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ReverseTheEclipse — Under Our Tree

Published: 2008-08-17 02:38:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Sitting in shadows,
It's just you and me.
Thinking of love,
And what's meant to be.

We wonder how clear,
Our feelings remain,
Melting our hearts,
Making tears fall like rain.

Deathly afraid,
Of hiding them more.
Will they disappear,
Locking the door?

Who will speak first,
The silence will break,
And set free the love,
The first step they take?

Hear my heart speak,
Of how I love thee,
Sitting beside you,
Under our tree.

Do not be afraid...
Let love, set you free.

I'm not dead...just...dried up creatively, in every medium.

Things have been weird...like life playing against a monochrome background.

That inspired this. Aranelion and Camillia, sitting together, wondering if even love is real anymore.

I know there are mistakes. I apologize...but the mistakes help the message shine through easier I think.

~ Camillia
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Comments: 24

IsisConstantine [2008-08-24 13:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Great job

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to IsisConstantine [2008-08-25 21:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and thanks for the fave ^^

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IsisConstantine In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-25 23:11:43 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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QueenLeaShanneen [2008-08-24 10:45:25 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful poem and great pic!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to QueenLeaShanneen [2008-08-26 02:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much ^^ thanks for the fave!

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QueenLeaShanneen In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-26 10:15:18 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome!

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speeddemon2tailed [2008-08-23 08:14:56 +0000 UTC]

awwww poor arenelion and poor camillia

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to speeddemon2tailed [2008-08-26 02:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Yeah... Thanks

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speeddemon2tailed In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-26 03:03:01 +0000 UTC]

np *wink*

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Vampire-Echidna [2008-08-19 20:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Those words are just so beautiful and make me think of my dear loss. So much love.... The drawings are amazing and goes really well with this particular peace. very inspirational

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Vampire-Echidna [2008-08-20 17:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much I appreciate it very much.

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Vampire-Echidna In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-24 13:37:36 +0000 UTC]

always welcome my friend

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Rudolphtheehcidna [2008-08-17 15:22:11 +0000 UTC]

BEAUTFUL POEM!!!

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Rudolphtheehcidna [2008-08-17 16:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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Hedgehog-Rover [2008-08-17 12:36:01 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful Camilia. I like the dark rains effects ^^

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Hedgehog-Rover [2008-08-17 16:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Martin

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Hedgehog-Rover In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-17 19:36:13 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome Camilia

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Hedgehog-Rover In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-17 19:35:52 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome Camilia

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Ryota7777 [2008-08-17 04:53:18 +0000 UTC]

Es bueno.

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to Ryota7777 [2008-08-17 16:20:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Ryota7777 In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-17 18:25:46 +0000 UTC]

You got it.

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KTWizard [2008-08-17 02:44:55 +0000 UTC]

You truly are great poet.

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ReverseTheEclipse In reply to KTWizard [2008-08-17 03:25:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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KTWizard In reply to ReverseTheEclipse [2008-08-17 05:37:31 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome

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