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Published: 2005-03-29 01:41:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 621; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 17
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Zeus was a braggart chest puffing bruteAphrodite a petty mean spirited kind of ugly
so when they faded off I didnt even give
a second thought
The world's better
that they be lost to their epoch, but Apollo
Apollo was a poet,
healer, singer of songs
warm like the sun
portenting as the dawn
When the time came that he need be gone
so the people could carve new parthanons
in the guise of steeples to new gods
I stopped.
I saw him look into the dirt wide eyed
near to cry his eyes struggled to reason
the need for him
to be no longer
believed in.
As Apollo passed
I felt the sunshine cast
as a last surging warm
goodbye
and there
I cried
for what the world
would beget
bereft
of Apollo's kind.
<3
REVSCRJ
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Comments: 8
revscrj In reply to BrokenBridge [2005-06-04 04:56:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you- I have been intrigued by the reinventing and humanizing of mythology lately, glad its accesible to others
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animelala [2005-04-30 07:43:15 +0000 UTC]
wow thats a beautiful poem!!! thanks for your "words of wisdome" i didn't think any one would comment on my poem!!! u r right about what you said
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revscrj In reply to animelala [2005-06-04 05:05:14 +0000 UTC]
Thanks- and I hope you don't follow the "more common ending" route, but more than that I wish you a happy life.
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xam [2005-04-13 09:59:58 +0000 UTC]
every year, the man as child, come again.. his words to spread calm on wounds of time passing so quickly.
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LordOfSenses [2005-03-29 10:05:15 +0000 UTC]
I like the picture, it's like a little kid mourning Apollo. Apollo has always been my favorite of the gods, long may his spirit live in the hearts of children and artists!
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BloodBug [2005-03-29 01:51:32 +0000 UTC]
Dig the hidden splashes of color throughout the hair and face.
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revscrj In reply to BloodBug [2005-03-29 01:56:21 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I figured that the god of the sun would hold light more vibrantly than a mortal- nice that you noticed.
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