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Chapter 1

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Chapter 2

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Consider this the beginning of chapter two.  I'm not doing individual covers for each chapter but, eh, could be fun to split them up.

First of all, I'm sorry for the long delay to this page X_X I dunno I got busy with other things, both art and video games...this page sat like...two-thirds done literally besides the bottom two panels and I just...never went back to it.  I've had a break between video games for a few days so I decided to finally finish this.  I've really got no excuse I'm not "busy" the way Gem is so...I'm just lazy that's about all I can say.

Anyway the beginning of a new chapter in the story brings in a new face, and while he's not considered an antagonist, he's not exactly going to do much good for Deannalee, as Akeme is quick to point out.  We've gotten to this point in WoLaD, so you should know what has happened here and a good amount of what will come.  Basically Deannalee sees Kashkie and tries to flirt with him...keep in mind that how Kashkie comes to the village is a bit different than what I have drawn here but the outcome is still the same.

Kashkie is unfamiliar with the customs on Spirit Island, well, he knows as much as Shadow has told him.  He's ready to deal with it by politely letting Deannalee down.  What he is unaware of is how the rejection is going to work on her spirit.  What is unfortunate is unbeknownst to any of them, there's an even darker and deadlier force lingering in wait to take advantage of all of the turmoil.  Akeme, being a spirit, can sense it, but is unable to warn or protect Deannalee in any way.

All he can do...is watch.  Watch helplessly as he continues to fall deeper and deeper in love with this girl.

Everything will slowly, ever slowly...begin to transcend.

Anyway hope you enjoy this page!  I know I've been promising it to Demona909 for a very long time since it has her boy Kashkie in it lol Consider it a late birthday gift sis along with that doodle I did for you X3 Thank you for being patient with me <3

I'll try and get back to WoLaD too I just...I've honestly got no excuses T_T  It's just a good thing I've got this entire comic planned out from beginning to ending.

Sketch, Lineart, Flat Color, Eye Shading, Backgrounds and Writing are by me.
Remaining shading and highlights are by GemzyBabeeSonamy

Akeme Yang belongs to Gem.
Deannalee Rodnara and Kashkie Erendei belong to me.

~ Halo
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Comments: 76

ReverseTheEclipse In reply to ??? [2014-04-07 03:45:11 +0000 UTC]

Haha I know you love Kashkie XD It's awesome to finally see him in digital =3 Thanks sis!

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ImRarityUnicorn In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-07 04:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it is You're welcome sis!

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Gemzybabee [2014-04-02 18:53:33 +0000 UTC]

NOOO DEEEEEE

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-03 01:07:51 +0000 UTC]

Poor Dee unfortunately T_T

Heck poor Akeme being able to do nothing but sit there.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-04 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]

oh i know..hes in tears

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-04 03:25:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww <3

I'm still reading through WoLaD it's getting to where Deannalee starts to get hurt...gah...

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-05 02:28:40 +0000 UTC]

nuuuuuuuuuuu

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-05 03:24:57 +0000 UTC]

I know it's so sad T_T Poor Dee

I can't remember my exact reason for Kashkie not being a bigger help...it needs to be something major he would never be that cruel and just ignore her

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-06 03:03:30 +0000 UTC]

perhaps deuslsioonal that innocent side he cant see it

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-06 03:15:57 +0000 UTC]

I think that was my idea something like that Kashkie would never...just pure ignore her I've got to come up with something amazing...same goes for Renaldo.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-07 02:50:43 +0000 UTC]

or you use Oblivion and Amadi for a exause. Oblivions darkness and pestelince hell even Kyoshos could've hid their eyes

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-07 03:55:55 +0000 UTC]

That's also true.

See Mukot's darkness affects Casselina she has a point where she tries to break out of it but Teikaru comes down VERY hard on her...I'm sure it was more Amadi's evil that ensnared him, and as for why Kashkie and Renaldo do nothing those are good reasons, like Oblivion or Amadi and even Kyosho that's true.

