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Published: 2011-01-09 14:25:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 232; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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In COLOURFUL Ribbons Of Blood..WOW.
The ORIGINAL drawing ([link] ) was 8.41MB.
Now I've coloured it, it's only 812kb!! How do they shrink?!
Anyway - This is the MOST detailed picture I've ever done, and I'm VERY proud of it!
However. If anyone has any to give, I would like some critiques.
Can't help feeling there's something wrong with it.... Maybe it's that the sign's lacking shadow/s even though it's at night...?
EDIT - Now I've finished what my first critique said - and I'm now EVEN MORE proud of it! Thanks for the tips!
Still, I love this very much.
Merry Belated Christmas! Lol.
Btw - wonder why the blood's going down the signs at an angle? I think it's just windy.
And sorry about all the different fonts on the signs, lol. Just tried to follow MY writing. XD
And yes, the ground is supposed to be white (but it's night-time so it's dark) - it's SNOW.
EDIT - I also give this as a 'goodbye' gift to mi hermana, ... 'Cause I'll miss her lol.
No, really Ives, I will!!!!!!!
Plus, I couldn't think of anything better to give ya'....
This and original picture (c) Me.
Batman Song/Musical (c) Jim Steinman
Batman (c) Bob Kane
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Heheh, yep!
Thank you! ~bows~
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^_^
Oooh, I see Toothless!
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~cuddles~ Toothless!!!! ^_^ <333
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You tease me!!! ~cuddles Toothless~
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I wanna fly with him.... <333
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Wouldn't it be great to fly with Toothless?
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yes yes.. that would be so cool
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Three friends all flying together. ^_^
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O.o You hiding something....?
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Taking time to give a critique which I'm not good at, but here goes.
Something that you've done really well on is the writing, especially without a tablet! Its so clear and easy to understand with your own writing.
I also love the blood going down the signs and the effect you gave it, really good for something done on paint. Although, you could have had a pile of blood at the bottom on the sign as well, blending in with the snow.
You need to do a lot more detailed pictures like this, it's such good practice. <3
I'm sure it might have been slightly darker, and perhaps you could have some darker shadows coming from the front of the sign, with them created from the bat signal.
I'm also not sure that all of the lights within the city would be off, there may be some lights on, unless they're all off for some reason. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Over all, good picture, keep up the good work and hope this helped.
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Wow, thanks!
Oooh, gimme a few minutes, I'll put a pool of blood by the ground below the sign, thanks!
I thought so - I've just never thought of any so detailed before! ^_^ <3
Where abouts would it be darker?
From the Signal.... I'll see what I can do!
Well... I'm only making things up from the song (Should I give a link to the lyrics?) but I'm guessing that every other light in the city is off 'cause that's what Joker's doing... Hence the blood on the Signal too...
Thank you so much!! ^_^
It helped ALOT!!! <333
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I think the shadow of the sign would be coming from the front of the sign, coming off the picture.
I thought so about the lights, I was just making sure though.
I'm glad it helped.
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So I guess I'll make the sign surface a lil' darker too. Thanks. ^_^
You were right! ^_^
You should be.
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