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Published: 2018-04-23 21:19:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1286; Favourites: 156; Downloads: 3
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Owed painting for Duchessun you gave me new lifealt vers's:Β
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HOLY MOLY GUACAMOLE ROYALIN!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO PRETTY!!! WERE DO I EVEN START!!!!
I lovvveeeee how this came out so much ;;; the background, the shading and sunny all look so good!!!!!!!Β
I love how sunny looks in your style sOOOO Much!!! She looks like a little princess!!!!
And the way you drew the sky is sOOOO PRETTYΒ
This is just!!!! So cute n' pretty!!! I love it sm β‘β‘β‘β‘
Mimi is all yours <33 can't wait to see you draw her!!!!!
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okay so don't mind me, i'm just gonna leave my critique here.
i think the colors are too bright. there's barely any contrast and it makes it hard to make out some elements. i think the character should.. i don't know how to put it in words.. stick out some more? not that its bad, it just blends in into the background a little too much.
i think the mountains are a little too blurry, and i get that you want the focus to be on the character, but that doesn't look like that in real life.
there's not a lot of shadows visible and it makes the whole thing look a little.. flat. maybe try using some filters to make the colors work better together? i don't know man, the whole thing is too bright for me.
on the other hand, i really love how you drew the character! you're one of my inspirations and you're style is simply adorable. the flowers look great too!! the grass is nice and i like what you did with the different shades of green.
okay, that's all coming from me!!! i sure hope you have a really good day!!! <3
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Thank you so much for the critique! From staring at this image for the past few hours I completely didn't notice how bright the colours actually were, and once I adjusted the contrast I screamed at how much better it was to my eyes!
I'll definitely think of that the next time. In black and white the character really does almost disappear in the background.
I'll add a version with more contrast in the different versions but thats all I can do for now! When I paint again Ill definitely concentrate on that!
And again, thank you so much for criticising my work, it really means a lot to me and i really dont get comments like this much which would make me much happier if i did get more, i want to improve, yknow !
Hope you have a sweet day too β₯!!
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aaah you're welcome!!! <'3
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OOOOF YOU!!!
ily more heh!
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