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Published: 2011-01-22 10:45:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 658; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 2
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I was messing around with rain effects and learned how to create a smoke effect which was really easy. My OC isn't afraid of getting burned in rain, which obviously makes him a complete idiot. I also was trying perspective again, I'm not sure if I made it just right but I guess it looks ok but still isn't exactly good.Cromesethos (c) me
IZ (c) Jhonen Vasquez
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I think polluted rain burns them worster and faster than regular clean rain.
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oh. huh...now I'm gonna have to think of a way around the weakness to rain...
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I wouldn't get rid of the Irken's original weakness other wise it turns the character into a sue...and that's the thing you want to avoid. My Oc can die hundreds of ways because he just regular, but he's also not right in the head so he'd most likely come back to his base looking like a overcooked and burnt piece of meat or a piece of burnt toast. XP
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I've got it! Der'an always wears his armor, so it doesn't matter if he's in the rain or not, Rem's toughened skin resists the rain for the most part(prolonged exposure too rain will start to burn his skin. his Max. time in the rain is about an hour before he starts sizzling). Tana wears a cloak to keep herself dry. That solves that dilemma.
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Don't you like hurting your characters with tough love, I like hurting them. It's fun to see them depressed and gives them some depth in their personality XP.
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I'm about to turn the tide in my writings about Rem and Tana. I just need to create a villan that's just as awesome and powerful as they are
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Well I surely don't know, I don't make my characters over-powered and if I did come up with something it'll be the most Gary-stew like character ever. I'll like to see you do some torture scenes or your character being hurt so that they don't seem invincible. I have a unfinished pic of Crome bleeding and my OC Nix beat up badly, which shows they are very prone to getting hurt, I hope this feedback is helpful.
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Well, Rem's weakness is emotion, so maybe I'll make the Villain an old friend of his. yes, I know it's cliche, but it's all I can think of at the moment. I might gonna post a story soon with Tana getting beaten almost to death. maybe I have been getting a little bit too...carried away with my OC's
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Naw you just need to fix their abilities and weaknesses, and my OC Crome is weak with emotion also and a ton of a lot more not just one weakness, many but not so many weaknesses that they become another Gary or Mary-stew which are the ones that are supposed to be so weak you just feel sorry for them. But I think they are okay, they seem like good characters, they are just too over-powered.
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Yeah, I know. I'm just trying to think of how to reduce their power without reducing their badassocity. I can start by making Tana a lot less resistant to damage, and Rem's big weakness is electricity(thus, a taser is a good weapon against him). Xeras is also about as woundable as a normal Irken elite. his main weapon is fear. I mean, If you see a tall, black robed Irken with tentacles coming out of his back, you'd most likely be scared shitless and It's hard to fight him when you're frozen in terror
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Looks mystic
Seems like he have not very long time to burn his skin ++
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Lol, he most likely comes back to his base looking like a piece of burnt toast before he heals back to normal XP
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If he don't have his base on one mile to go, he need to find shop with anty-rain cream or something Oo
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Oooooh anti-rain cream, He'll probably go to a store if they sell it, it just can't have Zim's face written on or printed on it or he'll just scowl and continue walking back to his base. Lol, he probably wouldn't walk a mile away from his base, mostly less but he'll still look like he was thrown in a toaster XP
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Anyways he need to hide somewhere 
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Yeah it's not good burning like that but since he's mentally disturbed and isn't really sane he doesn't care.
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even of he's body will be destroying? Oo
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Yeah especially when he's depressed
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But when he will come back from depression, then situation with his body could make new depression for him, yes? Oo
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Could, but he still rests and lets himself heal for a period of time, and since he is a freak his body has already given him depression.
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Too sad to have this life 
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yeah he is depressed and shows it by dong crazy insane and stupid things
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Did he feel sad about that things after time?
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I think he somehow regrets it and becomes upset after he is released from his second time in a asylum, so instead of being a complete sicko he just rebels against the Irken armada, while keeping to himself and being mostly isolated by himself.
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but isolation is not good too if he can hurt himself like under water ;_;
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being underwater can kill him, but he seems okay and extra stupid in rain. Yeah that's why he's supposed to be getting more social friendly in the future of my OC.
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Pain from rain make him extra stupid? Oo
But what will make his character change?
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Most likely experiencing and learning that everything isn't everyone's fault for his misery and he'd probably change entirely once the control brains are destroyed.
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Con: *puts on a rain coat* man it's raining -.- *it rains on an irken running around screaming...* *bursts out laughing*
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Crome: *snorts and stands there as the rain continues burning him, while cracking a snicker as the random Irken tries to find shelter*
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Con: *still laughing...sits down under an umbrella...watches as a crowd of irkens run around screaming trying to find shelter*
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Crome: *sticks out his leg and trips and passing Irken into a puddle while watching the Irken scream and grins evilly*
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Con: *gets up...throws a rock at a irken...the irken gets hit and falls into a puddle* heh *grabs the irkens neck and pushes him into the puddle...drowning him* ehheheheh *the water still hurts con* nggh..*wipes in off on a wall*
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Crome: *walks behind and another Irken smoke trailing from behind him and shoves a Irken face into the water, holding onto his head and stabbing the Inken in his back* What are you doing in the rain, may I ask?
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Con: i just came back from a mission..then it started to rain... which sucked -_-
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oh wow this looks good
and you nailed the smoke
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Thanks and yeah the smoke was pretty easy XP
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^^ cuz yer awesome
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oh wow this looks good
and you nailed the smoke
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