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RichardPratt ā The Dance
Published: 2013-08-15 08:50:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 569; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 6
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Oil on CanvasR2250
Struggled with this one, weird pose, but I like it
Reference provided by Dohje, it can be found here: dohje.deviantart.com/art/All-sā¦
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Nice details, reflections...lights and shadows!
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This isn't a bad composition. The lighting and use of colour compliments the entire composition well
Don't be afraid to try new works like this one, keep experimenting with styles and poses
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Hey man, appreciate the feedback!Ā
There are some things I'd like to change, as there always are. I think her back's actually too long which has had knock on effects on proportion, but besides that I think it's mainly the rendering of form that make it look a bit weird. Value's are slightly off next to her knickers which makes it stick out a bit more when it should curve round, but hey. It's not really noticeable on the actual painting, so I'm happy
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The best part of drawing is learning form your mistakes 
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hard pose to do - but you carried it off to perfection
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Thank you
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