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Character from The second With the Bears, Redeption!The bakground's pretty lame and I know the logs under the fire are not at all realistic, but my computer was about to poop again.
So anyways, just crituque mainly on the anatomy and shading and stuff, cause this was the first time had to shade with light from a fire.
Thanks a bunch!
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to MrSenplz [2011-11-09 16:38:23 +0000 UTC]
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MrSenplz In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-11-09 19:30:38 +0000 UTC]
Not mine. I didn't raise him.
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to AndrogynousRabbit [2011-09-02 13:44:51 +0000 UTC]
Ummm... he got lost and... yeah, can't reveal anymore!
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AndrogynousRabbit In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-09-03 04:49:42 +0000 UTC]
oh ;~; poor thing
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to AndrogynousRabbit [2011-09-07 15:00:54 +0000 UTC]
He'll be okay!
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shadow-hobo07 [2011-08-26 23:56:38 +0000 UTC]
anatomy and shading are epic! end of story, that's all there is~
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to shadow-hobo07 [2011-08-27 13:33:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch!
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shadow-hobo07 In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-08-27 14:53:08 +0000 UTC]
lol you're very welcome ^.^
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Flamingfoxes1 [2011-08-26 20:41:18 +0000 UTC]
the SECOND one? why have i not read the first! D: awsome pic btw. love it
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to Flamingfoxes1 [2011-08-27 13:34:14 +0000 UTC]
Becaaaause, I'm not etirely done with it!
But thanks a bunch!
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Flamingfoxes1 In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-08-27 18:27:04 +0000 UTC]
let me know when ur done
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Foxler [2011-08-26 20:08:22 +0000 UTC]
me likey!
I obviously don't know the storyline behind it but it looks all stranded-y 'cause of the bandages and such...
My thought was that it looked quite rugged and so my only moan is that everything could be a bit grimy-er
still liking it!
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to Foxler [2011-08-27 13:35:02 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Yeah I'm being stingy on the background of this pictures.
And yeah that makes perfect sesne, there's still not enough detail.
Thanks a bunch!
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Foxler In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-08-27 22:10:17 +0000 UTC]
sorry if I'm too critical...
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Colbatros [2011-08-26 18:34:23 +0000 UTC]
... he got some of his fingers cut off? *shivers* Eeeeeeeeewwwww.
BUT. I really love this. I don't know why, but the fire looks awesome. The pose is great too, and the fact that you can't see all of his face just makes the whole thing even better. Good job!
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to Colbatros [2011-08-27 13:35:43 +0000 UTC]
Yes! But they had to so the rest wouldn't fall off or something.
Thanks a bunch!
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Colbatros In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-08-27 18:48:04 +0000 UTC]
Oh... They were like burned?
Welcome!
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Malusdraco [2011-08-26 17:19:09 +0000 UTC]
woah this is powerful!
it's pretty cool!
the only ting i would say you should change is the shading...
firelight is pure light and is very very bright
so the shadows would be a lot darker
also don't be afraid to add some red and yellow highlights where there is no shadow
i hope that was helpful!
and other that that it looks great!
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to Malusdraco [2011-08-27 13:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch!
Oh okay, yeah, that'd make sense!
Thanks again!
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melistopheles [2011-08-26 17:08:21 +0000 UTC]
My only major comment is to make the lighting a little 'warmer' by accenting the orangey glow on his shirt, hand, bandages, etc. but otherwise good!
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to melistopheles [2011-08-27 13:36:30 +0000 UTC]
Okay, thanks a bunch!
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Masanohashi [2011-08-26 17:01:14 +0000 UTC]
yay, that bonfire looks very nice
so good colours ^_^
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Masanohashi In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-08-27 17:11:28 +0000 UTC]
you are always welcome
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WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-08-26 15:24:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh my... I just want to run over and glomp him and huggle wuggle him!!!!!!! I think it's the bandages...maybe?
The anatomy is really good!!! The feet are a little too small/short though, they should be roughly the length of the arm from the elbow to the wrist. His hands look stiff, but I think that works because of what happened.
Awesome job! I can't wait to read this part of the story!
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-08-26 15:32:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch! Yeah feet aren't my speciality.
And okay, glad the hands work out then
Thanks again!
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Horrorshow1313 [2011-08-26 15:18:42 +0000 UTC]
i like this.. it's simple but still says alot
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to Horrorshow1313 [2011-08-26 15:19:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch!
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