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Published: 2010-08-15 11:35:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description This is the pic I was talking about, yes, I took the pic with my cam so it's small, heh.

Could you say what I can maybe do to improve it....?

Thanks, Shark. ^_^

PS - Do you think the fronds are OK, flattened back to show his emotion?
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Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 17:13:15 +0000 UTC]

Bravo! If you're looking for criticism, I suppose that you add more of a bend at his neck and his head slightly flatter. Other than that, you really got him down!

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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 17:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Hmm... Trying to visualise what you said...
I'll try but I might need a little reference.
But if you're busy with other drawings, I'll understand.

But thanks. ^_^

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Sharkluvr In reply to RubyDaSquirlz [2010-08-15 18:35:31 +0000 UTC]

Hm...[link]
see how his neck curves a little it almost goes horizontally, then bends down. And his head slopes down quicker.

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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 18:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Hmm.... That's from a complete side view.... I'll see if I can do it from the angle I'm hoping to draw him at.

Slopes down.... Hmm. I'll have to work on it, lol.
But thanks.

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Sharkluvr In reply to RubyDaSquirlz [2010-08-15 18:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Trust, me, that was the hardest thing to draw on him in my opinion. Once you got that down, you're good!

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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 20:10:08 +0000 UTC]

So, out of 100% here, how good am I?

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Sharkluvr In reply to RubyDaSquirlz [2010-08-15 22:03:58 +0000 UTC]

Hm...maybe 99.9 percent? Possibly higher.

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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 22:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, heheh, cool.

I'm attempting what you told me right now, lol. Just not too sure (even with the reference) how to flatten the face. =S

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Sharkluvr In reply to RubyDaSquirlz [2010-08-15 22:28:36 +0000 UTC]

alright

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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 22:36:16 +0000 UTC]

So how do I flatten the face....?

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Sharkluvr In reply to RubyDaSquirlz [2010-08-15 23:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Hm.....try to draw his head and neck from different directions. It helps.

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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 23:42:19 +0000 UTC]

I am. Well, actually I'm messing around with that one angle, so maybe I'll try more angles XD

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Sharkluvr In reply to RubyDaSquirlz [2010-08-15 23:43:20 +0000 UTC]

okayz

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RubyDaSquirlz In reply to Sharkluvr [2010-08-15 23:50:00 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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