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Another one that explains itself. We've learned who Akeme is, that he's a spirit that sometimes wanders from the afterlife for a change of scenery. He was born into and raised during a war, so all he wants is peace, and the traveling he gets to see places and things that dying young denied him. One of these trips brings him to Spirit Island, where he sees Deannalee, a small girl that his spirit is drawn to protect, like a Guardian angel.

In the last page, he covered what he learned about her, her family, her friends, and her duty of having to be Guardian to their treasure, the Master Jewel, which, is the sister gem to the Master Emerald, made by the same person.

On this page, we see Deannalee starting to grow up. Seven years passes in these few panels, and we end it with her having recently turned fourteen, and, as Akeme said, growing into a beautiful young lady. Still for the moment he's only interested in watching over her, drawn to her youthful spirit.

But the look on Akeme's face at the end, as well as his words, allude to the bubble of happiness around Deannalee and the time he's spent watching her, threatening to burst. Any of you who read WoLaD will know what I mean, and if you don't, well, trust me this is where the story begins to get dark. Not only do things get darker but feelings start to bubble up, and even change, as you will soon see.

Anyway this page has a ton of Dee in it, understandably. You notice her hair style, namely the fringe, starts to change as she gets older, splitting off into more ends and such. Her outfit pretty much stays the same though; it's the dress the royals wear.

I tried many different backgrounds for this panel. I used sunsets a lot; the first panel was the one I did first, but when I did the one of older Dee it was reminiscent of when Akeme sees her sitting on the edge of the island for the first time, which was in the afternoon, so I thought a sunset backdrop would be a nice way of showing time has passed since then; it also alludes to the coming night, when things start to get dark.

In the other panels you've got the ocean view, jungle view, and then a night time panel, which was nice for Deannalee making jewelry by the fire. I made the lettering white in that one so it could be read. As for her element training the Guardians can wield all four, that is, only the Guardian WOMEN can. Any princes will have three but never all four. She's wielding fire here, because it was the one she wielded first, and thus is her strongest, closest to her personality.

In the fruit panel, Akeme mentions she likes starfruit, which is another part of her personality that is important.

Anyway, I did the sketch, writing, line art, flat color, and eye shading, while Gem did all of the rest of the shading and touches to the background and such =3

See you for page five! ...hoping there are no mistakes this time X_X

Akeme Yang belongs to Gem.
Deannalee Rodnara belongs to me.

~ Halo
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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to ??? [2013-06-25 02:38:32 +0000 UTC]

Naturally X3 And you're awesome for that

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-06-25 22:03:43 +0000 UTC]

XP number 1 fan

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-06-26 01:50:03 +0000 UTC]

Number 1 indeed lol you're practically the only one XD But still number one XP

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-06-26 20:30:18 +0000 UTC]

big number 1

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-06-27 01:12:47 +0000 UTC]

XP need a t-shirt that says that lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-06-27 19:50:43 +0000 UTC]

i'll find one

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-06-28 01:51:13 +0000 UTC]

I could try making one lol just need to know what to put on it XD

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-06-28 20:56:12 +0000 UTC]

lol XP try think

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-06-29 01:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Well number one fan just depends on what you want to call me lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-06-29 16:18:49 +0000 UTC]

my big sis my best friend my inspiretion

need i go on

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-06-30 01:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Nah I ain't that amazing lol

But if you say so X3 You're just as awesome

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-06-30 23:33:48 +0000 UTC]

X3 youre awesome

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-01 01:07:15 +0000 UTC]

I don't always feel that awesome lol but if you say so

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-01 22:29:58 +0000 UTC]

im right

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-02 01:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Hard to argue with ya sis X3 Even when in my head I disagree. Sometimes I just need ya to kick me in the butt lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-02 23:52:45 +0000 UTC]

i will XP

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-03 00:58:04 +0000 UTC]

I know you will lol

Course if I was anywhere nearby I'm sure you actually would kick me DX lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-03 21:54:02 +0000 UTC]

i woould XP

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-03 23:44:29 +0000 UTC]

lol XP

Nice to have an awesome friend like you. That's all I really have lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-04 22:11:57 +0000 UTC]

always gonna be there for yea

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-05 01:19:11 +0000 UTC]

I know

Just ignore me and my nonsense from now on honestly. I'll get used to things pretty soon and my life will go on like normal. I'll be fine <3

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-05 23:37:44 +0000 UTC]

i hope

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-06 02:22:53 +0000 UTC]

I will be

I can't explain my problems this time around other than just loneliness and feeling hopeless and unwanted and such, but I'll be fine =3

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-06 21:06:13 +0000 UTC]

well always here just dont keep putting youreself down it hurts

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-07 01:57:24 +0000 UTC]

I know...that's the only reason I'm trying to stop it, because it brings you down. Normally I'd just keep doing it because it's all I can do when I'm down. I don't really know why. I don't do it just to do it it's just how I honestly feel about myself.

But I'd prefer not to bring you down with me so I struggle hard to stop for your sake

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-07 22:09:06 +0000 UTC]

nah you can keep telling me cause i'll listen

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-08 00:31:33 +0000 UTC]

Nah I hate bringing you down with it...if I feel like belittling myself I'll just keep it out of our chats. No sense in us both being down especially not you after things have changed lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-08 20:17:24 +0000 UTC]

even so im here to lend a ear

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-09 01:27:05 +0000 UTC]

I know I just hate bringing you down is all

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-09 20:10:06 +0000 UTC]

you dont

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-09 23:56:55 +0000 UTC]

I do when I get really down and talk about myself badly, I know I do. That's why I'm glad you have people there to complain to about me lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-10 19:03:05 +0000 UTC]

theres nothing to complain about

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-11 00:13:40 +0000 UTC]

There is when I'm down on myself all I do is upset you then.

Haha your mum must know she has you get off the computer lol I'm a bad influence XP I'm glad though you need to get all the sleep you can since you have to get up with her.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-11 22:40:40 +0000 UTC]

youre nota bad influence at all

even mum says youre good for me

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-11 23:07:51 +0000 UTC]

But I must not be she wants you off and hey maybe she's right.

It's my fault that I can't be on earlier but even then you've got other things to do during the day...so...

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-12 22:56:29 +0000 UTC]

i dont actaully im stuck in

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-13 01:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Well you can get visits like from the bf and that's important I can't do that lol

Mom actually told me that at least you listen to your mother, when I said something about you needing to get off early. She likes to criticize me so much and I guess it's true. I really don't do anything with my life, not like you do.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-13 19:13:28 +0000 UTC]

i get criticized too

i wouldn';t worry i think you do fine

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-14 02:06:16 +0000 UTC]

Meh Mom doesn't think so lol least she thinks you do alright

Besides she's right I admit I'm a lazy nothing haha

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-14 22:35:25 +0000 UTC]

im lazy though

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-15 01:34:32 +0000 UTC]

Not as much as I am according to her. She's like oh at least Gem listens to what she's told. She's right lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-15 22:06:43 +0000 UTC]

i fear my mum shes so..loud

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-16 00:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah...mine can only be scary when she gets really pissed off.  I still agree with her though you're the much better person <3

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-16 23:41:23 +0000 UTC]

stop putting yourself down

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-17 01:49:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm just agreeing with my mother lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-17 22:14:29 +0000 UTC]

dont

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-18 00:17:32 +0000 UTC]

She's usually always right though is the thing lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-19 00:12:04 +0000 UTC]

nup

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2013-07-19 03:19:08 +0000 UTC]

Well I did say usually lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2013-07-19 23:01:56 +0000 UTC]

still

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