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robotanlst — [s] seer: see (unfinished)
Published: 2014-07-19 12:44:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 304; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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started working in this last night and honestly i really like how it's turned out so far! i do however want some ideas on what to do for the background and effects and such. im not really sure if i should change the seer outfits to be a bit more manly or something and change the perspective of the legs because they look kinda awkward. please critique this i really want to hear what you have to say!Edit: outlined and colored part of it. still having trouble with the legs though.
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heheh..im not a very good critique cuz I tent to put really high scores for everything, tho its true when it comes to my opinion but...
well first of all, I will have to say I LOVE the hair. it looks smooth, slightly peaks up in the back at a good spot and just looks really natural
another thing that I really liked was how you drew the angle of the face, its very appealing to the eye and it makes sense. faces that make sense are the best
the shoes look really nice too!
I like how you drew those shoes...
ive looked over the drawing quite a few times and I cant see many flaws, and the only ones I see are just extra pencil lines that probably will be erased later sooo
overall I give this a 5/5
ggg see this is why I suck at critiques
I only can ever say good things about drawings....
im not very good at constructive criticism XD
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I don't know a whole lot about homestuck aside from what you've explained to me, but i really like this. the way the clothing folds and flows is hella pretty and the pose isn't static at all. It's really interesting and different. I like your attention to detail on the belt in the middle of the torso and your take on the sleeve and back folds. The hair and face look really nice, i don't know how you manage to draw glasses from that angle. Your title is also hella fine and i think this would look awesome with a detailed background !
I gave this a 3 for originality because the concept of Homestuck is pretty widely spread, but still man wow
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has no idea what's going on and thus cannot critique properly D: However, I will say that I really like the folds in the clothing and shading, too.
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well its not done yet dummy so duh
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I'm terrible at critiques and you probably know more than I do anyways, but it looks hella, yo.
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thank you! ; 3 ;
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I really really like this, it's pretty fantastic so far.
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