i'd probably love 8D

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-21 04:25:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, it gets kinda sad, really sad, then it gets better, then turns out great <3

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-21 15:00:04 +0000 UTC]

eeeekkk.....i need to see DX
stop tauntin me

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-21 20:27:30 +0000 UTC]

I would tell you more but I don't want to spoil it...it's hard to keep it a secret X_X

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-21 20:50:12 +0000 UTC]

noticed

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-21 20:55:34 +0000 UTC]

XD

One of these days I'll just spoil it all...

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-21 21:17:44 +0000 UTC]

no u wont

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-21 22:19:29 +0000 UTC]

Why not? I know you want me to XD

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-21 22:22:53 +0000 UTC]

i know but unfair to other people XD

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-21 22:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Eh, nobody else really keeps up with the story XD

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-21 22:51:49 +0000 UTC]

shame on them then

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-21 23:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Eh, it just doesn't interest everyone. *shrug*

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-21 23:34:49 +0000 UTC]

how dare O8<

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-21 23:46:09 +0000 UTC]

lol it's okay

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-21 23:47:45 +0000 UTC]

is not >3<

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-22 02:53:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it is...my stories are pretty long and not so easy to follow.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-22 20:40:02 +0000 UTC]

i like to listen

i like long storys

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2010-03-23 04:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm gonna try and work on WoLaD...I might have more inside stories to tell you if you'd like that ^^

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2010-03-23 13:18:09 +0000 UTC]

im listening

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