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Click the paragraph botton-the one that looks like a PI stared at the man across from me. My chest ached from where his sword sliced through the poor protection of my leather armor. He stood there, ignoring the few wounds I gave him, watching me carefully. I have to say I had thought we were even. But as the fight progressed, I knew he was stronger.
I slowly circled around him, preparing to attack. He mimicked my motions carefully, showing no emotion, no hint of being tired. Damn him. This fight has been going on for so long I don't even remember what we were fighting over.
I let out a yell, lunging for him. He blocked my blood-red sword with his silver one, a black head of a dragon on the hilt. We tested each other's strength, the blades grinding against each other. I felt my muscles bulge in response to his strength overpowering me. I quickly spun to the side, breaking the contest, then swung at him. He barely dodged, his cloak getting ripped by my sword.
We traded blows, neither of us backing down. I hoped with all my heart he would, just out of exhaustion. I didn't know if he'd attack me, even if I surrendered. He looked like the kind of guy who would never stop.
I yelled out as pain laced through my leg. He stepped back as a fell to the floor, clutching my bleeding thigh. I groaned, pressing against the wound, applying pressure. I glared up at him, daring him to finish me off.
He stood there, looking down at me, still with no emotion. I've never fought anything like him before. Maybe he wasn't even human. His ears were pointed, his eyes red. Was he a demon then? I slowly picked up my sword, and tried standing. I yelled and fell back to my knees. I pressed the wound again, my hands covered in blood.
"Well?! You just gonna stand there?!" I spat at him. He just watched me, not saying anything. "You won! So finish me off!"
"I had no quarrel with you. I am sworn to protect my King and his family," he murmured.
"What that shit in the red coat was a Prince?! Could have fooled me!" Was that disappointment I saw in his face?
"Yes, Prince Kjhaag can be… hard to deal with, but attacking him was-"
"Did you hear what he said?! That I'll never amount to him because I have a freak for a father?! Helloooo, at least I don't smell like a f***ing girl! He's just-"
"I understand. But you attacked him because of mere words. And it is my duty-"
"What he can't defend himself?!" I groaned, the pain in my leg feeding my anger.
"He is a Prince, not trained in-"
"What do you think I am?! I'm a Prince! And the damn general! And he thinks he's better than me?! What can he do?!" He opened his mouth to speak. "Nothing!" I yelled. "Absolutely nothing!" I yelled, tying the ripped fabric from his cloak around my leg.
"I will leave you here with a warning. Do not attack him again." He turned and walked away, leaving me on the ground with a f***ed up leg and an unquenched thirst for blood.
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Comments: 24
RobotsWithCookies In reply to MrSenplz [2011-11-09 16:36:37 +0000 UTC]
Why don't you fight Dsvarg then.
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to MrSenplz [2011-11-09 17:07:41 +0000 UTC]
Yes, it will be epic.
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to shadow-hobo07 [2011-07-20 14:51:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch!!!
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shadow-hobo07 In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-07-20 21:19:49 +0000 UTC]
you.are.welcome ^^
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to Malusdraco [2011-07-20 14:52:00 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... he's probly the strongest character but... he has some mental problems. I think.
Thanks a bunch!
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Malusdraco In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-07-20 15:41:06 +0000 UTC]
really? interesting...
You're welcome!^^
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to Malusdraco [2011-07-20 15:42:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... they'll show up later though.
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WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-07-19 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]
This made me like Kovaan that much more now. Especially now that he's bleeding profusely... I'll heal you, Kovaan! Or maybe Sophie can?
Guess who I suggest that you fight, Kovaan! Guessss!!!
But yeah. Kovaan is quickly becoming one of my favorites!
Awesome job describing the fight! I like how he got lost in thought and paid for it. Maybe he'll learn next time?
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-07-19 16:21:01 +0000 UTC]
Awwww... he appreciates that!
I'm gonna make their fight so depressing! Hey, I should kill one of them.
He better. I don't want Gabriel my only main protagonist.
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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-07-19 16:30:03 +0000 UTC]
Yay!
YES!! Kill one of them!! Who do you want to kill? You have permission to kill Sophie, and either way, it would help you; writing a scene where he kills someone close to him (BIG HELP THERE) or a scene where he dies!
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RobotsWithCookies In reply to WolfPawDragonClaw [2011-07-19 16:30:33 +0000 UTC]
I don't know.... we shall see...
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WolfPawDragonClaw In reply to RobotsWithCookies [2011-07-19 17:16:13 +0000 UTC]
Please kill someone.
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