I hate to use Kyosho though since Akeme's spirit was there just pining for Dee lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-08 02:22:28 +0000 UTC]

ah but it could be Kyoshos . he wasnt himself

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-08 03:00:00 +0000 UTC]

That's true it could be.  Would add some drama that's for sure him unintentionally hurting the one that his son loves

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-08 22:32:08 +0000 UTC]

yeah very true

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-09 01:57:59 +0000 UTC]

Poor Akeme no wonder he comes so close to falling.  Can see a page of him struggling with that. ...makes you wonder what keeps him from holding on perhaps because he knows Dee would be joining him soon even if in his heart he doesn't want her to die, he just wants her to be safe.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-10 03:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah that's true it'll be fun to explain that

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-10 04:06:55 +0000 UTC]

It will I can imagine Akeme finding it very hard, having to imagine Kyosho affecting what happened to Dee

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-11 02:55:18 +0000 UTC]

You could draw Kyosho like a memory faded on like a black background son Akeme at the side of the panel and Kyosho faded on the background all evil like while Aleme talks about it or realises its him

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-11 03:32:25 +0000 UTC]

Humm, that might work.  lol I just need to figure out what point in the story Akeme figures it out.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-12 02:41:04 +0000 UTC]

trueeee

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-12 03:25:13 +0000 UTC]

Not sure where I'll do it maybe like...right before Deannalee's death or something.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-13 02:33:23 +0000 UTC]

Ah that could be

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-13 03:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Maybe him just getting a feel of the darkness and recognize it as being Kyosho's or something

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-14 03:36:35 +0000 UTC]

That would work

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-14 04:18:01 +0000 UTC]

I'll figure it out I need to get off my lazy butt and work on the page X_X

I still like that orphan mini comic just...my heart goes to poor little Candice.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-15 02:48:03 +0000 UTC]

should do a comic of Etheus and Robyne

OR Odaiba and his babies!!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-15 04:03:38 +0000 UTC]

You're crazy about Odaiba and the little ones aren't you? XP

It's either that or draw Amarie falling off a cliff DX

I'm annoyed they could have been such a darling couple too.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-16 01:07:37 +0000 UTC]

DX

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-16 02:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Ah well, I feel a little better, they got to make up at least. XP

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-17 03:32:04 +0000 UTC]

XP do you

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-17 03:57:25 +0000 UTC]

Yep Amarie isn't such a witch anymore lol

Coriolous was adorable earlier XP

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-18 01:55:46 +0000 UTC]

oh he was X3 little Sunny

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-18 03:48:40 +0000 UTC]

He's in love XD He's got his little baby and she has weather powers. He loves it XP And she's beautiful like her mama

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-19 01:35:07 +0000 UTC]

oh so beautiful X3 sunshine Rainbow

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-19 02:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Their little Sunny X3  Ah Cory's happy XP

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-20 03:05:39 +0000 UTC]

I bet he is X3

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-20 06:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh he's very happy he enjoys her little rainbows XP He'll take her everywhere as she grows up

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-21 02:41:10 +0000 UTC]

awww really

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-21 04:04:02 +0000 UTC]

He will you'll see them riding around on clouds together trust me XP

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-22 02:41:47 +0000 UTC]

awww so cute

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-22 03:43:01 +0000 UTC]

It is X3 Cory is one good father Roxy lucked out with him.

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-22 23:02:53 +0000 UTC]

oh she knows she has

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-22 23:44:31 +0000 UTC]

She really has lol

Cory is one of my favorite guys like, with Cain and Orpheous.  He's handsome and a lot of fun to RP too XP

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-23 23:29:22 +0000 UTC]

oh i notice he is XP

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-24 00:14:11 +0000 UTC]

That you do XP Ah Cory is fun lol

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-24 23:59:39 +0000 UTC]

iits like i love Odaiba

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-25 00:03:31 +0000 UTC]

Girl you adore Odaiba XD

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Gemzybabee In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2014-04-26 02:36:22 +0000 UTC]

no wonder XP

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Gemzybabee [2014-04-26 04:04:38 +0000 UTC]

No wonder indeed lol You come up with awesome characters

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