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Deamons - Part 1Nice is a very nice place indeed, I see why they named it Nice. I wouldn't mind staying here a few more days, some sun would do me nice, but we had work to do. Keenan had been tracing the whole day, which left me alone with Vladislav. I didn't like the guy very much, and neither did he like me. I don't think he liked anyone now that I think about it, I never seen him smile once. He was Russian and was always waring a coat, even in this hot weather he wouldn't take it off. Maybe it reminded him of the cold winters at home, I don't know. Everybody know I hated him, but yet I got teamed up with him time after time.
Suddenly Keenan was standing in front of us, he was a guy that you never saw coming. He was also Vlad's opposite, always glad and willing to chat. He was Irish and had an uncontrollable black curly hair, kinda funny to watch.
"I located him" he said seriously and looked at me. He was a very good tracer, no doubt. "I'll be driving him your way, so move forward and stay ready". I nodded as response and he was off. I gave Vladislav a quick glaze and then we took off. I was faster than Vlad so I went ahead and up on the side in case our subject would run off. Then I saw something moving in the woods and I knew that it was time. I dove in and gave him a good kick in the stomach. Vlad was still not there so I took a good look at our subject. It was a pretty big werewolf, probably not completely tame yet and got crazy when he smelled blood. When it was me it tried to run of but Keenan was there and stopped it. His supersonic speed was perfect for containing the subject in the particular area.
"You know I have no pity for creatures like you" I said to the werewolf, knowing that it's human side could hear me. "Feeding of other peoples flesh is discussing. If I was in charge, I would kill you all.". The werewolf looked at me a smiled. "You are just mad that you got eaten once" he said. Being able to speak in it's evolved for was a proof that it wasn't a newbie, but an older werewolf. Combining that with the fact that it wasn't tame discussed me, how many people had it fed upon during it's days? "Maybe I should just kill you". I took of, charging a punch that would be lethal at least for a newbie werewolf. I was about a meter away from it when Vlad jumped between us and blocked my punch by freezing my shoulder. "They wanted it alive. Don't get out of your senses Angus." I hated that man so much. Angus wasn't even my real name, it was my middle name. Vladislav refused to call me by my real name, but I never found out why. I tackled a tree to get rid of the ice and gave Vlad an angry look. "And just where the hell have you been then?!" I said while warming up my shoulder. "You know I'm not as fast as you two. But I'll still get the job done before you do". I didn't really have a chance to stop him because of my shoulder, but with one punch he froze the entire werewolf. "Are you out of you mind?! He will die of hypothermia!"
"No he won't. His heart has stopped and he will be fine if he gets warmed up quickly enough. You were the one who almost killed him, not me. Now I suggest we call the cleanup crew."
"He wouldn't have died. He wasn't a newbie, he spoke.!
"You don't even know your own limit Angus. You barely know your powers, and I don't trust your so called control one bit. Be very careful."
I wanted to kill that man so badly, but I didn't have a chance before Keenan showed up.
"Nice work guys. The cleanup crew is on the way and will take care of it, but Vincenzo wanted us back as soon as possible so there will be a jet here in 5 minutes. We have to get out on the road before that."
I didn't object at all, I just wanted to get away from Vlad. I suggested that we raced there, knowing that Keenan would win anyhow, but he insisted that we should move as a group. So there is was another quiet run through the woods. When we reached to woods the jet was waiting for us, so we climbed aboard. There we saw that Berenice Pecora were waiting for us, dressed all in black as usual. She reminded in a way about Vlad, you didn't really see her smile a lot either, but since I had grown up with her she was almost like a sister to me. And how can you hate your little sister. Keenan seemed to be very happy that she was here and shouted "Bernie! How wonderful that you are here to greet your love after a successful hunt!"
The gaze that Berenice gave Keenan said one thing: Stop. But Keenan would never stop joking like that, it was who he were. "Come on, he continued, I know there is a panther inside you". Berenice may have the power to transform into a panther, but she was more like a... rock. She wasn't really much at all. She looked at Vladislav instead of Keenan. They got along a lot better, in silence.
"So it was a success. Very good. Keenan and Vladislav, you will be dropped of in Paris for standard procedures, and Gabriel will be going back to the house."
"Oh, so Vincenzo's favorite shall be given a special treatment it seems?" said Keenan and laughed. He didn't realize how much that hurt Berenice. I was Vincenzo's favorite alright, I was the son he never had. I was the son that Berenice was supposed to be. She had grown up being a disappointment, and even thought Vincenzo didn't show it we both know that was the case.
"Whatever. I think I'll just get some boring job in dull London while you guys are having fun in Paris." I looked carefully at Berenice, she had a great poker face, but I could see the sadness under it. Hopefully I hadn't made it worse.
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Comments: 27
chris-ticehurst [2013-01-20 02:29:13 +0000 UTC]
Great chapter and I'll check out your other works too!
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ronmaicol [2013-01-20 01:32:47 +0000 UTC]
paris .. like a dream we think of paris.. like the button that falls and we fail to sew paris...
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ronmaicol In reply to Robler [2013-01-26 22:15:10 +0000 UTC]
while you guys are having fun in Paris
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Alontwig [2013-01-01 23:28:36 +0000 UTC]
It's an interesting concept. Yes, you have some grammer issues but the story isn't damped by that. (By the way when you end a quote there is only one period.) Ex: "Hello." Alontwig said with out a thought.
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Robler In reply to Alontwig [2013-01-14 23:12:13 +0000 UTC]
thank you, i shall think about that ^^
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Alontwig In reply to Robler [2013-01-15 11:49:55 +0000 UTC]
Your quite welcome, keep working!
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DamonLSalvatore [2012-12-31 00:36:03 +0000 UTC]
I have been speaking English for years, and you write (type) a lot like me. So.. don't worry about it too much. Interesting story
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MizoreShirayuki11 [2012-11-26 07:59:14 +0000 UTC]
This was a very good read, although I didn't quite understand it until the end ^^' and don't feel bad. Most people don't have english as their native language, it just takes practice. Latin is my native language. Can't wait to read the next part.
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Robler In reply to MizoreShirayuki11 [2012-11-26 19:32:49 +0000 UTC]
part 2 and 3 is already out ^^ and i like to leave some things floating for a while, hopefully it gets the reader interested and does not bore them
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just-for-giggles [2012-11-22 02:58:41 +0000 UTC]
I love the opening line. "...I see why they named it Nice." Can't explain why, but it made me smile.
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Robler In reply to just-for-giggles [2012-11-26 19:33:00 +0000 UTC]
well, i'm glad it did ^^
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OfOneSoul [2012-10-22 04:21:29 +0000 UTC]
This was a very nice read. I can see that you're not very good with English , but it was still a very smooth, interesting story. I enjoy the narrative telling, I myself am not very good with narrative.
I really liked the names too - like Vladislav. Very creative and awesome.
*OfOneSoul
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Robler In reply to OfOneSoul [2012-11-05 18:42:56 +0000 UTC]
i'm glad you liked it, but unfortnalley you were the only one i will not add more of these right now, maybe in the future ^^
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OfOneSoul In reply to Robler [2012-11-06 04:33:37 +0000 UTC]
You totally should. And I will be watching you for more.
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